I have absolutly loved this story it's sweet, funny, hot and just wonderful well done guys.

Sweet story so far. Enjoying the banter. As far as acuracy ...eh...it's fiction where whatever you write is acurate. lol

While it wouldn't be a thing I would do, this was a very sweet, touching  thing to read! The reasons for what they had done and why were beautiful!

You girls wrote one of the, if not the, most amazing story! Fabulous premise, wonderful narration, gorgeous characters and wonderful, mind-blowing sex! What more could an old woman want? Not a damn thing you haven't already provided! I loved every word and am on my way to read the outtakes now! Thank you, thank you!

I nominate Sarge for sexy/romantic man of the century, and possibly sainthood! That was so damn swoony, I have tears welling as I type this! Needless to say, I'm so touched by this proposal!

The amazing gifts they gave each other just blew me away! How absolutely perfect ! As they loved each other afterward, I don't know how Edward kept from blurting out he wanted Bella to marry him! The man does have superb control, though, doesn't he?

I very much liked that Edward and Renee came to something of an understanding, over Thanksgiving. I like it even better that Bella and Edward are going to spend part of Christmas on their own and alone,

Finally got to the fantasy they shared, sex on the piano!  Edward and a piano, now that's a dangerous combination, so let's all live dangerously!

Jake the jerk, I loved how Bella tore him a new one! Boy, has Edward a real treat in store, going to Renee and Phil's for Thanksgiving! It will be different from visiting with Charlie, that's for sure! I thought, with Charlie and Sue gone, that Bella would get Edward upstairs, finally. You know they have both been dreaming about it! Man, dreams really do come true!

That damn Jake just can't seem to keep his mouth shut! I figured he would piss off Edward, bad-mouthing Bella that way. I'm glad he got his nose broken, serves him right, the weasel! The adrenaline got well used by Edward and Bella. Amazing how hot sex can be when there's a chance you may be discovered!

I never doubted that Charlie and Edward would get along well. Girls tend to choose a guy similar to their dads, if he's a good guy. Bells has a great dad, and she has a guy a lot like her dad!  The fishing trip was a total success!

It is a lot of fun firing different weapons, especially if you're any good at it. I'm guessing Charlie being a cop is the reason Bella knows how to handle a gun. It sounds like they all had a real good time at the range. Now, on to drowning worms!

No sense in rushing things, now that he's home for good and plans are being made. Slow and steady, that's the best for now. I must agree with Bella, I too, think Charlie likes Edward. How could he not? He can see the love shining out of Edward, all for Bella.