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Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 55: Bella

Thank you!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 55: Bella

squeee Bella is a tease poor Edward but this is what happens when you pla with fire lol

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

I'm not sure what to say...I mean, I'm so freakin happy. I have to say, I wasn't aware my eyes could bulge out that big, and my hand had to fly over my mouth to cover the scream....the freakin scream that scared my dog...lollll!!!!!!! LOVE the shit out of you. I knew you wouldn't disappoint us. CANNOOOOOTTTT wait to see what Bella thinks about this! I know they aren't "technically together" but damn!!! Now Emmett and Jasper can see their women because they are married right??? OH come on, help us out here. Will Bella be able to see him, hold him, at least once??? Love it all!! Shit..so so so so so happy! Want to damn cry! Never knew a story could do this, but damn girl, there are a few authors out there that really get to me, and you guys...hell, you're in my boat now! Damn!!! xoxoxoxo Is tomorrow here yet??? LOLL!!

Reviewer: Paralaur (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

Squee! Reading this story is always the highlight of my day <3. SO excited about Sarge going to the US and to to see Bella's reaction! Just gonna slip into insane fangirl mode for a moment. "AHHHH OMG YAAAAAAY! EDWARD AND BELLA ARE CLOSER TO MEETING! :D :D !!!1!" Okay...it's out of my system (for now). Awesome work, as usual :)

Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!! STATESIDE!!!????!?!?!?!?!?! THIS IS AWESOME!!!! I WAS JUMPING FOR JOY WHEN I READ THAT!!! AND YES I'M THAT EXCITED THAT I'M USING ALL CAP LETTERS!!! :D I CAN'T WAIT FOR TOMORROW!!! LITERALLY!! LOL OMG THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!! I'M GUESSING THAT THE GIRLS ARE GOING TO FLORIDA ON THEIR SUMMER TRIP AND PRACTICALLY STAY THERE THE WHOLE SUMMER. (HOPEFULLY WISHING THAT ;) PLEASE?!?) IS BELLA GOING TO MEET HIM AT THE AIRPORT? OR GOING STRAIGHT TO BASE? OH IS EDWARD GOING TO SURPRISE HER AT HER MOTHER'S HOUSE? THE INFINITE POSSIBILITIES... :) :D :) :D 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 57: Bella

Damn...you really got me going. First Bella, then Edward...damn girls! Loved it! I knew she would make him feel better, and I guess he wasn't prepared enough, lol. Just to hear how close they are to one another, and how he is planning to make her so happy when he is out, makes me smile. He knows what he need to do now, to get his head together, so he can get home to her. Both of your writing styles are so complimentary to one another. Just flows so easily. Love the tears, even though she is sad, and now that damn care package. She might explode when she finally gets it, a piece of him. Love it....got to READ ON!! YAY xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 56: Edward

Shit...do you have any idea how HARD it is to leave a review right now, lol....but I needed to take a breath anyway before I started on what she was going to do to him. I think I'm panting just as hard as Bella (well almost) just thinking of this conversation. I can't wait to see how it all turns out next, haha. Beautifully written lemon. Loved it! xoxo

Reviewer: cullenette (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

You guys have me so addicted to this story I think I will go through withdrawl when it ends! I won't know what to do! I don't want it to end!

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 57: Bella

Hot, hot, hot.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

Wooooooooooooo!  Totally doing my happy dance right now. Can't wait til tomorrow. Any chance for early updates? I really think you should.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 55: Bella

Damn, I love a horny Bella. She makes me SQUEEEEE! So so so cute! Loves her man so damn much! Can't believe she took her lunch hour, and now to think of him home, and her taking a lunch hour, she might never make it back to work, hahaha. Gah! the whole drunken picture night, wow...not sure what we'll see. Love the damn story, as you know, so I am torturing myself by now reading on immediately, but a review is a must first.....lol. Reading On!!! xoxoxo

Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

I need my daily dose of sarge like I need my coffee!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it !!!!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

OMG!  I am so happy!  LOVE YOUR SURPRISE!!!!  can't wait for tomorrow!!!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 55: Bella

Lets hope she doesn't get carpel tunnel before he gets home! lol

Reviewer: BeccaBoo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

Yay!!!! Cant wait for the first meeting!!!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

Yay!!!  I am so excited they are getting out of the desert.  *happy tears!*

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 54: Edward

can't wait for tomorrow and yes i did get my ruler out!  LOL!!!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 52: Edward

OMG!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 54: Edward

The ShamWow was a riot!  I'm going to suggest it again....Bella needs to send him one of those wet panties....because Edward is kind of winning the whole teasing thing....lol

I so can't wait until tomorrow!  Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 53: Bella

I loved it!  I love the playful banter between these two!

Dixie

Reviewer: Sunflower (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 54: Edward

I am out of town and I wAs days behind. I was telling a friend of mine married to a soldier. I am telling her about the IED and instead of saying IED (I may have been a little intoxicated)..... I said Edward got hit with an IUD!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 54: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 53: Bella

Thank you!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 52: Edward

Thank you!

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