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Reviews For Coming Home
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:44 PM · On: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Good backstory for Edward, love the email format.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Short, but I get why. I hope as the relationship builds we will get more, and I love that they seem to be able to communicate so easily.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

I love the alternating POV's  and the picture thing had me ROFLOL !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 12:56 PM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Ooh, this is going to be good. LOL Gotta love Emmett and Jazz!

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

perfect that they are at the same school!  how sweet!

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 86: Edward

i am so excited i am about to poop my pants!

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 78: Edward

they are just too swet with each other!  great job on the story ladies.  i hope you do more!

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 37: Bella

*fanning self*

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 34: Edward

i am getting anxious for edward to get home....

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 23: Bella

so awesome!  i can't stop reading!  woohoo!

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Loved Edward playing the piano with Esme.  Really was a wonderful Christmas for Edward and Bella and all their friends, thanks really enjoyed this outake.

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I really miss reading this story everyday, but it was so beautiful, it made me feel joy and laughter and at times it made me cry.  This epilogue was perfect, thank you ladies for a wonderful story.  

Reviewer: trbhasspkn (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 10:57 PM · On: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

nice!  super sweet characters!

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Thanks so much for coming back!  I really miss this story.  It is one of my favorites.

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

loved it! of course! Edward fitting in so well, playing piano with Esme. Love Edward thinking of popping the question, for pete's sake Edward just do it! LOL
Just have to love the whole family and how welcoming they are. le sigh

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Thank you!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2012 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 100: Edward

 to live in Clearwater and was thinking that the resturant must be Bern's steak House!  I have been there with friends for our anaverserys weich were all within two weeks of each other.  I bet they went ot West Shyore Mall also. Hugs for reminding me of those places. - Xanath

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 59: Bella

I love this story so far. My hubby is deployed with the navy right now for another 3 months and I can relate. It reminds me of us and the beginning of our relationship and its just so cute. love.


 

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 10: Edward

Ny grandson is in a program sponsered by the Navy called Sea Cadets.  They go through training much like the military and have instructory that are usually current or former military people.  One of his trainings was under the command of Chris Riga who was calle to active duty  in Afghanistan just agter the training was completed last Christmas break.  Below is his mailing address.  If you would pass this along to others We would be so thankful.  He spent his short time home last Christmas training the kids instead of just enjoying his time with his family.  He is a really great gu8y.
CHRISTOPHER RIGA UNIT 3E (SEABEES) APO,AE 09354
Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: Bella

I met my husband of 21 years on the internet at school also.  I know what you meen about it happening fast.

Hugs- Xanath (my log on name at school)

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

sounds like a great story, as one whose grandson just returned from his second round in Iraq, makes it that much more dearer to the heart.

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I've put off reading the epi because well I just don't want it to end...  (((crying))) it's really over...  (((hugs)))

Thank you ladies for a great story and for giving me something to look forward to every day!  I look forward to the outtakes and of course your next fic! hint hint ;) 

Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 174: Epilogue

oh man, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story!!!!! I hate to see it end,. Good work and if ya'll write anything else I will be reading it.

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2012 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 31: Bella

"I didn't want to say goodbye, so instead, I simply said, "I'll talk to you again soon," and then hung up the phone, my head falling back to the couch as fresh tears filled my eyes."

that nearly brought me to tears because I know what that feels like....

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2012 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 28: Edward

I have to say I am loving this story. My fiance and I met online - no he is not in the military - but we started talking in 2006. I am from Cali and he is from the state of NY. Sept of this year will make it 2 years that I have lived in NY. My fiance and I didn't meet each other face to face until 2009. the rest is history...

i had to say all that because the story (not the military part) but the long distance part is bringing back old memories for me. especially their first chat on Skype. i remember how nervous i was and how shy...it was so thrilling and exciting and scary at the same time! Now....we are getting married and I'm the happiest ever. Thank you so much for the story!! Thank you for bringing back fond memories even though at the time, it was very hard...but it became worth it in the end =)

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