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Reviewer: FelixVsEmmett (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

Another AMAZING chapter!
I believe this is the first story I have read where Emmett is the human and Bella is the vampire!
I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait to read more And see what drama could possible come to them.  Plus, you are a FANTASTIC WRITER AND STORYTELLER!!

Reviewer: EmmettsKitten (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

I love this story!  Another Fantastic Chapter!!!

Your writing is really quite Amazing!.

And I love Bella and Emmett together. They are perfect for each other.

Update soon please!!!

Reviewer: EdwardMasenForever17 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

Wooo! Sexy, human Emmett...sorry, my thoughts ran away from me ;) So can't wait for the next chapter! I love how passionate and sure Emmett is of Bella, it's so cute!

Another Amazing chapter! I can't wait for Emmett to become a vampire! Cant wait for more!
I AM IN COMPLETE LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!

Reviewer: DibsOnFelix (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

OMG! 'So Much For Taking It Slow' Indeed. (lol) Another Amazing Chapter. I love this story so much.

You are such an amazing writer. Your really bring Emmett and Bella to life, with your writing. You are extremely talented!

Reviewer: BurnDidymeBurn (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

Wonderful, Fantastic, Amazing; You Catch My Drift. I loved How Emmett Was So Sure About His Decision.

Another Great Chapter To Add To An Already Amazing Story!

Reviewer: RenesmeCarlieCullenXXX89 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

YOU ARE ON A ROLL BABY! I have never seen someone pumpout such lengthly chapers so quickly, but heck, you sure won't hear my complaining.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND I LOVE THIS STORY.

So far you've been able to outdue yourself with every suceeding chapter; I don't know how you are going to top this one; but something tells me that you will. This story is already one of my favorite fanfiction stories of all time; and when I say favorite, I mean like top two or three favorite. Keep up the great work; I absolutley cannot wait to see what happens next; so far you are full of surpises. Emmett's reaction in this chapter was nothing like I was expecting. Thank you for sharing such an amazing story. I am literally running our of superlatives to explain how great it is so far.

You Rock!

Reviewer: RenesmeCarlieCullenXXX89 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

I LOVE IT!!! THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER!!  I LOVED THE DINNER SCENCE WITH THS STALKER WAITRESS!  THEIR ENTIRE DINNERWAS FANATASICAL IN ITS PORTRAYAL!

BUT EVEN BEFORE THAT, I LOVED HOW YOU HAD BOTH BELLA AND EMMETT FEEL PHYSICAL PAIN, THE MATING PULL, WHENEREVER THEY WERE SEPARATED.  GREAT TOUCH!!

FINALLY, THE CONVERSTATION BACK AT BELLA'S HOUSE WHEN SHE ADMITTED THAT SHE WASN'T HUMAN.  I JUST LOVED EMMETT'S RESPONSE OF "I KNOW, SWEETHEART. IT WAS SO PERFECT AND SO EMMETT!!

AWESOME CHAPTER!! AGAIN WONDEFULLY WRITTEN!  I'M LOVING THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: RenesmeCarlieCullenXXX89 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!  EMMETT AND BELLA ARE ADORABLE TOGETHER.

THIS TRUL IS A PAIRING THAT ISN'T GIVEN ENOUGH OF A CHANCE, I THINK THEY ARE WONDERFUL TOGHETER...ESPECIALLY THE WAY YOU WRITH THEM.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR.  GREAT DIALOGUE, WONDEFUL DESCRIPTIONS AND FANATASTIC WRITING!!

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Ramble On

Do I dare...? I only ever read canon couples...

Well, mostly. A couple Jazz/Angela ones, one Jazz/Bella (Edward and Alice die in an AU NM), another two Edward/OC (in both he starts off as a widower in a Post BD setting) and one Bella/Carlisle (Edward and Esme die in an AU Ec) ...Gosh, I just realized that's actuallty a lot! I may venture into your story after writting this! lucky number 7!

Just a little question (from an E/B avid defender) so your Edward (if he's there) is ok when/if Carlile sires Rosalie for him...? or is it Tanya, or an OC...? PLZ can you tell me? I'll only ask for that one spoiler. PLZ?

Reviewer: Virgooster (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Only Fools Rush In

I love Emmett. I bet Bella stood there for at least 3 seconds wondering if she heard him right, and was he insane. This story makes me happy, you should see my face when I realize that you've updated. XD Thank you for writing! I look forward to the next one.

Reviewer: Sanozscha (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

Hi! I just found your story and just had to read it! there are not many storys about Bella and Emmett out there and I have to say I love your story very much! Emmett and Bella are both really over the moon =)

And I loved how you described Eleazars reaction to Bella just going away =) I have a feeling we will see him again!

Please continue to write and don't be offended that I didn't write a review for every chapter but I just had to continue to read after I started, that alone should say enough about this story =)

Ps: I'm sorry if there are mistakes in my writing, english is not my first language!

Reviewer: VampireVenom33 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

AWESOME CHAPTER! I POSITIVELY LOVE THIS STORY!!   This was my favorite chapter so far. I love the way Bella and Emmett interact with each other. It's so cute how neither one of them can even concentrate in the presence of the other.


