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Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:26 PM · On: The Ambassador is Revealed
ahhh love it. i am cracking up at the names. megapixel and joystick...i nearly choked when i read that LOL great chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:52 PM · On: The Ambassador is Revealed
Love the Song choice and how Edward knows all the guys nicknames that is hilarious.
Reviewer: Laira4 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Smurfin' A! Afternoon Delight!
Okay, I'm reviewing now! :) I like this story a lot (and not just because I'm a film and book reviewer myself, either!) And I have to agree about Bill Bryson - he's all kinds of awesome. You'd probably like David Sedaris, too (of course, I'm only on Chapter 13, so you might mention him later on). But I have to respectfully disagree re: Vince Vaughn and Brad Pitt. VV kind of gives off this self-absorbed jerk demeanor in all his films that I've never been able to disassociate with him. And BP isn't a bad actor by any stretch, no matter what happened on the set of 'Mr and Mrs Smith'.
Now, as for you, I have to say I'm really liking this story. It's sweet and fun and very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for reading the story and reviewing. I appreciate it. And how cool that you are a raving reviewer yourself. I can see your point about VV. My brother-in-law was a tennis pro at a resort in Scottsdalea few years ago when VV came by wanting to play tennis. My bro-in-law told him the fee per hour and VV looked at him like, "Come on really? I have to pay?" So yeah, he's a bit of a jerkstore. I told my friend who was in love with him at the time but she wasn't trying to hear any of it. Oh well. I still find him amusing. I stand by Bella's feeling's towards BP, however. We can agree to disagree.
I'm glad you're liking the story. It's pure fluff, and I am unapologetic about it. Enjoy.
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Hal and My New Neighbor
Holy crow!!! This will be interesting!!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Eyes on the Prize
what's the song?
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Eyes on the Prize
Yes, loincloth Edward, sounds absolutely delicious.
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 12:13 AM · On: O Captain! My Captain!
I know one guy that I work with has read the first book and seen the movie because of his girlfriend. He's in his early twenties at the most. I love the tripping scene by the way. I was laughing so hard my husband wanted to know what happened. He laughed when I read it to him. :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Eyes on the Prize
Best of Luck with your testing!
Edward in a loin cloth...::Sigh::! And so the perfect song is ......?!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Eyes on the Prize
Very Sensual and I can't wait to see what song they decided on.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Eyes on the Prize
Oh please say the "As you wish" was a hint to the song! Storybook Love was, and is, our song. It wasn't something we randomly picked. The movie was one of our first dates. He then made a tape for me with the song. I wore the tape out. It's such a beautiful song. Is that the song or was the comment a coincidence?
Nice chapter.
Author's Response: sorry, storybook love is not it. i used the "as you wish" line because edward was bella's slave boy. i agree, it is an excellent song though. how sweet of your man to put it on a mix tape for you. perhaps he can put it on a cd or ipod since you've worn the tape out.
thanks for reading and reviewing. my guess is you'll like the song once it's revealed. stay tuned...
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Eyes on the Prize
I'm sort of thinking that a loinclothed Edward would make me extremely happy.
=D LOVE this chapter...but I'm kind of wondering what the song is.
...Is it Debussy?
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: no, it's not debussy. you'll have to wait for the update. thanks for reviewing though. i appreciate it.
and loinclothed edward? yes. i'll have one as well please!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Eyes on the Prize
ahhh loved this chapter. i was cracking up at the loin cloth. what was the song she let edward listen too?
Author's Response: hey, glad you enjoyed the chapter. you'll have to wait for the song reveal in an update though. it's a really good song. my guess is you'll like it. thanks for reading and reviewing. i'll be working on the update after my exams. stay tuned...
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Eyes on the Prize
It was so awesome! Oh my god! The only problem I have with this chapter is.... that it's not rob in the picture of the loincloth. I'm horribly disappointed...
Author's Response: i only wished i had photoshop to put rob pat's head on loincloth boy. sorry, but you'll just have to use your imagination on this one. glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 12:55 PM · On: O Captain! My Captain!
Straight guys that've read twilight, yes. Guy that i work with. He loved them all except Breaking Dawn. He hated that one. Good story btw.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:44 AM · On: A New Sensation
=] So I love how you warn everyone that this chapter has a lemon. It made me smile.
That being said.
DAYUM =D Everytime I read this story I fall a little bit more in love with it. hehe. Go Bella ;-)
Emmett hanging out with Eli was so cute!!!! Alice's wedding =] YAY!!!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:33 PM · On: A New Sensation
Great chapter. Loved the lemon. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:40 AM · On: A New Sensation
I meant to say "adult rating" not NC-17. Sorry about that.
Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:38 AM · On: A New Sensation
It'd be really great if you didn't put the huge **********************LEMON ALERT********************* warning in the middle of the story. It really screws up the flow. I love the steamy scenes, but with that ridiculous banner preceding them, they just seem stupid and awkwardly placed. The people reading this story should heed the rating. Since you do have it labeled as NC-17, sex is expected. The in-story warning is completely pointless. Post it elsewhere without the sex scenes if you want to have a lower rated story available to readers.
Author's Response: hi there, radical. thanks for the concern about the alert banners. you're actually the first person who has indicated a dislike for them. i have had compliments on them, right here on twilighted, in fact. some people, despite the rating, still want and like a warning. so how about i make the banner smaller with just asterisks and no words. will that still mess the flow up for you? i think it's a good compromise, no? thanks for reading and i appreciate your input.
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:54 AM · On: A New Sensation
I feel like this story will be ending soon, is that the case? Or do you plan on continuing after the two love birds get married because I'm all for that.
Loved the lemon, I thought the game was cute and of course Bella would win that one. she really has some will power to stay silent LOL.
I love the banter that goes back and forth between these two, I just enjoy this story, to keep it simple. I get excited when I see an update. So thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Twilightlover4ever (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:47 AM · On: A New Sensation
I love this story...its like my favorite now I also love all the fluffy chapters and im glad your not bringing to much drama in..i mean i just love it...and so cute eli keeps following emmet....but can you please tell me something before i die out of curisoty..this thing i bothering me alot i mean did hal u know reallt "untuck and unzip" Emmet i mean i think he dd it in his sleep prbly because he was hot with the fever...i mean ememt being scared to get near Hal is jussssttt sooooo FUNNNY..IM STILL LAUGHT..
oh yeah update sooon
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:40 PM · On: A New Sensation
Your wish is my command.
Love'd the chapter. I really enjoy watching Edward with Eli. He's so sweet, patient, and loving. He's proving that he will make a great father.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 08:38 PM · On: A New Sensation
ahhhh love it. eli is so darned cute. cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:44 PM · On: A New Sensation
Loved it! WoW! Great writing and I loved the contest.
Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 02:27 PM · On: A New Sensation
LMAO....OBVIOUSLY A LEMON ALERT!
lol bella won....go bella! damn i dont know how thats possible being with edward of all people.........if you know what im saying
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:33 PM · On: A New Sensation
love it as ususal i enjoy your writing :)
glad student teaching went well for you :) my turn next year!
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