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Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Ch 6 Eyes On Fire
Wow! I love this story. I like that he's not pussy footing around her. I like that they are making out. Some stories are a bit boring and samey when B/E take forever to even touch.
I'm really excited to read more and I appreciate the speedy updates!!
Till next time
Jess
Author's Response: Thanks Jess! Yes, I like to keep things moving at a steady clip. Glad it's to your liking!
I'll try to keep up with the speedy updates. My Validation Beta is wonderful, but she's also a busy lady, so posting times vary.
thank you!
moirae
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Ch 6 Eyes On Fire
OMG. I loved it. I am so glad he can touch and kiss her in this story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! I like the kissing and touching too. ;-)
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Ch 6 Eyes On Fire
Impressive chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 08:45 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
awwww... that was one sweet chapter! Drooling stupigly - I can agree :D
Now they will be alone in a room full of Bellas scent... will see how Edward deals with that...
I know that I am needy but I really hope for a kiss in next chapter!!! (at least on a cheek) Its just that they are moving ahead so smoothly... Its just next logical step, really. Really its a must! ;)
So now I am going to stop pestering you,
Waiting for more
Author's Response: Fantastic observation on Edward in Bella's apartment, alone with her scent. We'll see how our Edward does.
As for the smooches, I think you might be pleasantly surprised. ;-) Not saying anymore than that!
Thank you for the review, as always. Love to hear your thoughts!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 07:32 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
excellent chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it and appreciate the review!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
:) is this going to be a huge talk, get everything out in the open and declare their feelings???
Author's Response: Hmmm . . . there will be talking. There will be feelings. There will be . . . more. But they still have a long way to go before they can have an angst-free/confusion-free conversation. :-)
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
This story is too cute!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Glad you like it!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 09:45 AM · On: Ch 2 - I Want You
I realized I didn't review this one; I was in too big of a hurry to get to the next chapter. I admit, I skimmed over the fantasy part the first read-through (Yes, I've read this twice).
Normally, I'll read these with a "meh" sort of attitude, ready to move on to the whole relationship section. In this story, though, Bella and Edward are /so/ in character to the ones I loved in the books that this felt too intimate and private to read. (This is a good thing!) To me, this story is like the better-written, adult version of Twilight. Nothing that's been said or done between them has seemed false and it's such a pleasant surprise.
I could feel Bella's mortification, bless her heart! And Edward's too! Holy cow, I felt embarassed for both of them!
Author's Response: Wow. No words for this review. You just . . . gah. *blushing and smiling and stupid*
Thank you!
moirae
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
Good story, I am glad it is moving along at a good clip!
Reviewer: emmathewild (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
the timeouts don't seem to be the healthiest thing for someone who is such a dangermagnet like bella. i bet edward has his work cut out protecting her.
i love the firefly reference :)
thank you
Author's Response: For reals, right? She does seem to invite a bit of danger, especially when it comes to Edward. Glad you liked the Firefly reference. Spencer always lets me fly my geek flag!
thank you!
moirae
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Ch 2 - I Want You
Wild way for Bella and Edward to meet and for her to get a glimpse that he is different. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I was always a little nervious my readers would be offended by Edward's peeping, but so far people seem willing to give him a pass on it being accidental. Hope you enjoy it as you read on!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 12:01 AM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
I'm glad Bella and Edward finally "ran into" each other again. I hope they can develop some kind of relationship now. This talk they're going to have should be interesting and make for a good start.
Author's Response: They are definitely working toward some more closeness. I'm not patient enough to take things too slowly with them, so you should see some quick connection very soon. Thanks for the review!
:)
moirae
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 08:45 PM · On: Ch 1 - No Sunlight
Ohh my goodness! That was a lovely meeting! (What an odd thing to say when he really wanted to kill her. What does that say about me?) Well, anyway, I adored every single word of this chapter! :D I appreciate how subtle these stirrings are for Edward: it bugs me when people immediately start in with the lustful thoughts. It seems to just set the story up to be all about sex. I loved the connection that they felt between them. :D
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you liked their meeting, and no it's not strange to like it even though he wanted to kill her. He fought off that feeling, didn't he? ;) Thank you so much for another lovely review. You're really making my day!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Prologue - Winter Song
Wow! Oh my gosh, I love how your sentences flow so nicely, at times it felt like I was reading a poem instead of fanfic. I love it! I'm so excited for the possibilities in this story!
