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Reviewer: IGotObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2013 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ooooooooooohhhhhh, it's all going down now xD
This story is awesome! This whole world that Bella's been transported into sounds totally crazy! and Alice scares me to be honest. I hope Bella wins this duel!
Is there any way to put a story on story alert on Twilighted? If there is, could you tell me? I don't know how to do it :/
Can't wait for an update! :D
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
A-Team. BA Baracus. Blast from the past. NOw how about something from Knight Rider or Buck Rogers. :)
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
Thoughts :- Quite Japanesey. I've had the pleasure of going to the International Manga Museam in Kyoto a couple of years ago when they were having a Cos Play day.
Have you been to Akihabara? That's a lot of fun.
Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2013 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ah man- I ran outta chapters! I'm enjoying the story. Thanks you.
Reviewer: twilightlover127 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow wasn't sure at first but loving it! You should add this to thewriterscoffeeshop it'd be awesome if it was over there!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
omg omg wth Edward.... you need o start explaining this!!!! the more I get into it the more questions I have!!!!! lol
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
Rose should have to shave her head and wear a blurlap sack if she loses...assuming she's her usual vain self.
Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
This is one of the wackiest twilight fan fics I have ever read. I literally lol while reading it! This is based on something real in Japan?? The world is a weird place. Loving the story!
Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 10
Finally! Great chapter, Bella is finally understanding her beauty.....don't wait to long to update.
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 10
...why is Rosalie suddenly itching to duel Bella? Hmmmm... And if she loses a personal duel, what are the consequences?
Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love this story with every update. I look forward to the next one whenever that is. Xxx
Reviewer: crossan (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 10
I absolutly love this story. Thank u.
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
I guess if I was her I would wonder why I was participating in a school that allows its students to be harmed permanently. I still do not understand that. I also do not understand why nobody is telling her the rules since she seems to be a target.
Reviewer: cherry123 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
love this story!
Reviewer: aimacullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
^PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER IM DYING HERE ITS SO GOOD
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Reviewer: heart_edward (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Love this story!!
Reviewer: Thevampnerd (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
Cant wait until ch. 10,love this story..want more
Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
xoxo *.*
Reviewer: skyzel (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 9
YOU are an amaizing author. trust me u kno wat to rite. dont leave again.
Reviewer: skyzel (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
YOU are an amaizing author. trust me u kno wat to rite. dont leave again.
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 9
It's fantastic to have you back doing this awesome story again. So sorry for your lose and medical issues. But happy to hear things are on the up swing for ya. Me too! I have a great new job opportunity. By next week I should know if I got it. Looking forward to your next chapter. ;-)
Reviewer: lupigirl (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
Glad you're back, enjoying your story.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
It's alright I love this story and would wait as long as it took. Hope all is now well with you. Till next time.
Lilly
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
Your life has had as much drama as one of your stories! I'm sorry to hear of your recent hardships, and I hope things are taking a turn for the better.
You've left us with quite the cliffhanger: someone is trying to do away with Bella, and some sort of assassin/dog's body is nearby looking for the chance to get at her. Eek! But Bella won't be looking out for that....she's quite preoccupied with her fit butler :P I recommend she try to feel Edward out about his feelings rather than assume he is uninterested ;)
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