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Reviewer: Zane Elliot (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Welcome to
Ugh please update, you're killin me smalls
Reviewer: Zane Elliot (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 03:03 PM · On: Welcome to
I'm in love with this Bella and her perspective! It's really good, and I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Rebecca123 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 11:13 AM · On: Well, Damn
I want Edward´s point of view! :) i really like your story so far
Reviewer: Winta (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Well, Damn
I'm so curious! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: chrrispysmomlee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 01:10 PM · On: Well, Damn
this is good. really good. i don't know when a new story has drawn me in so fast. the writing is terrific and you've given us so many secrets to uncover. thanks a lot for sharing this with us and keep on writing!
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Well, Damn
I love it so far. Can't wait for more. Would love his pov.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: Kirst (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Well, Damn
Great start to the fic! I'm definitely intrigued :)
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 11:53 PM · On: Well, Damn
next chapter soon, please :D
Reviewer: jenbrag (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Welcome to
Fantastic! Best thing I've read in a while!
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 06:22 PM · On: Well, Damn
loving it so far, i am in an anxiously awaiting EPOV
xoxo
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Well, Damn
So far I'm really enjoying your story
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 02:05 PM · On: Well, Damn
Very mysterious. I like it.
Next chapter, write from the pov of whoever clamors for the most attention.
Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Well, Damn
Oh boy... the always seem to collide. I predict interesting times :)
Reviewer: stormy315 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 01:23 AM · On: Well, Damn
great chapter....i would really like to know what happend to bella and why she has no parents....accident/crime? hmmm...i would like to read bella´s pov in the next chapter, followed by edward.....can´t wait....
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Well, Damn
Very interesting. I want to know more of Bella's story. I'd also love an EPOV
Reviewer: simplyamazed (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 07:42 AM · On: Welcome to
Such a sad begining, but you have intrigued me! Wonder how the first meeting with all family will go... Poor Bella (sigh)
But as an optimist I hope for HEA
Hoping for update soon
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 11:52 AM · On: Welcome to
i want more, this seems like a really good beginning.
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Welcome to
I'm intrigued, and looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: chrrispysmomlee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Welcome to
you have pulled me in already! i love hearing bella's inner monologue. you've got a great writing style and a whole lot of imagination. i can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 12:16 AM · On: Welcome to
ooh, what is THEN??? what happened THEN? WHO did the THEN to her? how did the Cullens find her across the country? is Edward her natural-born child or a rescue? Where are Bella's family? was she in an orphanage, or a hospital? mental?
Do I have enough questions? do you plan to update and finish?? :)
FYI, I'm not sure why, but your font comes thru as ridiculously tiny. I even hit the +, but id didn't get better. My face was right at the screen!!
Clearly, I am hooked and looking forward to more! Emmett will probably freak her out with his size and Emmettness. :)
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Welcome to
My heart wrenches for this child. I fear this is going to be a rough journey for her. And we haven't even met the rest of them yet.
Very nice start.
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 08:43 AM · On: Welcome to
I love the way you write :) Enough detail without going overboard. There's character to the words, too. It makes sense that Bella would be thinking the words you write... if that makes sense. I'm hooked.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Welcome to
it seems like a bit of a dark story, but also completely mesmerizing. Love it, and the way you show Esme, so nurturing already!! I actually tried to find out if another site carried more of your wonderful chapters, but alas, no luck, lol. Please update when you can! Very well done.
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Welcome to
nice beginning. your notes before the story made it sound hugely dark, and although it may turn darker later on, it didn't seem that angsty. and i like the sarcamic mind. i was wondering if you could change your font because the letters are really tiny now.
Reviewer: KBZ (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Welcome to
The font size makes this too difficult to read and using the text+ button did not assist, sorry. you might get more reads if you enlarge the text
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