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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2012 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 12: Edward

For completeled stories I usually wait to comment but I just had to on this chapter because of the ending. Awwww I love Jasper XD hehe

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

I love a demanding Sarge! lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 136: Edward

Can I have that for my birthday?!?!  Yum!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 134: Edward

Glad Mike got a good scare!  the little weesle! lol  What a wonderful supprise!

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

THANK YOU!!!!!!! MWAHH! look forward to the next one

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

i made it! the wait was almost painful you GUYS ROCK!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 128: Edward

What a thoughtful thing for Irina to do for Edward. :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I liked the snapshots!  It showed a fulfillment after having to endure so much hardship!  Well done, looking forward to all outtakes!

Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Those were some very beautiful letters.

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I'm sitting here trying not to cry:)  I have love this story so much!!  I have to say that the moment that I saw the picture of Edward in uniform I was hooked.  But then you both wrote such an amazing story:)  Thank you both so much!!

 

And I can't wait for the outtakes:)  Whenever that will be..I will just be excited to read it!!!

Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Thank you both for such a wonderful fic! I will miss Sarge and his Bella, but have loved every step with them.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WAY TO END THIS ....ITS HAS OWNED ME SINCE THE FIRST CHAPTER ...KNOWING THAT THERE IS LOVE OUT THERE LIKE THAT ....I HOPE YOU ARE PLANNING ANOTHER WONDERFUL TALE ....I WILL MISS MY DAILY DOSE OF UNDYING LOVE AND HAPPINESS    

Reviewer: krissieli (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Although I'm SO sad it's over... that was the perfect ending. Just... perfect. I can't wait to see what you do with the outtakes though! Fantastic writing ladies - and THANK YOU!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I cried! It was so great, loved how it ended. I cant wait to see what else you two write next.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Great ending to a great story.  Thanks

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

What a great ending!!  I loved the emails.  so sad to see it end.  I really looked forward every day for the updates and read them during my lunch.  I always love a little ways into the future to see what happens.  Great story,  It will be sorely missed.

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

How fitting that this story should end with letters--just as it began. Loved your story so much. You two should be so proud. Can't wait to read the out takes. Love to you both. I'll miss you and your story.

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Just wanted to let you two know that I have enjoyed reading Sarge and Bella's story. I am sorry to see it go, but know that all stories must end. Great job ladies!!!  

Reviewer: originality (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I thought the epilogue was the best part of this story.

The story itself was a cute concept but lacked some decent conflict.

The epilogue though was a huge improvement. Well done!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Absolute genius!! Ended it perfectly, the way they actually started....by letter. So so sweet! The way they were so nervous for the wedding, how perfect it all sounded. The letters had me tearing up...honestly. It has been such a magnificient ride....and every part, we were able to relive so much, through your letters. Seeing them add to their bunch, and how they adore their children, and still adore one another soo soo much. How he sings to his family, how he helped through the pregnancies...how she adores her husband more than words can say...how proud she is of her husband...how now they can not only raise their children, but spend their days teaching together, well, after her leave of absence. Such a sweet and wonderful story of a marriage....a family...that began from just a few letters. You brought us so much joy throuh your pages. Just seeing a small glimpse into their future together, as a FAMILY....made me cry, smile and just sigh. Especially sigh. Contentment reigns. LOVED IT! Thank you both! Take a bow! YOU DID IT!!!! XOXOXOXO

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Thank you!

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

OMG this has truly been one of the best stories I've ever read. Thanks for all the work you put into it. I hope that in the future you'll maybe consider doing this team writing again?
I'll be looking for anything you both do next.
Awesome read
Thanks again

Reviewer: Sunflower (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Bawling me eyes out. I salute both of you! Beautiful!

 

Reviewer: emmathewild (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

that is the perfect epilogue for this story. end it as it began, with letters.

 

great job you two, thanks for this lovely story

Reviewer: alaskancoppertop (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

:((((( NO, I don't WANT it to end! Wonderful ride ladies, I'm gonna miss Sarge and Bella.

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