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Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
Glad he's home & that the story isn't ending yet
Reviewer: timid vampire (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
he is home! loving this x
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
Such a visual and wonderful chapter. Just being able to see inside of Edward's mind...his excitment, his worries, his feelings as people thank him over and over again for his service, and even though he is grateful, he just wants to see his Bella, and when the crowd parts...gah!! Loved it! The tears, the happiness, loved it!! The car ride back to the house, his first impressions of the yellow house, wow! Adored it! And he doesn't want to talk about Tanya, but you've got me wondering, what in the world is inside that box, haha!! Now, yes, you did save me a trip and a lot of Google searching. I had the torch, the pitchfork, and the White Pages App open, ready, so I'm glad you decided to go on, for a while longer....lol! Seriously, you guys have a great story, and I'm so excited for the upcoming chapters. Settling into civilian life.....jobs....marriage??? Kids??? Yes....all of it!! I'm sure something comes up on the fishing trip, hehe. Got us wondering!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 147: Bella
OK....I'm teary right now...good tears, but I'm tearing! They are there! They are home! Bella runs into his arms...perfect!!! Can see the crowd parting for them!! LOVE IT!!! GAH...NEED TO READ MORE, lol!!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
He's finally home!!! I can't wait to see him get aquatinted with the house. And reacquainted with Bella ;)
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well then I can't wait for the really good stuff..but you both have been amazing, its all been great stuff! This is definitly one of my favorites now:)
Reviewer: cmhferreal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
Why oh why couldn't this be a double post day! You're killing me Smalls!
Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
What a beautiful story, the more I read it the more I love it. I cried when she saw Edward it was so touching. I'm sorry this story will end, but there is still more to come and everyone should read this love story it is great. Thanks to you both.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
Squeee omg omghes home hes home hes home!!! Love love love your banter you guys work amazing together I hope you do another story concept similar to this one it was perfect every day updates banter just wow!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 147: Bella
squeeee omg omg omg their here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 148: Edward
He's home! He's Home! OMG what a sweet homecoming this is going to be, finally! So looking forward to tomorrow's chapter, gonna be some sweet sweet loving coming. Piano sex, opening that witches box, oh but baby the best is coming, Charlie!!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
These poor boys living on any fast food they can get their paws on, lol. Soon they will be eating right, and I think these boys may have to start a new exercise routine to keep those extra pounds from builging them out, not that the girls would probably complain. Had to laugh when poor Emmett figured out that he wasn't hatched, hehe. The way you write their expressions, and emotions, the eye rolling, the snickering the laughing, it really does bring the characters to life. Great job! Adore that they are getting closer and talking about their little party, just makes it seem that much closer. Yes, Tanya the Titty Slut, deserves nothing but torture for the rest of her life, and I'm sure she'll show up at some point, because face it, losers like her always seem to have a need to try to ruin other's lives. Great job.!!! Keep up the amazing job!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 145: Bella
So funny to hear about their upcoming plans, that it is finally so so close. Soon they will be like every other couple, happy and doing everyday things with family. I adored it! Can't get enough. The unpacking of the boxes, so cute. He knows Bella. She wanted one of his shirts to make it through the next nine days. The kitty stuff, lol. Got to love it!! Can't wait for their little family to start living together. Can't wait to hear what Charlie has to say on that fishing trip, hehe. These two never cease to make me smile, and you bring such a wonderful emotional side to these characters. Especially the entire Christopher side too. Made me smile that the boy is getting better. Love it! Reading on!!
Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
gotta love tanya... not lol. no telling what she put in the stuff to send to sarge.
Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 145: Bella
cant wait for sarge to meet charlie. glad to hear christopher is doing good. love sarge for thinking ahead with all the cat stuff..
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
I wonder if Tanya will try and hand deliver the box teehee.... I can't wait for Edward to ask Charlie for his blessing to marry Bella teh proposala nd I am curious to know if they will have kids of their own... I wonder if teh girls are taking teh next 5 days to cook..I kmow right before my man came home I had a few days of food already made because no way was I going to be cooking in a kitchen after he got home I wante dto spemd my time with him.
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
5 more days and counting .....
loving it x
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
Thank you!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
I can't wait:)!!!!
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
those poor guys, homesick for their girls and some real food. hang in Sarge 5 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: UldAses (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 146: Edward
Poor boys! I understand them. And they need to be careful with their wifes' food, I know my darling complains about the weight he gained because of my cooking :)
Great chapters! Can't wait for the next!!!
:3
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 145: Bella
Time is ticking away 10 days to go! I am as excited as Bella for pete's sake!
Come on home Sarge
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 142: Edward
Loved the visual of the restaurant. Perfect! The cookie symbolism of their beginning, perfect! Didn't think he'd propose without clearing it with Charlie, lol. Their farewell was perfect! So appropriate! So touching, gah! Tearful goodbyes suck, but with such a short window until they are together forever, its not so bad. They can do this. Can't wait for more. Reading on!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 141: Bella
Chocolate fun...Yummy!!! Such a great story! These two make me crave dessert in bed with my own husband!! Reading on!!! Xoxoxo
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