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Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a hot outtake from the story! So primal, so imtense! You've written it exactly the way I pictured their first time in the story.
You definitely have a way with words....Luv how your mind works!
Chyla
Reviewer: Raebeth (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my!! (Fanning myself) I love this side of Edward!! I also love how the monster is melding with him in some positive ways. The monster isn't going to just go away, and this is a great example of how that will all work out well in the end.
Reviewer: lovepeacelove70 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
cant wait to hear more of bellas pov, and more of downward spiral!!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2012 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
This dual personality of Edward - here and in the main story - is such an interesting development. I wonder if is something he needs to be cured of or will prove to be essential for the follow up. Where I hope to see the downfall of the Volturi.
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Who doesn't want a partner to sometimes just take what they want. It's hot. I don't blame Bella one bit!
Reviewer: katees (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
When I clicked over to your profile looking for an update, you couldn't believe my happiness at finding this.
I loved her POV of these events and fully undertand to be close to him after so long apart. Not to mention how hot the monster is!
P.S. Loved how they both equate him to a big cat. More animalistic Lionward, please.
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
H-O-L-Y C-A-T-S! I made the mistake of reading this at work! I broke out in a cold sweat, Girl!
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, you really know how to turn on the lemons xx I have to go and hug someone now - guess who that might be lol!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
WOW. But why an outake? It would help with the understanding of the main story and Edward's state of mind.
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
Now that was truly HOT! SIZZLING!!!!
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