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Reviews For Betrothal
Reviewer: Thevampnerd (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2013 06:57 PM · On: A Night to Remember

I Need More,must finish ♥

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 01:12 PM · On: A Night to Remember

I hope to read more.

Reviewer: theswissmiss (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 09:35 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Any ideas when the next chapter is coming? I just read this through and am now completely sucked in!! I love this story!!! 

p.s. I love Young Victoria, too :)

Reviewer: hannahrazz (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 10:26 PM · On: Prelude

Please continue this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, my beta wont reply to me and so the chapter was rejected. You can find plenty more chapters on fanfiction.net, my penname on there is AuntiePanda. 

Thanks again 

Reviewer: fiercepixie (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 12:22 AM · On: A Night to Remember

I am enjoying this story so much, excellent writing. I look forward to the next update. Brilliant work!

Reviewer: tennisgirl (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 02:27 PM · On: Earning her Favour

I only just started reading, and i don't expect you to change anything now, but wealthy people of this time would have known how speak at least both english and french, and most likely they would know one or two more languages. It was part of the education of the time, especially for women who would need impress a husband.



Author's Response:

That's a fair point, and yes I do know that, but they wouldn't have learned all the same languages nessecarily. Whose's to say that she's not accomplised in other languages? 

Thank you for reviewing :) 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 10:13 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Looks like Edward needs some lessons

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 10:09 AM · On: I Thee Wed

A++

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 10:07 AM · On: The Forbidden Topic

lol poor girl

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Earning her Favour

good job

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 10:00 AM · On: A Long Time Coming...

Enjoying the story

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 09:57 AM · On: Prelude

Good writting. Edward to stay a virgin lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 09:11 AM · On: A Night to Remember

You did an outstanding job discribing the first time between both of them.  It was very realistic.  I hope that as time goes they will learn to please each othe and be happy!  It seems that they care for each other and that it soon will turn to love!

Dixie

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 06:50 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Aw how sad tat they didn't cuddle more, but the sign of the times I suspect. It will be fun to watch as they learn about each other.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 06:27 AM · On: I Thee Wed

Lovely. I marvel at your ability to bring your characters to life!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 04:30 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Squeeee epic epic epic !!!!!  I am so glad you didn't ry and make more of this as so many try to do this was perfecrly painful hahaha!!! Can't wait for more post again soon

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 03:07 PM · On: The Forbidden Topic

Love love the explanation given by Esme. You are an excellent writer. I am enjoying your well thought out story.

 

Eager to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 02:30 PM · On: Earning her Favour

What an awesome chapter. You make all the characters mysterious. I especially like the mystery of Edward.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 02:23 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Not bad for a first time

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 06:58 AM · On: A Long Time Coming...

Curious behavior from Edward. 

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Prelude

You have an excellent writing style and your story is intriguing!

Reviewer: omsvmars22 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:23 AM · On: I Thee Wed

So good :) I love this kind of story, I can't wait to read the wedding night!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 07:52 PM · On: I Thee Wed

I really like period fan fic and I am having a lot of fun reading yours. Looking forward to see ing what you do with it.

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 07:03 PM · On: I Thee Wed

I love the reaction these two have to each other!  Thank God they are atleast attracted to each other! lI enjoyed the chapter...filler chapters are good, they create anticipation for the next!

Update soon!  Dixie

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 05:20 PM · On: I Thee Wed

It was a great chapter and necessary.  Update soon though!!!!

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