Hmm, either he's gonna spin this off as a friendship love or he's gonna let it go and actually admit his feelings. Great chapter. Loved it!

Haha, that's funny that he's reading Twilight. It's cute. And yes I know of 1 straight guy that has read the Twilight series. I think a friend of mine knows of a different one. It would be kinda weird for a guy to read a girls point of view. Anyway, loved the chapter!

That is gonna make things interesting. Living next to each other. Or is it across the hall? Anyways, good job so far.

Aww poor Bella. Good intro chapter. Captures you in and doesn't want to let go. Well done.

OMEC!!!!!

your story it's so bautiful.i'm just reading chapter 13.i can't stop smurfin.lol.you are an amazing author!!

Um... yeah i know like a 4 straight guys who have read Twilight. My friend Brian, my ex Gabirel... well he tried to read it, and my other friends Jacob, Julian... (although me and my friends are still debating whether Julian is straight or not). And what about the twilight cast, they all read twilight and liked it!  :D

Author's Response:

good point about the twilight cast reading the book, but i don't know them personally, and really, if you're in the movie, you'd better read the damn book like it or not.

ok, so stick with the story and please let me know if your opinion of this edward changes. now i don't know if you're going to continue to review, but i expect to hear from you at least one more time regarding the edward issue. you're designated now! my guess is your opinion will change, but let me know if it doesn't change either, 'kay?  thanks for reading and reviewing.   

I just LOVE this story!  You're cracking me up and I just had to comment on the "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" .  SO good!  Love it!  Keep it up!

Really enjoyed your story. It's like Friends with a Twilight twist. Great chapter titles and I loved the idea for a cereal bar. I'm too embarrased to buy a whole box of Cookie Crisp just for myself.

i really enjoyed your story. i like how this one ended. a total break away from the typical edward and bella story from the twilight plot sequence. Good job.

loveeeee this story, you have a real talent for writing :)

OKAY! so i never really review if the story is completed until the very end, however, your question demands an answer! lol. I know of 4 straight guys alone who have either read or are currently reading the Twilight series. My younger brother, my best friend Kyle, my sisters boyfriend who is 19 Matthew and then my band teacher Mr. Case. All of whom were of course correrced by their friends, family, or in Mr. Case's case his wife but they all have read or are reading it and seem to enjoy it. In fact, Matthew went to the breaking dawn release party as Jacob Black. It could have something to do with the fact that he LOOKs like how you would imagine Jacob but yeah, lol. Anyways, you probably won't see me review again until I finish, which will probably be sometime tomorrow but I had to answer your question and say that I also sympathize, I trip over air ALL the time. lol. Great story so far, love your writing style and I can't wait to continue reading. ^.^

~Kat

Author's Response:

thanks for answering the question.  i'm still astounded by the number of straight men my readers know who have read the book and also enjoy it.  my count still stands at one.  my husband refuses to have anything to do with twilight.  he's just annoyed because i've told him he's no edward cullen.  haha.  all in fun, but really, no man is edward cullen (sigh). thanks for taking time out to review.  looking forward to hearing from you once you finish.  and, btw, the sequel is up as well.

 

mj

I can sympathize I broke my captain last summer. Loving the story so far!