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Reviewer: Itgirl94 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your story, I can't wait to read more, I hope you put the following chapters up soon. Can't wait!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
When do you think there will be more chapters put up cause this story is great
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
'As Jacob led them up the mountain range; the one suggested by their driver Akiak, Renesmee started feeling a little unsure about the location. It wasn’t the region Carlisle instructed them to hunt in but Jacob felt confident they would be safe.(...) The Cullen’s held a treaty with their tribe, much like the one they had with the wolves. They always stayed within their own territory however and never caused any problems for the Bears.' Another tribe of shape-shifters. Very cool!! But I think Carlisle was wrong when he hid it from Jacob and Nessie. If there was a treaty with the Cullens, they had the right to know. They are part of the family, damn it! :-(
'Unexpectedly, the bear stopped in his tracks. The other three also ceased fighting and backed off of Jacob. He was bewildered by their actions until he saw a large man walking towards them - someone he recognized. “Stop!” the man ordered. It was Akiak. He was accompanied by another tall native; both wearing what appeared to be tribal attire made from animal skins.' Aha! I knew you were planning something special for Akiak. He was too charismatic to be wasted on that single scene only. :)
'Reluctantly, she allowed Carlisle to run some simple tests on her. He’d brought an entire apparatus of medical supplies with him, running blood and urine tests, the whole nine yards. Jacob was surprised he didn’t have his own personal portable x-ray machine on hand with him.' Hahahah! Good one. Hmm, but I'm not convinced with the result of the tests. I know you are up to something with that untimely bleeding. :-/
I'm as excited as Nessie about their new (possible) friends. Hope to hear about them soon. Good chapter, 702! ^_^
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
oh cool!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
'Seth finally had the place to himself now with his mother and Leah both gone giving them the privacy they desired.' I can't remember what happened with Leah. Did she finally go on with her plan of leaving La Push, Sam and Emily behind?
'“How about, August twenty-seventh? It will still be warm enough for…” “No!” she loudly interrupted.(...) “It’s my birthday,” she said reluctantly. It was the date her family was murdered and also the date she was born a vampire.' Man! Of all the rotten luck...
“I want to marry you…today.”(...) “But… what about the wedding…and Alice…and all our friends?” “We can still have one for them. This is just for us.(...) Then we pick a later date for the families so they have time to plan something. Maybe October?” But Seth fixed things nicely. Halloween is funny perfect, by the way. So perfect that he should have thought it in the first place. :-]
'“Hey wait…where’s the cake Tara?” Alice interrupted. They all looked at Tara, waiting for an answer but Seth suddenly spoke up. “I um…actually already ate it.” “Already? The whole thing?” Edward groaned from behind them. There were several moments in life he wished he didn’t possess the ability to read minds and this was one of them.' LOL!!
'Bella was already on the other side of the table as she chased Emmett. He headed for the front door as he laughed, too. He still loved getting under her skin whenever he could.(...) Bella still had a strong arm over Emmett and managed to get him in a head lock until he finally had to give in and apologize.' Hahaha! Very funny. But he let her do that, right? :)
“Tara, please tell me you’re not contemplating some sort of suicide mission with the hopes that I would support this action.” “No, I would never ask you for such a thing.” Tara knew Carlisle would never consider following through with such a task. “But maybe I’ll find someone that will.” Ack! I should have know this was her plan. Hmm, I wonder if Nessie ever thought about the issue... :(
'“You’re like family to us, Seth, and pretty soon, you will be, too!” (...) At that moment, Seth realized he would be their son-in-law.' Do you believe I didn't think about it this way until Seth realized it? But that is right; Tara is a Cullen now. ^_^
“Honestly Tara, I truly regret even telling you that story about me in Italy.”(...) “Well I guess this means I can scratch you off the list of people I was going to ask for help.” “Yes! And don’t think about asking my brothers and sisters to help you proceed with this absurd plan of yours either.” Not that I want it to happen, but Edward is not the one to talk against Tara. He always made it clear that, if anything ever happened to Bella, he would be close behind. Double standards much? :-/
Ah, but their eloping, and the subsequent "honeymoon" on the beach, was a good counterpoint to all the drama. I'm very eager to know what lies ahead, 702. :)
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
mmmm. I love it!
Reviewer: Shel (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read your story on your website and I was wondering when the next chapter will be up
Author's Response: I only have 13 chapters done so far. I'm hoping to get it finished this summer or NLT BD2.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
'Though Carlisle offered to let them stay at Esme Isle, Jacob decided it would be much too awkward staying in the same place Renesmee had been conceived.' Ack! Carlisle really didn't think before making this offer. They would probably still smell Edward and Bella there. P-)
'Akiak quickly applied his foot to the brakes making the car come to a screeching halt. Jacob and Renesmee were tossed forward a little bit before their seatbelts locked in. Jacob instantly put his arm in front of his wife to protect her even though she was safely buckled in.' Not that she would be hurt, with that hard skin of hers. ;)
“Wow, Jake look at that guy!” she squealed excitedly from the back seat starting at the large beast. “Hmm, wonder what those taste like?” “I dunno, maybe we’ll find out.” “Oh, you guys like to hunt?” Akiak asked. “Oops” Heheheh!! Yeah, oops. :)
'“Jake! What’s your problem? This is our honeymoon. I want to enjoy the experience without any of this, okay?” “I understand Ness, it’s just that we don’t know what could happen. Edward and I think this is for the best.” She suddenly froze and tensed up. “What?” “Oh crap!” he thought.' Uh-oh, another oops! Heheheh! But I get it. They are still traumatized with what happened five years ago, aren't they?
“Know what I like?” “What’s that?” “That I finally get to touch you.” She chuckled. “It was a long wait for you huh?” “Five years. That’s a long time for a grown man to wait. I feel pretty privileged though, not having to wait eighteen years.” Indeed, bro, indeed! And he got off the hook with an extra bonus. Edward and Bella were really generous to allow him to cut two years from his waiting. X-)
'Each climax was even more intense than the first. After her fifth, he could barely get enough oxygen in his lungs to continue on.(...) “I just can’t believe you can go on this long,” he huffed. “Well, I suppose we will just have to work on your endurance training so you can keep up,” she teased.' Wow! Heh! Looks like hybrid's stamina trumps Wolf's. :-P
'“I’m okay! It’s probably just my period. It must be early.”(...) Jacob stepped out and closed the door. Then he went into the other room to make a phone call.' Ok, that was way weird. I guess it's no use to ask what is going on, is it? :-]
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
*crumples up laughing ass off* Oh poor Jake. I thought he would have figured this out already! LOL
This is an awesome start to the story and I eagerly wait for more!
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