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Reviewer: angie456 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 14
I cant get enough of this story, amazing!!
Reviewer: TeamJasper04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great story! I am a little confused- shouldn't Bella want Em to be changed so they can be together forever? Won't this effect their future- maybe when she returns since Edward and Rose are gone? Cannot wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well, she been told by Jasper MULTIPLE times that if Em is changed, she can't see him ... he'll be a dangerous newborn. Jasper also told Bella that Emmet might not remember his feelings for her right aftre the change. Some memories come back after a short amount of time and then there are some that dont... ever.
ALSO, BELLA IS UNDER THE DEFINITE ASSUMPTION THAT IF THE BEAR ATTACK HAPPENS, AND HE IS SAVED BY ROSALIE, SHE'LL LOSE HIM FOR SURE TO ROSALIE. EMMETT ALWAYS CALLED ROSALIE HIS ANGEL, BECAUSE HE THOUGHT SHE WAS ONE, SINCE HE WAN NEAR-DEATH FROM THE BEAR MAULING. SO, SINCE BELLA HAS NO WAY OF KNOWING THE FUTURE, IN HER MIND, SHE DEFINITELY LOSES EMMEtTT IF THE ATTACK TAKES PLACE. THE ONLY WAY FOR HER TO ENSURE THAT SHE AND EM STAY TOGETHER, IS FOR THE BEAR ATTACK TO BE PREVENTED, SO THAT THEY CAN LIVE OUT THEIR HUMAN LIVES TOGETHER...YOU'LL SEE HOW IT ALL PLAYS OUT OVER THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS, AS WELL AS HER THOUGHT PROCESS.
Thanks so much for reading and revieweing. I''ll try to get the next chapter posted today.
Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 14
OH WOW! HE PROPOSED! A really sweet chapter. Quite emotional too. Honestly, I don't have much hope for Bella being able to prevent th bear attack as it would muck up the future too much. I also don't understand exactly why Jasper killed James as wouldn't that change the events of what occurred in Twilight? I am glad though that Jasper and Alice are together again, but I do want Bella and Jasper to return to their own time soon. ~Anna-Margaret xx
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 14
Just loving this story. It is sweet and clever and I really want to see where you're taking it. Keep up the writing!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
OMG! I knew it! How will she handle this! EEEPPP!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 13
ummmm. That was hot! LOL.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
The advantage of Bella saying yes is she can go with I want to wait for our wedding night to buy Jasper some more time.
I don't know if being engaged will stop Emmett from bear hunting. It will be interesting to see Bella try.
Reviewer: gurlygenes (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
OH MY GOSH!!! i was waiting until i got through all of the posted chapters before commenting and all i can say is keep it coming pleeease!! i am a diehard twilight fan but i love this new twist and i have always loved emmett anyways!! you are awesome and i hope you put another chapter up soon!
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love this story! As much as I want it to keep going, I can't wait to find out whats going on! >.< Do you have any idea how long this story will be?
Thanks, Marie :D
Author's Response: A lot is going to happpen with the next 3 or 4 chapter. I don't want to give away too much and say what and when. But everything that;s happened will be explained.
Thanks so much for reading and reviweing
Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
Emmett/Bella is pretty damn hot, especially with how you write them. The bear encounter was quite scary and I felt the fear Bella was filled with. I would like to know the story behind the necklace though.
Please keep the story as Em/Bella even once Bella and Jasper return to their own time.
I look forward to reading more. ~Anna-Margaret xx
Reviewer: JustineCullen90 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 13
ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER...PUBLISHED OR NOT. I CAN'T STOP READING!!
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND THE WAY IT IS WRITTEN...BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING!
IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON, I THINKI MIGHT DIE.
DID I MENTION THAT I LOVE THIS STORY?
Reviewer: SamUley77 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 13
HOLY CRAP! THIS STORY IS RIDICULOUSLY AWESOME! WOW...JUST WOW!
BEAUTIFUL WRITING AND WONDEFUL, TWISTING-TURNING PLOT. IT JUST DOESN'T GET MUCH BETTER THAN THIS!
Reviewer: ShadowStone (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 13
WOW...THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT!!
I WISH I HAD THE WORDS TO ADEQUATELY DESCRIBE HOW AMAZING IT IS. IT IS SO WELL WRITTEN, AND HAS THE MOST FANTASTIC, ORIGINAL PLOT I'VE EVER COME ACROSS.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE BRILLIANCE THAT IS THIS STORY...JUST AMAZING!!
Reviewer: VampireVenom33 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE, AND IT IS WITH A STORY CALLED, "TIME WILL TELL"
TRULY ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER COME ACROSS!
Reviewer: MissBellaSwan-Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
THIS STORY IS FRIGGIN AWESOME! I TRULY FEEL BAD FOR ANYONE WHO ISN'T READING IT.
THEY ARE MISSING OUT ON ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS EVER WRITTEN!!!
PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS AMAZING STORY!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
Alright, I am in love with this story.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG OMG OMG NO Bella you have to go back you just have to and spend eternity with EM let Rose ahve Edward its what Carlisle had hoped for please please omg please!!!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
She is falling hard. Is the wrong to be righted Emmett being turned at all?
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 12
mmmmm....*puddle of goo*
Reviewer: janetta (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 12
loving it
Reviewer: kallan0100 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
Loved it!! It's been a while since I've found a fanfiction I enjoyed, so keep up the good work! I'm especially loving Anna Beth :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMFG That was awesome!!!! Best chqp thus far but maybe because I am some kind of lemon whore teehee love love love yoru lemonade!!! I am so glad she remembered Jasper before it was too late... Can't wait for more love love love!!!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 12
What control Emmett has. Great Chapter in a great story. Don't know where you are going but am willing to follow.
thanks - Xanath
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
I'm glad they are happy
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
Mmmmm....this is getting really good!
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