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Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 172: Edward

I'm sitting here trying not to tear up..he is so wonderful!

 

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

OMG I can't believe that I won't be able to get my daily fix of Sargeward after tomorrow - my life will no longer be complete - I guess I will have to continue with your finished fics on ffn...lol;;;; :0)

Reviewer: sunshine_yellow (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

thanks for a good story make some please

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Awww, no no no. Just like Edward running out of Bella's cookies!!!! Thinking of running out of your chapters is just too hard to think of right now! Damn!! Loved this chapter so much! Such an amazing first holiday together! Adored their gifts, and have yo agree with Bella on her book!! Not a pop up book for kids, well maybe a POP UP book for Edward, haha!! Loved the composition paper too! Love this damn story!!! Xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 169: Bella

Such a picturesque scene. Snow, fireplace, Edward, kisses, loveeee it! Can't wait for more, so I am reading on! Xoxo

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Loved Loved Loved these two chapters:)  Two of my favorite things...Christmas and Twilight!  Can't wait for the next two:)

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

loved their presents to each other but so sad the story is almost over!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 169: Bella

loved their first christmas together

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Heavy heart indeed. Loved the story. Love you girls.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 169: Bella

Love ya.. Love this story.

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

this was so sweet, loving, and sexy at the same time!
NO! can't end yet, need wedding and babies and stuff!
sequel please?

Reviewer: krissieli (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

NOOOO!!!! I can't believe it's almost over :( Every word has been magical and while I don't want it to end, I can't wait to read how you write their steps into forever.

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

I love this story, sorry it is ending, it was wonderful.  Thank the both of you for a great love story, between friends and lovers alike. 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

Squeee HOME!!! woot woot!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

so glad they spent time with renee, bella seemed to need it

Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

wonderfully written

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 167: Bella

love this renee. so glad shes letting them sleep in the same room.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 167: Bella

Holy hell that woman is worse then Alice of 5 hour energy drinks lol

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

Great Renee!

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

Great story, I am very glad they had a good time with Renee and Phil, which was a surprise for Edward because he was expecting Renee to be uncaring and she was anything but so that was quite sweet.  Looking forward to the next chapters, thanks again.

Reviewer: numtwelve (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 167: Bella

Excellent job with Renee. I think you really hit the nail on the head with her!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 168: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 166: Edward

Don't they get a kitty soon?

Reviewer: muzisuki (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2012 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 166: Edward

Are you guys planning on writing more when this story is over?

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