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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 155: Bella

Jen, I hope your dad is past his treatment and doing great, by now! I really laughed at Emmett kissing Edward, and the reaction that got! What a nut! You can't, cannot, I say, help but like Emmett! He's got such a sunny, child-like  way about him!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 154: Edward

Hell, girl, what part of this story hasn't been special? You girls have done a terrific job on this! Now, please excuse me as I have to go watch the guys do yard work, lol!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 153: Bella

Please tell Deb she put a huge lump in my throat with that letter from Edward!  It was so loving, and heartfelt and perfectly romantic! Bella is so lucky to have that beautiful man! And he is beautiful, inside and out, just like his Bella! They are a perfect match, truly two halves of one whole! They so deserve each other!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 152: Edward

The box of junk from Tanya was not nearly as bad as I feared. I wouldn't have been surprised if she had booby-trapped it! Probably no idea how to do it. Bella would have figured a way! I have faith in that girl! Edward is such a happy, contented man, it's a joy to read about him and Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bella

It would be no hardship to wake up to that every morning! Miss Mary was a darling and just as fiesty as I thought she would be. Coffecake and frsh ground coffee beans, yum!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 150: Edward

Well of course, they would have to stop and sleep, eat,drink, shower, etc.! That was one great homecoming! Next up, meeting Miss Mary. That ought to be a hoot!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 149: Bella

The word momentous comes to mind! They are together in their home! It just tickles me to see it! Edward must be on emotional  overload!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 148: Edward

Hallelujah! Sarge and his boys are home! That was a special moment , when Bella welcomed him home! Just exactly where they both have wanted him to be, for months!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 147: Bella

At long last, love! It's really real and the guys are home! YAY!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 146: Edward

They're almost ready, just a few more days! I bet all three are so antsy!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 145: Bella

So many things for them to experience! Shooting, fishing, wedding, all kinds of good stuff! Charlie and Edward together ought to be great! It's going to be so easy, just open the front door and he'll be home, with all his stuff around him. Most important, his Bella there to make it a real home!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 144: Edward

A marriage where one spouse is gone for long periods is no picnic, that's for sure. You have to be a real grown-up and have great faith in each other to make it. Modern technology doesn't hurt, either. Hope the guys got the stuff off with theUPS guy!Edward peobably won't draw a calm breath until he's wrapped around Bella. I'm sure the same will be for Jasper and Emmett and their wives!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 143: Bella

At least Edward got back to base safely. He just barely got the words, happy birthday, out before going to sleep. Bella likes shopping Victoria's Secret, but I think Edward appreciates the results more!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 142: Edward

The promise of it being the very last seperation is the only thing making goodbye bearable! The candle in a cookie  nearly had me in tears!  The pendant was a lovely gift and a fitting replacement for the dog tags.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 141: Bella

All that and chocolate, too, followed by shower sex! This has surely been Bella's best birthday, ever!. The onlything wrong with this weekend, is he has to go back for two and a half weeks! Good thing it isn't any longer than that, or she'd never be able to let him go!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

What an image to imprint on my brain, the two of them joined together in front of that window!  The ride up in the elevato was hot enough, but once they got to their room, that was mind-blowing!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 139: Bella

Sarge is going to have to make up his mind. He either wants to show off his girl, or he doesn't want anyone else ogling her! One or the other, he can't have both! Dinner sounded excellent, by the way.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

What a great day of sight-seeing! Living all my life in the Pacific Northwest probably prejudiced me, but this is truly the best part  of the country! Now he's taking her to dinner! Can't wait!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

Cleanliness truly is next to godliness, right, Bella? That was sensual and oh so good! May all your bathing be that wonderful!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 136: Edward

What's not to like? This is one birthday gift we can all enjoy vicariously! Lucky Bella, and lucky Sarge!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 135: Bella

The man definitely has his priorities straight! Canceling reservations for dinner is very wise! I'm thinking Bella and he will be too busy to eat for a while!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 134: Edward

Only her students giving Sarge the third degree, probably kept Bella from attacking him on sight! That was so sweet when he answered Carrie's two questions! The few words he had with Newton were hilarious. He is scared of Emmett's retaliation still, I guess! Shelly Cope is always sweet to Edward, and who can blame her?

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 133: Bella

Bella may be a bit suspicious, but only about the girls doing something for her birthday! Little does she know how much better iut's going to be! I can hardly wait!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 132: Edward

Oh boy, is Bella going to get the birthday surprise of her life! Yay! I really laughed when Edward and Jasper decided they had to tell Emmett, but had to keep him away from Bella! This ought to be great!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 131: Bella

The girls had a blast taking pictures  of Bella, dressed, undressed and just plain naked! Edward's going to absolutely love them all!

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