Author's Response: I have the biggest smile right now. Thank you so much. I always fear that chapter is a bit overwrought, so it makes me really happy to know you liked it. Thank you thank you thank you!
((hugs))
moirae
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 04:15 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
I wish I could give this story something higher than a 10!! Keeep up the great work. I love all the tension and build up. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Until then, thanks for filling in the entertainment gaps for me in my life as a mom of three. ;-)
Author's Response: Killing me with kindness... Thank you so much. Next chapter should give you a bit of release *ahem* from that tension. So glad I can help entertain you - I sure know what it's like to need that break from the little ones. : )
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
Glad they talked. I hope Bella learns to focus
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sweetie! I would have a hard time focusing around Edward, too. Wouldn't you? ;-)
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 01:38 PM · On: Ch 5 Falling Slowly
Awesome! I love the pace of this... for you aren't messing around and moving it forward perfectly. I love seeing a close relationship between Bella and Angela - so kudos in that department.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to an estatic Alice - for I have a sneaking suspicion she'll be bouncing in on them in the near future.
Love it! Thanks for sharing your talent! Now, let me go give you five stars again!
Author's Response: Another really lovely review! The pace remains pretty swift throughout, so I'm glad you like it. Angela has always been a favorite character, and certainly the one I most identify with. She and Bella make a really good team, I think.
You are spot on with your prediction about Alice! She will indeed be making her joy known, and it won't be too long before a visit happens.
Thank you thank you thank you! This was really so sweet! (((hugs)))
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 01:06 PM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
I’m really enjoying this tale… loving the fact that both Edward and Bella recognize and acknowledge that their connection is unworldly and absolute. Edward, knowing he can’t fight these feelings, looks at ways to make it work… rather than dwell on a disillusion that he should leave her. Bella, not understanding it… but also recognizing she’s drawn to him in a very supernatural way. I like this more mature Edward, who isn’t afraid to seek Alice’s assistance. I like this determined smart Bella, who has clearly awakened.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent – and look here... I have another chapter to read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the amazing review. I'm thrilled you like these characters - I have a lot of fun writing them. i was always disappointed in Edward's choice to leave in BD, so I vowed that wouldn't happen in this story. My Edward definitely feels guilty, but he can't bring himself to do it.
Thank you! You've put a huge smile on my face!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: Mystery Cat (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 01:30 AM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
This chapter was worth the wait!
Their meeting was absolutely amazing! I love the way you describe their connection, this bond that commits them to seek each other out, to be closer. Edward is so well-portrayed, his speech and manners are the closest ones to the book I've read so far. And your Bella is brilliant! Simply great!
Author's Response: You are so beyond sweet! I've been thinking about your review all day - a very busy and exhausting day - and it's given me a little boost everytime I did. It really is the biggest complement that you think Edward's character is close to the original and that you like my Bella. Makes me smile.
I'm thrilled you liked the chapter, and i hope you like how things progress.
Thank you so much! (((hugs)))
moirae
Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 08:55 PM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
Damn, I need MORE!
The meeting was ingenious, he really looses his head around her!
They finally meet properly, if it can be said so, and will have THE talk! Oh, and his smile... dazziling
I am super exited! Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, simplyamazed, you always make me smile. I'm glad you like their first meeting - there is definitely big things to come next chapter. You're enthusiasm is infectious! Thanks for all the love!
xxx,
moirae
Reviewer: Kirst (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
loving this story :) can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully more will be coming soon. : ) - moirae
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 06:00 PM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
Enjoying the story, can't wait for more!y
Author's Response: So glad you like it! Thanks for the kind review! - moirae
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 03:27 PM · On: Prologue - Winter Song
I like what I'm reading so far...off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: black sadie (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Ch 4 All I Want
Really enjoying this story. Best Twilight characterizations I've read in a while.
Author's Response: Thank you. That really makes my day. I'm trying very hard to keep to canon with their personalities, so hearing you say that is beyond wonderful.
xxx,
moirae
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