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Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, I'm thrilled you really like my banner :)

Loved this chapter. So happy Edward won, but I feel bad for Tyler. Looking foward to reading more! 



Author's Response:

Very belated response, i know and I'm sorry Lisa. But first things first, I don't just like your banner - I l.o.v.e. it:D

Hope you have read the next chapter so I can't really comment much here except to thank you for your kind words as always!

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ah, nice to start to see Edward showing some emotions now, so that we can get an idea of what he's really thinking! And I hope he kicks butt!!! :)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very different story.  Enjoying it quite well.  Bella coming from a simple normal life and being thrown into this bizarre world of dominant mistresses with their butlers.  Butlers who do everything including fighting for their mistresses.  Bella awkward in this strange lifestyle and among these rich snobs.  Insults flying at her only happening when Edward is at his weekly meeting.  Lauren challenging her to a duel knowing it's going to be the butlers.  All these young women know Edward and his skills why would you challenge his mistress.  It's plain stupidity.  No matter how much you think Bella is a weirdo or loser; her butler isn't, he's a fine mean fighting machine -- the best of the best.  Your chances of success to win the challenge are low to nil for you to lose your own butler and lose your own self respect along the way.  How stupid is Lauren?  I guess she's pretty dumb.  She has lost her butler and her servant/warrior. How is she going to survive now with no one to wait on her right and left?  Now Bella has two butlers and Tyler better get a better attitude or Edward will be knocking some serious sense into him. Really can't wait until their next class so Lauren will be ridiculed by all the other girls because she has lost her butler.  Looking forward to the next chapters.  Oh by the way I like you pen name fellow Buffy the Vampire Slayer fan.



Author's Response:

Wow, that's quite the review (I love it!) I totally agree on your thoughts on Lauren, but come on, her and others tend to forget Edward's powers when they spend enough time around Bella's so-called lady like behavior. I hope your questions as to how Lauren's gonna survive without Tyler has been answered in the following chapter hehe.

I'm happy you recognized my Buffy homage, greatest band ever in a fictional world;) Oz is my hero heh.

 

Thanks for the amazing review, it really means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hey! Just found your story and caught up in one sitting! It's really interesting and unique, and I can't wait to see where you take it next! Awesome work!

 

-Haley



Author's Response:

Hi Haley

So sorry for the belated response:D But thanks for not only reading it all in one go (that can be hard and time consuming, so extra thanks for that!) but to comment as well.

 

Thanks

Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 7

Lovely story. I cannot wait to read more. Adding to my favourites now.

Author's Response:

Hi,

So sorry for the absense, life got in the way. I hope you're still willing to read when I update - hopefully - more in this year:D

 

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Bage (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really excited for this story! It's a new twist and you don't ever really know what's going to happen next. I love it! I can't wait for more chapters. Thanks for writing this amazing story!   ~Bage 



Author's Response:

hi Bage

sorry for the late response, but I just had to thank you for the amazing review - it put a smile on my face, let me tell ya:D

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

really good, and i enjoy it...but im still praying for the day i will understand this situation...thank you anyway for the time and dedication you put into writing :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

As for the confusion, it's meant to be that way because Bella is simply too overwhelmed at the moment to really take advantage of Edward's knowledge to gain more insight...will she ever get past that hurdle? We'll see.:D

Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Well,  thank goodness for Rosalie and Emmett. Now when is that girl gonna figure some things out?



Author's Response:

Hi,

sorry for the absense!

Rosalie and Emmett needed to be introduced more for upcoming plot lines and who dares to go against Rosalie Hale, eh?

As for Bella's cluelessness, it's still gonna be there for a while yet, she's still pretty shellshocked about the events that's happened to her lately and would you blame her? hehe.

 

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: daidai (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 7

really good so far



Author's Response:

A very b elated THANK YOU:D

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

This was a great chapter. I can't wait for this story to unfold.  Please update regularly.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, and I am truly sorry I haven't honored your updating request. I can give a million legit reasons for it, but it won't comfort you so all I can do is hope you'll bear it as I slowly manage to finish this tale of mine;)

Thanks again!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Grumble you NEVER answer any questions I am beginning to think you just like toying with me grumble!!!  UGH lol



Author's Response:

Hi,

First, I'm sorry for the looooong wait in reply (and updating!) but...I can't justify it really without sounding like a soap opera. Just know i'm sorry.

