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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 56: Edward
Oh....my....
Reviewer: Snail (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
WOW. You girls are so clever. I have been following this story EVERY day, I commented early on how much I enjoyed the characters and looked forward to catching up each day, but I really want to thank you girls for sticking to your word and updating daily. And an extra special thank you for the double-up days, it's a bit like Christmas...
I have been following quite a few different stories and I find nothing more frustrating than getting right into a story only to run out of chapters and then not have them updated for MONTHS! I know people have real lives and other stuff to do, but it is hard when you get invested in a story and the characters become real people only to have it end mid tale never to be heard from again!
OK I have had my rant, now on to Coming Home.
I have to admit that I did wonder how these guys were going to last for another 4 months without going nuts, phone sex aside (which was really hot, by the way) but you have just blown me out of the water! And what a coincidence that the boys are being sent to Florida, where Bella was already planning a trip to... how lucky was that? LOL.
I am so looking forward to these two meeting face to face, and I wonder how Bella will react. Will she get all shy and introverted, let's face it, it is much easier to be bold and a bit risque on the phone or over the airwaves than it is face to face, or will her nerves make her bold and cheeky? And I know our big tough softy will just want to fold her in his arms and not let her go, till other emotions take over that is...
Keep up the good work Ladies, this is a wonderful concept that you have come up with and it really comes across as two different people corresponding, which of couse it is.
Cheers
Snail xx
Reviewer: KrisBowes (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
just wanted to say that i love this story, and i cant wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Bella's going to fly out... please tell me that Bella is going to fly out. I mean, the school year is almost over and Alice and Rose will MOST definitely want to see their men; so Bella will HAVE TO fly out with them to actually meet Edward, in person, face-to-face. It just has to happen.
Reviewer: twilover77 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Seriously love this story!! Keep up the awesome, intriguing writing! The girls can go visit them right?!!
Reviewer: sheepie (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was just wondering in Chapter 56 yumminess how you were going to keep them from going any crazier after yummy phone sex without seeing each other. YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
Is it too cheesy of me to confess I got goosebumps several times while reading this chapter? Im glad he and the boys will be safe now, plus, they can be visited now ;)
Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
(((Squealing!!!!))) YES!!! TytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytyTHANKYOU! And Sarge and B thank you too!
Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 57: Bella
Wow talk about roller coaster of emotions!!! Thanks it was a great ride! ;). Have I told you lately that I love you guys? Well I do. ;)
Reviewer: Sunflower (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Another stage another stAge! Yay!
Reviewer: jduc0117 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3<3<3
Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!OMGOMGOMG!!! I'm SOOOOO happy!!!!
Reviewer: just the girl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
*squee* x 1,000,000
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited..I'm doing a happy dance!!!!!
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Yipee! Can't wait til they are stateside.
Reviewer: libidubis (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Yes! I'm like a tween at a Justin Beiber concert.
This keeps getting better and better!!!!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
yippee!!!!!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Awesome!! They'll be meeting sooner rather than later
Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Yay!!!! Squeeeeee!!!!!!! Yay the boys are going state side! Omg! ThAnk you for the double updates. I wanted to wait till I finished this. Chapter to review! Wow. It got pretty hot and heavy there. Can't wait to see if the girls will take Edward's advice to heart? To celebrate? Hugs And kisses! See you tomorrow!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Squeee hell to the yeah!!!! YOU just made my week in 1 chap!!!! I am so addicted to your story and its just like wow you got me smiling stupid silly sarah! love love love!!!!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward
Thank you!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 57: Bella
Thank you!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 56: Edward
Thank you!
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