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Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 03:00 AM · On: Ch 18 Blue Jeans
i ran and u are totally right its awesome!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 02:44 AM · On: Ch 18 Blue Jeans
I love their exploring :) so much more fun to be had...lol
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
Oh my gosh, I love Edward. What a sweetheart! I'm so glad he's not a punk in this story! LOL
This was such a sweet chapter.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 08:10 AM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 08:16 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
Well, so glad that Bella found what she needed! But who can blame Edward for guarding his heart? He's only known fleeting happiness and it was snatched away from him beyond his control. Bella just might have to prove herself a little here, even if he thinks she doesn't need to!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 06:59 AM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
Something as simple as reading his words... but I think it was just her brain and heart were finally ready. I just hope Edward will lose his hesitancy one day. Can't blame him either.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 06:48 AM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
very nice. I'm glad his journal worked
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 11:45 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
swoon omg omg!!! Just love how everything fell into place!!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
OH, I LOVED IT! How perfect and fitting for her to realize her love for him after reading his journal! Being the fairy tale fanatic that I am, it's almost as if she was under a curse and his words of love broke the spell. Gah, I loved it! :D
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
yay! she finally remembered!!! that was a perfect gift from the family...alone time!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:02 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
this is awesome!
Reviewer: Twiadict2911 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 04:49 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
FINALLY! Thank you!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 04:21 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
I'm glad that Bella decided to along with the party. Now that she remembers her love for Edward, maybe there will be some lemony goodness in the next chapters.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
Aw! I guess Alice could see far enough into the future to know her arm wasn't going to be ripped off!
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Ch 17 Lovesong
i love the part where he orders everyone out =)
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
I love the tea party practice. I never really thought how hard it would be to adjust to being vampire strong. Alice is so over the top with party. I think if she had known Bella as a human she wouldn't have had the party, maybe.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 03:03 PM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
Squeee! I can't wait for more! love love love!!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
I loved this chapter. I've got a feeling that things are still gonna be rough for both of them. I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 01:03 PM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
I gotta be honest, I'm not a fan of True Blood. They just irritate me to death, especially Sookie with her hypocrisy. I've also read the book way prior to the show, so I have a hard time putting the two together. Alexander Skaarsgard, on the other hand, I totally agree is one hot man. With a big penis. Just saying.
She's making a lot of progress. Alice seems to determined to annoy Bella to death though. *sigh*
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 11:51 AM · On: Ch 16 Go Slowly
That was fun. I'm glad she's mellowing towards Edward. Can't blame her for not wanting to meet T's sisters
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 09:24 PM · On: Ch 15 History Books
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: skr4romance2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Ch 15 History Books
This is a great story so far. Very well written and spot on with the characters. I hope you update again soon. I wish I had your talent for writing. Thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:38 PM · On: Ch 15 History Books
looking forward to more
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 05:49 PM · On: Ch 15 History Books
I just did some catch up. Your story deserves a comment after every chapter, but way too tired thanks to RL. But anyway, thanks for a solid chapter - and I see some progress here regarding Bella and Edward - despite her obliviousness to her own feelings.
Thanks for sharing your wonderfulf talent!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 10:52 AM · On: Ch 15 History Books
Hmm, maybe she should think more on Alice's choice of words. Or the word choice!
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