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Reviewer: vampiregirl72 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 63: Bella

Please next chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

hmmmmm i wonder what caused Bella's reaction there at the end?

As always....thanks for the great story! Tomorrow a doulble posting! YAY! Cant wait.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

I absolutely did the happy dance too!! They are out of the damn desert!!!!! Germany for a week!!! Hell yes. Almost home! Their own house??? Can women come and stay?? Hmmm??? Love it!!! Wonder why the line went dead?? Is Bella nervous about Edward going out??? Afraid that he doesn't want to stay with her?? Nah, think she may be sick again ??? Doubt it's Mike?? Hmmmmm? Damn well love to death your double postings...get ready...SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! Xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Ah, our girl is not shy when explaining her hoohaa adventures and her thoughts about Sarge. Love it!!! Yes, drinking has it's down side....belch, puke...lol! Yes, yes love the dog tags and that picture on the wall!!!! Please let her meet him at the airport! Squeeeee!!!! Love it...Need to read on!!! Happy 4th!! Xoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Ah, our girl is not shy when explaining her hoohaa adventures and her thoughts about Sarge. Love it!!! Yes, drinking has it's down side....belch, puke...lol! Yes, yes love the dog tags and that picture on the wall!!!! Please let her meet him at the airport! Squeeeee!!!! Love it...Need to read on!!! Happy 4th!! Xoxo

Reviewer: choices (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

GREAT  BREAK FROM THE BBQ, THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Thank you!

Reviewer: emmathewild (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

i love the story.

 

could it be that bella asked for a specific reason, where they could be found that evening? ;)

 

 

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

*Is doing the happy dance* ....not something great to see by no means...actually no one should be subjected to seeing it...but happy never the less!!!! Thank you..Thank you..Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

*Is doing the happy dance* ....not something great to see by no means...actually no one should be subjected to seeing it...but happy never the less!!!! Thank you..Thank you..Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

What's Bella's problem?  She isn't worried is she......

Happy 4th of July to all who celebrate!  Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Ugg..hangovers.....we've all been there! lol

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

You know what I cant explain teh ending but I feel that way too when my hubby says tehir going out for  DRINK WHILE HES GONE...  Cant wait for more happy Independance day Sarge!!

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

Happy 4th of July!  I cannot believe you all posted on the holiday... Thank you!  I love this story *sigh* :D  I bet Bella is feeling a) insecure that at a bar Sarge might find a girl or b) wistful wishing she could meet him at the bar or c) just wishing he was home, maybe a mix of all three?

You are are amazing being able to not only write this story but that two of you are doingit together.  I am so impressed.  Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. 

 BTW I have made donations to our troops each pay day for the last month and each time I do it I have thought of this story.  I Used to donate before each holiday thinking that some solider would know that someone cared.  My donations may not be alot but it is from the heart and for such a worthy cause.  I do not endorse or believe in war, But I am ever so grateful to the women & men who protect us by putting themselves in harms way daily. 

Thank you for EVERYTHING

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

lmao!!! At least they were smart teehee!!  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

Another great couple of chapters:)  I can't wait for them to actually meet!!

 

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

Hmm. Why did she suddenly hang up? I hope she and the girls are planning to be in Florida when the boys land.... get to work on that, will you? Tx. 

Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2012 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

... there's no NEXT button yet. You two spoil us. This is a GREAT story and I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

Another day closer to THE Day!  Aren't the girls planning to meet them in Florida ASAP?

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

So, the girls can't go see their guys in Florida?? They both act like they can't be togethr until October. That can't be right. Please explain. I want them to get together now.

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 59: Bella

Thank you!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

Another great two chapers:)  I remember that feeling of excitement when hubby would be coming home.  Butterflies and all!!

 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

Edwad is so so so sweet, and the love he feels for Bella is so powerful. Can't get enough! How they love one another. Have to say October and they are so much closer, gah! Thinking the girls are making a trip to Florida soon, and it won't be to see Mickey, or maybe Bella will need him to come see her for a reason!!!! Love the suspense!! Xoxoxoxoxo

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