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Reviews For Betrothal
Reviewer: wicked lovely (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 01:32 PM · On: A Night to Remember

I loved it 😀!! It reminded me of old Victorian literature, I just wish there was more for me to read. Definitely going to be one of my favorite stories. 

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 10:30 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Love the story please tell me how often do you update so I can keep up. Abk



Author's Response:

The story is nearly complete on FanFiction.net :) 

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2014 12:11 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Love the story so far, do you know how many chapters it will be ? And how often you will update? Abi

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2014 12:05 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Love the story so far, do you know how many chapters it will be ? And how often you will update? Abi

Reviewer: annakathlyn15 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:19 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Very excellent.  I love the time period you chose and how everything is arranged.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: annakathlyn15 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:18 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Very excellent.  I love the time period you chose and how everything is arranged.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: annakathlyn15 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:18 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Very excellent.  I love the time period you chose and how everything is arranged.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2013 06:38 PM · On: Prelude

PLEASE UPDATE

Reviewer: Thevampnerd (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2013 04:57 PM · On: A Night to Remember

I Need More,must finish ♥

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 11:12 AM · On: A Night to Remember

I hope to read more.

Reviewer: theswissmiss (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 07:35 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Any ideas when the next chapter is coming? I just read this through and am now completely sucked in!! I love this story!!! 

p.s. I love Young Victoria, too :)

Reviewer: hannahrazz (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:26 PM · On: Prelude

Please continue this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, my beta wont reply to me and so the chapter was rejected. You can find plenty more chapters on fanfiction.net, my penname on there is AuntiePanda. 

Thanks again 

Reviewer: fiercepixie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 10:22 PM · On: A Night to Remember

I am enjoying this story so much, excellent writing. I look forward to the next update. Brilliant work!

Reviewer: tennisgirl (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 12:27 PM · On: Earning her Favour

I only just started reading, and i don't expect you to change anything now, but wealthy people of this time would have known how speak at least both english and french, and most likely they would know one or two more languages. It was part of the education of the time, especially for women who would need impress a husband.



Author's Response:

That's a fair point, and yes I do know that, but they wouldn't have learned all the same languages nessecarily. Whose's to say that she's not accomplised in other languages? 

Thank you for reviewing :) 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:13 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Looks like Edward needs some lessons

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:09 AM · On: I Thee Wed

A++

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:07 AM · On: The Forbidden Topic

lol poor girl

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Earning her Favour

good job

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:00 AM · On: A Long Time Coming...

Enjoying the story

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 07:57 AM · On: Prelude

Good writting. Edward to stay a virgin lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 07:11 AM · On: A Night to Remember

You did an outstanding job discribing the first time between both of them.  It was very realistic.  I hope that as time goes they will learn to please each othe and be happy!  It seems that they care for each other and that it soon will turn to love!

Dixie

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 04:50 AM · On: A Night to Remember

Aw how sad tat they didn't cuddle more, but the sign of the times I suspect. It will be fun to watch as they learn about each other.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 04:27 AM · On: I Thee Wed

Lovely. I marvel at your ability to bring your characters to life!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 02:30 PM · On: A Night to Remember

Squeeee epic epic epic !!!!!  I am so glad you didn't ry and make more of this as so many try to do this was perfecrly painful hahaha!!! Can't wait for more post again soon

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 01:07 PM · On: The Forbidden Topic

Love love the explanation given by Esme. You are an excellent writer. I am enjoying your well thought out story.

 

Eager to read the next chapter.

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