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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 80: Edward

As natural as night and day, just seeing and talking to each other makes the bad stuff melt away! Bet Bella had to bite her tongue to keep from telling Edward the surprise!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 79: Bella

I don't think it's cruel of Bella in the least! Look at the result of her little white lie, Edward's going to be over the moon! Right after he gets his breath back from the surprise!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 78: Edward

Count me in if there's to be a poster of Sarge! On the ceiling  would be okay, but wallpapering the room would be even better!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 77: Bella

I'll bet Bella is having a hard time keeping her news to herself! She must be so excited to know that she will soon be seeing the love of her life!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 76: Edward

Just the open, honest way Edward can tell Bella what's on his mind and on his heart, makes me melt! How could it not? Big sigh!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 75: Bella

Those songs are so meaningful, and so beautiful, too! Can't wait for Edward to receive his birthday gift. You know, the one he doesn't know is coming!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 74: Edward

Good timing, with Em and Jazz distracted by the gaming system. They probably wouldn't have teased Edward too much , if they had heard what he was doing. Yeah, right!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 73: Bella

Oh Bella, you naughty girl! That picture is probably driving your man insane as you wait for an answer! Far as I'm concerned ink or piercing are just not needed, as the man is lovely just the way he is!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 72: Edward

I get the feeling Edward will really, really enjoy his birthday this year! Just sayin' !

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 71: Bella

Edward's always saying he would do anything for her, so he might just let her tatoo her ownership on his gorgeous ass! Can't wait to see what Alice and Jasper come up with for a visit to Florida!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 70: Edward

These fortunate young men are blessed with three of the most thoughtful, caring women! How nice to arrive to new linens and cookies! Rest up guys, you'll need all your strength when the girls come to visit!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 69: Bella

I may as well save my breath about Renee, she's never going to really be a proper mom to Bella. Lucky for her she has an understanding husband and a very  smart, adult daughter! Good thing Bella takes after her dad, I always thought!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 68: Edward

Selling Jasper and Emmett's middle names was too funny, not to mention profitable! Chili and grilled meat, what a combo! Heaven forbid a vegetable wanders in there somehow! Well, at least they won't starve!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 67: Bella

I have faith that plans will be worked out to allow some time together, for all three couples.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 66: Edward

All three of the girls are teachers, so they must have some time off during the summer to plot a course to Tampa! Being the smart women they are, I see a Florida vacation looming on the horizon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 65: Bella

I sure hope that call  has bolstered Bella's faith in herself. Never doubted for a minute that Edward would lay her fears to rest! Too bad they won't let the girls meet the plane, but the military has it's rules!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 65: Bella

I sure hope that call  has bolstered Bella's faith in herself. Never doubted for a minute that Edward would lay her fears to rest! Too bad they won't let the girls meet the plane, but the military has it's rules!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 64: Edward

Worry, hell! I've lived seventy years, and noticed some time ago, worry is just a waste of time and energy! I had faith  in Edward setting his Bella straight on a few things!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 63: Bella

Brave, and selfless to a fault, that's our Bella! She's just too good to be true sometimes, you know? I bet she's about to get an earful of love and commitment, from her Sarge!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

My best guess would be the green-eyed monster may have reared it's ugly head. Maybe Bella thinks some buxom fraulien will grab a hold of Edward, who knows? I'm certain he wouldn't be the least bit interested if some girl came on to him in the pub!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Perhaps a bit too much celebration, Miss Swan? The next day is never as much fun as the night before, especially if you get sick. I would rather take a beating than vomit, I absolutely hate to!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

The shirt, the dog tags and music! What could be more Edward? Even better he got cookies and music! I'm surprised he doesn't choke himself, three cookies at once could be dangerous!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bella

The excitement builds as they get closer to seeing each other in the flesh, so to speak.  Hope time flies by for Bella and Edward, Jasper and Emmett! Oh, the possibilities!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

I'm so wrapped up in this story that I got tears  in my eyes reading about the guys coming to Florida ! How wonderfil is that? I'd bet my last dollar that all three of the girls will be spending some time  near that base and soon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 57: Bella

Really makes me want to just hug both of them and tell them to hang on, they'll be together soon!

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