Great Strory. Thank you

Continues to be an interesting story. The upcoming battle will be interesting. But still Edward and Bella have paid the price for all this selfishness: Rose's, Marcus' and Elena's. They sacrificed that family for what they wanted. I've tried to care about what happens to them, but its hard. In the end, I want them to defeat Aro. But I also want them to pay for what they did to Edward, Bella and Renesmee.

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the story so far. :)

Didn't mean for Mama Rose to happen? That's crap. She meant it and wanted it. No sympathy here for Rose. Whether Reneseme had the memories or not, Rose could have kept reinforcing who Edward and Bella were and she didn't. Because she didn't want to. She wanted to be Reneseme's mother. She's selfish. And frankly, Emmett so easily taking Rose back ticks me off. It's as if she did nothing wrong. I really, really hope the rest of the family is not as forgiving. I'm not saying Reneseme didn't need protecting. And that Aro didn't need taking down. I question how all of these people went about it. Their lack of communication with the Cullens caused pain, and E&B will never get back what they lost - time with their daughter. And I question all the motives. They're all selfish, especially Rose.

Author's Response:

Rose definetely has some issues.

Thanks for reading!

Linda :)

Mother??  Elena is somehow descended from Luca??

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Smart woman! You are the first reader to figure it out. :) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Poor Elena.  That's gotta suck. I like that Elena and Bella are bonding some.

 

I'm immensly pissed at Roselie for perpetuating the "Momma" Rose fiction.  She should have insisted on "Aunt" Rose, like "Aunt" Elena.  It can't end well otherwise.  There is nobody that won't get hurt over that.  Rose, Bella, and Ren particularly.

In your writing, you are certainly keeping Edward in character.  Unfortunately his character is a world class douche, so you are doing great, and I still want to take him out, tie him up, and beat the grap out of his ego-filled, condecending ass.

Jasper is awesome, and I'm proud of his character here.  All but his idiocy at not feeding enough.  Hehas to maintain control enough supress his own and 3 other vampires bloodlust.  Feeding so little was just asking for trouble.  Jasper of all people should have known better.

Elena is still newborn?  I know Bella is.  I love that Bella got Jasper to focus, but I'm shocked Elena beat her to Jazz.

I'm thrilled they are finally in the past.  I've been looking forward to these events.

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Jasper is my favorite too. Edward will come around, he just needs some time. Thanks for reading. :)

OK, so I was intrigued by the story concept. But I'll be honest, it's hard to read, and not just because of all the time switching (which you're doing a pretty good job of organizing). It's just so sad. And it seems so cruel. Edward and Bella are being denied the right to watch their daughter grow and to know her and for her to know them. As for Rosalie, she's a selfish bitch. If she wasn't she wouldn't be relishing her mother role. She would tell Reneeseme that she's "Aunt" Rose not "Momma" Rose and that she has a mother and father who love her and want to be with her. I don't buy the whole "she needed to have some family with her" line. If so, then they would have been honest with Nessie from the beginning. She stole Edward and Bella's daughter. She's worse than Elena, who also kidnapped her and for selfish reasons. But she didn't know the Cullens. Rose was family. I hope when all this is over than Edward and Bella tear Rose apart. I hope the doesn't forgive her. I hope she ends up miserable and alone. She deserves it. While this is interesting premise for a story, the sadness and cruelty of it seems extreme. There's a lot to make up for here and I'm not sure how you do that - give back to Edward, Bella and Reneeseme what they lost.

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Thanks for reading. The story is sad and lots of drama going on. I hope you continue to read. :)

Rose never thought of Emmett, only the baby. Now I get that the baby needed to be kept safe. Could she of asked if Emmett could come?

I remember " The Fly" well that casts some age on me.

"I trust you to make the right decision," Esme said as she placed her hand on his shoulder. "We all do." BIG LOL here, guilt trip much??

"Cry me a river," Jacob mumbled as he plopped himself on the opposite end of the table, opening a can of soda.  *Snort* / *laugh* and a visual of Jake w/ a thinking balloon over his head with the Justin Timberlake video...

"Jasper is ready to go," Alice said. "We're just waiting on you. Isn't that right, Jazz?" / "Don't make me do this," Jasper pleaded, his voice soft. *sound of whip* -zorro style-

those are some of the lines I liked best till about halfway through, and going to post now before I finish reading cause otherwise this will get chubbier w/ quotes and you don't need to be remindedof lines you already know. But gotta say, given the angst of the moment, I don't know how you made the drama be absorbed easier in such a fun way... *bow  in wonder*

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Thank you so much! :)

Very good =D

 

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Thanks! I'll be posting a new chapter this week.

Time travel is so odd.  If Elena took Renesmee & Rosalie now, doe schapter 1 still happen?

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Good question! The answer to that is in the next chapter. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviwing.

I as well as the people from the prev. two comments was wondering how was the rapid growth in renesme was gonna play in taking her away from her parents... and the low number of reviews too!

It not that often one can find good Vamp AU, be it Canon or not... I got hooked with your story straight away!

Author's Response:

Hi there! Yes, her rapid growth will play a role in being away from her parents. I can't say too much without spoiling the plot. We have a ways to go before we find out. :)

Yeah, I would love more reviews. Who wouldn't? LOL! I'm just grateful that I have readers such as yourself who are enjoying the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)