OMG! THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING! Every chapter just gets better and better and I become more and more hooked.
First of all, I loved their dinner date. I thought the "former girlfriend? - "No more like former stalker?" scenario with Cynthia the waitress was hilarious. I love the way Emmett and Bella interact with each other. But their conversation at her house; Oh My God! I thought I was sure how Emmett would react; but when she told him that she wasn't human...well his reaction floored me. You totally caught me off guard with that one; but I absolutely loved it! I know it has only been three chapters; but this is quickly becoming one of my favorite fanfic stories! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I cannot wait for Chapter 4!

Reviewer: VampireVenom33 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!  I ABSOLUTELY LOVED AND ADORED IT!

I love your Emmett and Bella. Human Emmett is absolutely adorable in this story. Writing this review was hard because I didn't want to stop reading; I just wanted to continue on to Chapter 3 immediately.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!

Reviewer: FelixVsEmmett (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

Geez, and I thought the first two chapters were good. Your story just keeps getting better!

I am so happy that Bella realized and accepted the fact that Emmett is her mate; even though he is human. I loved how she decided that she would not take the choice away from him. Because she was still angry that Aro's decision determined her fate; it was enough to make her not want to determine Emmett's. Because of what happened to her, she is willing to allow Emmett to determine his own fate.

I loved how you had Bella come to that conclusion.

As far as human Emmett; Wow! Is it hot in here or is it just me? I think your portrayal of his human personality is absolutely perfect. He is so sweet and adorable.

Why can't I meet an Emmett?

Their date was perfectly written.  I loved the dialogue as well as the orginal characters of Harry and the psycho waitress, Cynthia.  She was crazy!  As I said, I LOVED THE DINNER SCENCE!

And finally, when Bella admitted she wasn't human, Emmett's reaction was fantastic!

Awesome Chapter!  I totally Love this Story!!

Anyways, I am absolutely frothing at the mouth as I wait for Chapter Four. I cannot wait to see how the rest of their conversation goes conversation and where you take the story form there.  

Awesome Job!  You've got an amazing Story Going!

Reviewer: FelixVsEmmett (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

WOW, just WOW! Your Emmett is perfect. I love how you depict human Emmett. He is absolutely adorable and such a gentleman.

I also loved the interaction between Bella and Emmett. Each one thought they were acting like a fool in front of the other. Turns out they were driving each other nuts without even realizing it.

I really really really love this story so far!

Reviewer: EmmettsKitten (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

What can I say? Loved this chapter! Adored this chapter! Basically, this is my favorite chapter of the story so far. 

But...something tells me that I will most likely have a have a new fave VERY SOON!!

LOVE THIS STORY!  

Reviewer: EmmettsKitten (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

Wonderful Chapter, once again. It was beautifully written and sooo cute! You have Emmett down pat!

Wonderful Job. Great Chapter and Beautiful, Amazing Story!

Reviewer: EdwardMasenForever17 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

WOW! Awesome Chapter...Again! Ha, All your chapters have been Awesome!

I really, really Loved this one, however.  Their dinner was together and the start of their conversaton back at Bella's house was just perfect! 

You captured their date perfectly, it was wonderfully written...as always.

Awesome Chapter...I loved it. But then again, I've said that after each of the first three chapters! LOL!
Once again, wonderful chapter. Beautifully Written, I just can't get enought of This Story. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: EdwardMasenForever17 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

OMG! This Chapter was Awesome!
You write Emmett so well, you have his personality nailed!                                                                                                                             Fantastic!

Another, Awesome, Wonderfully Written, Amazing Chapter!

I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH!

Reviewer: TwilightZone31 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

DUN DUN DUN! Haha, what a way to end such an Awesome chapter!  I LOVED IT!
Please please please keep the updates coming! Your story is all kinds of fantastic! :)

Reviewer: TwilightZone31 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

Once again, A Wonderful chapter! 

Emmett and Bella getting to know each other, even though they are clearly both smitten with each other was Awesome.   The interaction between them was Perfectly Done and Beautifully Written!

I just can't get enought of This Story. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: MissBellaSwan-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

WOW! What and Amazing Story. All 3 Chapters that you have posted so far are all amazing, but this was my favorite! I LOVED IT!

This just might be my new favorite story. It's Wonderful!

Plus, you are such an Amazing Writer!

Please Update Soon...I NEED MORE! :)

Reviewer: MissBellaSwan-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

LOVED THIS CHAPTER! AND I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY!

i love bella with emmett.  There aren't enough good stories that pair them together.  Thank God I Finally Found One!!!

Awesome!

Reviewer: Third Wife (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Addiction & Withdrawal

Oh. My. God. This story is A M A Z I N G.

You have a way with words. One of the best stories i have read on here . Cant wait for you to update. Please soon !

Reviewer: Third Wife (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Wheels of Fate

I LOVED CHAPTER 2!  IT WAS FANTASTIC!  THE EARLY INTERACTION BETWEEN EMMETT AND BELLA IS SO FUN TO READ...THEY ARE ADORABLE TOGETHER!!

EMMETT IS JUST SO CUTE I WANT TO SQUISH HIM. Bear hugs, this way please!

LOVE THE STORY! KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING! YOUR DOING AWESOME!

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