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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 123: Bella

Oh God....that was hot!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 131: Bella

I would not have the nerve to do this. I would be so afraid someone would see them. I am a COWARD.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 118: Edward

Seriously you guys need to leave poor Jake alone!  If Bella is a fabulous as you say she is,,, then how can Jake NOT want to hit on her!  lol  I love Emmett and Jasper! lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 116: Edward

sniff.....sniff :(  What he said to her was beautiful...

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 115: Bella

eeeek!  Public sex! lol

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

squee I knew it! Sarge is going home for Bella's birthday! this is gonna be epic!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 131: Bella

sarge is gonna love those pictures lol

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

I definitely teared up at that! Oh I can't wait to read her reaction when she sees him in Seattle! That's going to be so amazing!  I hope y'all don't make us wait too long ;)

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Reviewer: lollyanna (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

I keep telling myself I'm not going to read these at work ... but it's like a magnetic pull.  I see the email alert come in and I have to click it.  I am so glad that no one is around me right now because I totally let out a 13 year old girl squee, but now I have to wait until tomorrow for more details.

You both are wonderful!!!!!

Reviewer: LaceyBlack (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

Aww I knew he'd try tO make it to Bella for her birthday; btw that care package he'd sent her before was adorable! And jeeze! Bella's gonna drive sarge crazy before he's out of the army for good. Happy to see such affects :) keep it going!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

YYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: timid vampire (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

oh so exciting, loving this story soooooooooo much x

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

SQUEEEEEEE! Yeah, you knew I had to do it, lol. Love it! Now, this boy is so sweet. I think she'll love her surprise visit more than words can say, and in order to make her happy, he always goes all the way out of his way, like Bella does for him. Love it! Just thinking of Edward finding a way to surprise Bella, makes me smile. I wonder how much red ribbon he can find, hmmmm? LOL!! Love it!!!!! You guys rock, every single day! Can't say enough good things! Thank you, Thank You!! xoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 131: Bella

I love the idea of the sweet pictures now decorating their home. Perfect!! Love it! The cute moments, the romantic moments. The pictures...wow, think Sarge will be so so so happy! Can't wait to see what he thinks. Yes, her birthday is nearing, and I can only imagine. These two don't do anything half assed. Love it! Can't wait for more! xoxo

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 130: Edward

I love their happy banter back and forth, clowns Sarge? omg I know whatever Sarge thinks up for her bday is gonna be good, maybe a weekend in Seattle?

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 129: Bella

What a great and thoughtful gift! as a teacher I spend a lot of my own money on school supplies for the kids, what a great story idea girls! .....mmmm I need some of those panties! lol

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 130: Edward

Love the idea of Edward responding with the guys that he is heading HOME, and that is to Seattle! He has a family now!! So wonderful!! She only has one thing that she wants for her birthday and that is most definitely NOT a CLOWN, lol. Have to agree with her on that one!! She shouldn't be donig lap dances, well, unless Edward shows up in a big RED BOW, lol. Yeah, then it would be OK. Hmmm, wonder? Nah...I know you'll always surprise us. Cannot WAIT to see what Mike does when he finally runs into the guys. He might need to change his shorts, hehe. Loving the story!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 129: Bella

Love how thoughtful Edward can be, not only to help her out with things for her classroom, but damn, also some very nice things for her, wow. I am thinking Victoria Secret? Loved it all! Love how Miss Mary is so concerned for Edward, and she's also excited to see him come HOME!! Six weeks? Hell yes! She can do it! Lots of things to do in the meantime....hmmm? If I was Bella though, she might want to watch that neighbor of hers, since she seems to have eyes for Edward already, hehe. Love the story. Reading on!!

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 130: Edward

Loved the chapters today light and fun. Thought the conversation about her birthday was funny.

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 130: Edward

cant wait to see what happens tomorrow. gotta love what bella wants for her birthday, i would love that for mine lol

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 129: Bella

loving the time jumps, gotta love sarge for all of the things he sent bella and the panties too lol

Reviewer: LunasInSilver (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 130: Edward

Please please PLEASE let us have the full schmeer on Emmett and Edward vs Mike!  Definitely looking forward to teh grovel... and then Jasper shows up!  HEH

 

*Gives pseudo-sarge puppy dog eyes and pout*  (gotta use all the weaps possible GRIN)

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