That said, heck yeah, I like teasing you;) It's a sadistic trait that should be found in all writers hehe. But seriously, I hope that you'll soldier through and keep your patience a little longer 'cause Bella's too confused right now to know how to get the knowledge she needs to truly fit in at St. Lucia.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

This really is a strange and unique world, but I'm enjoying reading about it.  I hope Bella comes up with a way to fix the Tyler situation.



Author's Response:

Hi,

So sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your kind words.

Yep, it's a strange world, but it's funny as well and that makes it worthwhile to me, i think. I hope you enjoyed my solution to the tyler situation in chapter eight.

Thanks again for commenting!

Reviewer: kufansvj (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

I loved this chapter. I really wish that Edward/Alice would better explain these situations to Bella.



Author's Response:

Very belated thanks for the review!

As for Edward and Alice, their knowledge will be used when Bella finally realizes she needs to know more and stop being stuck in the past. But knowing Bella, it's gonna take something very big for her to get that idea...

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is a very odd world.  I wish Bella would ask Edward more questions.  I know I could use more explanations as to how this world works.

 

I hope Tyler won't be any trouble for her.  Is it possible for Bella to find him a new placement?



Author's Response:

First of thanks for taking the time to comment and sorry I haven't replied.

If you've read the next chapter you know what happened;) But thanks for the sincere words and I promise the time for Bella's curiosity being unable to be contained draws nearer with every word:D

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

wtf!!!!  I am loving this story and yet just dumbfounded by the amount of questions taht keep adding up lol  love it!



Author's Response:

wtf indeed:D Happy that you're continuing to like this story and you should know by now that I looooove making you question things;)

 

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi! I hope you continue, no matter HOW long it takes. :D

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And I definitely will!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

Aw, maybe she could give him a little kiss for luck?



Author's Response:

lol, he wishes;) Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is such a unique and interesting story.  I'm curious to find out what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love getting new readers! I'll try to answer your questions a little next chapter;)

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love your Bella and Alice they have spunk. You have got me hooked on your story and I just want more. How old is Bella and how old is Edward? Tanya sounds like trouble. Can a butler change girls cause it sounds like maybe Edward was her's at one time. Well thanks for sharing your story with me.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

A duel! How delicious!  Of course, Edward has to win.  He is after all the best butler in the world.  But why would Lauren even think of challenging Bella with her second rate butler?  She must have a dirty trick up her sleeve.  But Edward must still win, or it just cannot be endured.  There are so many intriguing  and mysterious parts to this story; I can't wait for things to unfold. But one thing that has to be answered is whether one's butler can be one's lover.  Is that what Alice and Jasper are?  Are they lovers?  I hope Alice becomes Bella's best friend. She really needs one. Please update more often. BTW, I thinnk you have one of the best banners I've ever seen.  Its all really great.  Kudos to you

Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 6

I was so exited to see an update and you didn't dissapoint! Oh how I love interactions between them!

And we saw a bit more Alice and Jazz, after wich I still hope that they will be good guys in the end :)

Can't wait for more and may the odds be ever in Edwards favour!!! :D

S.A.

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

Its a very weird story but I like it and you tell it excellently.  You got me hooked.

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

sooo glad u are back really like this story



Author's Response:

Sooo gladyou're still here, reading my story! Thank you!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 5

in this page i can not read the chapter if i don't highlight everything, is it the format or problems with the site? love her name for the horricopter..the pink horror", jiji, she should at least let edward paint some skulls and bones to it. :)



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for All the reviews, even just the smiley faces:D They made me...well, smile and I appreciate the rating as well:D

As for the mess of the last chapter, it has been fixed and I'm sorry it was so weird. I noticed it, but it was apparently something that went wrong in the validation process:D

Anyway, just wanted to say one last thing, it's sooo hilarious that you think Bella should have skulls and bones on her Pink horry, especially since (and I'm letting you in on a little secret here too), that's one of the other young ladies preferred style. Oh, okay, it's Alice's chopper that's like that, but I just thought it was funny our minds sort of worked in the same lane here:)

 

Thanks again for all the comments!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

To quote someone that shall remain nameless, “I pity the fool.” love this line. and i can just imagine your edward holding the brush, adorable :)

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