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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 116: Edward

oh my ...he gave her a ring ...a solid circle of gold to promise her when he gets out he will be able to offer her forever ......after coming home metting the parent....and asking her dad .....our boy is a stickler for tradition ....

and a kitten  omg he is so romantic some times I could just cry ...and her cooking for days so he won't have to eat take-out or cooking for days so she doesnt have to think about leaving him ....will tommorow be a tissue alert day my heart is breaking for both of them but they both are being responsible the both have jobs to go back to and she has to go home and make her home ready for him to come back to ....there that in its self should  keep her super busy....finding a place for his baby grand ....sexing up her bedroom and the photos ....the white dress is  perfect to send to his lawyer as an engagement  photo ...oh hell yea ...lets send one to the super bitch and say.....bet ya wish  this was you .....mean huh ....

thanks so much for the 2 double postings I was having a bad day and although it made me cry I loved every word of this beautiful story

tommorow will have me crying right along with the girls as they say goodbye to their men ...is it tommorow yet

Reviewer: cmhferreal (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 116: Edward

Adore this story. I so rarely review, but this is the second time on this. Keep up the amazing work! This story explains so well the emotions from a soldiers perspective. Being one myself, I know how hard it is to leave family, especially my three kids and husband. Although I'm a seabee and we are quite badass

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

I have to do wash now!  LOL!  Well, I think even though parting may be tough, phone time is going to be sexier than ever!

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

Who wouldn't like a double post, especially one like we had today? Crazy

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

Who wouldn't like a double post, especially one like we had today? Crazy

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

My monday was much better with this double post :) it was a VERY nice treat.

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

formal pictures, this is going to be good!

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 109: Bella

I haven't but maybe wouldn't mind in the future. Who knows it could be fun. Reading about it is fun too lol

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 111: Bella

yup, Sarge loving equals reader on the floor in a pile of goo

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 110: Edward

sweet ever loving, loving!

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 109: Bella

ice cream fore play yummmmm

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

This story has become like my "fix" need it everyday and today it was doubled so thank you ladies for that.  Edward is just plain hot, no other way to say it.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

as always thanks for the souble post!

Reviewer: rainbowgurlie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

So I found this story a few days ago on my phone, but it wouldn't let me review it.I finally sat down this morning to make sure I posted one. So here is my first review ever!

 

This story is fantastic! I can understand just about everything that's going on (military wife myself). Even my husband, who isn't a fan of Twilight, agreed that the way you guys wrote this and the story itself is wonderful. I've never really found a story that I could relate to as much as this one. I'm glad you guys update everyday because I think my little head would explode. Thanks for writing this!

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

well i for one am not complaining how this story is going or how long it will be....i am to busy of the visual of sargeant.....swoooonnnnn....thanks again for the double post today....see you tomorrow

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

I have to say, Edward realizing that the fourth is coming, and that Bella would be gone, awww, almost broke my heart. I know it's only three months , but to new love, it's a lifetime! Hell for me, it's a lifetime, haha! The girls tpdrinking their wimpy coffee, haha! Love how Bella teases him about chewing the beans, lol! Funny stuff! The pictures sound great! Interesting how all the little kisses, to her forehead, to her tattoo, to her stomach, always make me smile! So perfectly sweet!!!! Love it! Thank you for the double post!!! YAY for us!!!! Xoxoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 111: Bella

Damn, that was pretty intense. Loved it! Seems they may get a litle more adventurous someday??? Hmmm? Love it all! Can't wait for more. Xoxo. Reading on!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 110: Edward

I loved how she made Edward's fantasy come true, wearing his shirt...lol. Unbelievable! I could hear those buttons bouncing around!! now, hell, you almost put my iPad on overload, ut, ER, I'm not going to stop reading, lol. LOVE IT!!! Reading on you generous girls!!! Xoxo

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 109: Bella

Yay!!! 4 chapeter day.....needless to say that you are my favorite kind of day.....it is sad that their time together is coming to an end ....cant wait to see how this is all turning out to be  thanks for the great story

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 109: Bella

I can feel the humidity through your words. Damn, I wanted ice cream too!! Of course it was pretty hot just listening how these two enjoyed teasing one another with the ice cream !! Damn! And our Sarge seems jn charge, so I can't wait!! LOL!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 111: Bella

Good Lord, I love your Edward! lol

Reviewer: cmhferreal (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

From experience, I know that he probably ended earning a ton of leave when he was in trashcanistan. I wish he could call her up in august and be like "hey, I have two months terminal leave, I'm coming to you next week" or some such...

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 112: Edward

cant wait to see them get their pictures done, its gonna be so sweet!!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 111: Bella

damn, so glad i read this alone.. lol

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