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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 31: Bella
What a guy! It made Bella feel so much better to talk and cry , to Edward. Wait until he sends her one of his tshirts to sleep in! That will get them both revved up, for sure!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 30: Edward
Don't know if the guys teasing was a comfort or not, but I think they mean well. It touched Edward to hear he was now considered a part of the family, something he's needed, just didn't know it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bella
I don't hate much of anything, but I make a huge exception for anyone who hurts children! There's a piece missing in child abusers, like they're not wholly human, just partially so! Loved the rest of the emails between Bella and her Sarge. Wonder what Charlie will think of all this?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: Edward
It's cute that Edward didn't want Bella to think he was bragging! Ask me how surprised I am that he told her she would have to use both hands? Not one bit!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 27: Bella
My guess isn't original, but I bet Bella's words will light a fire under Edward! Fair's fair, he does it for her, after all! As tension amps up, I bet they will practically attack each other, when they do meet in person! At least, I hope so!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 26: Edward
Sarge in the shower, now there's a picture! I want to hear the story of the threadbare army tshirt, though I'm guessing it may be her dad's?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 25: Bella
Yeah, there's always some damn fool that interrupts at just the wrong time! I'm sure they will revisit this subject at their earliest opportunity! Can't wait!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Edward
Smiled, laughed a little, and got kind of teary-eyed, too. This was such a sweet chapter. I know that isn't all there is to either of them, but this story elicits a lot of different emotions from me. It reminds me of the stories my mom told me about when daddy was flying out of Noth Africa in B-24's He made it home three times, me, my brother and my sister. Then mom raised us best she could by herself, she never remarried and was alone for fifty-four years. It's weird how stuff comes back to you!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: Bella
Are you serious? I'm gnawing on my finger nails a bit, waiting to see if the guys are all three okay! It's great that Bella, Rose and Alice have each other for support. It has to help to have close friends in the same boat , so they understand what you're feeling.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 22: Edward
I knew it was going to be back to Kandahar for the squad, but what the hell can you do about it? Now he has to concentrate on his men and staying alive, and Bella has to worry herself to a frazzle until she hears from him again. I get a smile on my face as they draw closer and learn more about each other, just can't help it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella
Just the right touch to have Jazz and Emm show up and horn in on the conversation! I too think the meet with the C.O. won't be a good thing. It's 2:30 a.m. here, so I'd best get my old bones to bed before it's daylight!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: Edward
Can't say snickerdoodles are what I would want to shove in his mouth, but that's just me! I knew they would knock each other's socks off! Just had a feeling!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 19: Bella
What good friends Bella has! We all need at least one, and some have none! It helps so much to bounce things off people who have your back, that you trust implicitly.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 18: Edward
I would be very surprised if the both of them weren't a little nervous. This is getting real serious, real fast!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 17: Bella
I have only one thing to say here. Why the hell wouldn't she love him? He's damn near perfect!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 16: Edward
Could this guy get any better than he obviously is? I doubt it, seriously, but am more than willing to keep trying to find out! I also want to wrap him up and take him home and hide him! Does this make me a bad old woman?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: Bella
After Bella admitted to wanting hot sex, and it had been a while, can't help hearing the gears meshing in Edward's head! Spinning out of control , you might say! These email exchanges are getting better all the time!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Edward
Great questions, too. Hate to think of the guys having to go back to Kandahar, but they have to do their jobs. What a revelation , when Edward told Bella of his fears for his men, that he wouldn't get them all home safely!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella
It's kind of sweet that Bella thinks she has a lot of flaws. I'll bet Edward doesn't agree! The twenty questions thing may prove quite interesting.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Edward
Maybe there's a way to introduce Mike and Tanya, sounds like they deserve each other! Still loving the way Bella and Edward are so open and honest with each other. Looking forward to the Skype session on Saturday!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: Bella
Seeing the flirty thing going on is fun and I hope it only gets more so. These two really like each other! What's not to like? They have lots in common, especially their sense of humor. If you can laugh together, you've got it made, trust me!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Edward
Definitely a mutual admiration society going on here. As long as Sarge and Emmett and Jasper stay out of harm's way and get back home, I'll be thrilled. They all would have a good time together! It's so nice that Bella and Edward worry about each other, must mean they care!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella
Love that Bella told Edward how hot he is! Way to go, girl! These two are getting so comfortable with each other, Skypeing should really be fun! The more they discover about the other, the more they both find to admire. It's cool that she offers advice, too, and always in his best interests.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 8: Edward
Love that Edward opens up to Bella, though he's usually very private. The story of Carlos is pretty damn sad, and I'm sure some of the guys wonder, why him and not me? Can't wait to see Bella's reaction to his picture and vice versa.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 7: Bella
Totally agree with you about meeting, falling in love and marrying! Met my husband through a friend, went to a Halloween party with him, and we've been together ever since. From Ocober to March, then we married, and it will soon be fifty-two years! Can't believe how time flies when you're having fun! Bella and Edward have a lot in common already, they both care very much for others, her students and his men. No surprise that she was touched by his losing his parents, or that she volunteered to be his pretend family.
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