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Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 29

EEEPPPPP! This is killing me! I must have more! LOL. I love that line too! I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure the movie that line is from was Erin Brockovich, but I never saw the movie, and I couldn't find the quote online. I thought it fit the scenario perfectly. Even if Edward can't remember his human life, I think he is still very much a product of the era he lived in. Even though he's also lived through all the ensuing social changes, I think he is still very much an Edwardian era man. Could you just imagine his shock at his mate saying something like that? But like I said, he has lived through all the social changes of the 20th century, so I think that shock would be tempered.

The teaser for chapter 30 is on the forums page under Shameless Plugs.  Fair warning: Before you check it out, let me remind you--I'm evil.

 

 

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 29

EAMC... Come on, Bella, you're a smart, Edward-obsessed girl... You have to figure this one out!



Author's Response:

The clues are building up. But remember, we're already in mid-February, so Bella's been there for several weeks already. The clues are building up, but they're spaced out. It's not a daily thing.  I don't think Edward can help himself, really.  Even if he can't yet admit it, he wants her to know him. The big Oh, My God! scene is only a couple chapters away now!  In the meantime, Edward and Bella grow closer.  I hope it will be enough to keep you all entertained until the cat is let out of the bag!

A teaser for chapter 30 is up on the forums page under Shameless Plugs.  Fair warning: Before you check it out, let me remind you--I'm evil.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 29

Is Edward droping clues on pourpouse? From his thoughts it doesn't seem like it, but I don't think a vampire could fool himself, LOL.

 



Author's Response:

The clues are building up. But remember, we're already in mid-February, so Bella's already been there for several weeks.  Yeah, the clues are building up, but they're spaced out. It's not a daily thing.  I don't think Edward can help himself, really.  Even if he can't yet admit it, he wants her to know him. The big moment is only a couple chapters away now!  In the meantime, Edward and Bella grow closer.  I hope it will be enough to keep you all entertained until the cat is let out of the bag!

A teaser for chapter 30 is up on the forums page under Shameless Plugs.  Fair warning: Before you check it out, let me remind you--I'm evil.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 29

The burning he felt for Bella had nothing to do with her blood and was nowhere near his throat.

 

hahaha very well put and so nice to know! lovely chapter thinking Bella will put all the clues together soon...

 



Author's Response:

I loved that bit too! 

There are only a couple more chapters till the big "OH MY GOD" scene.  I hope it will satisfy everyone who's waited so very long for it. In the meantime, Edward and Bella will grow closer.  I hope it will be enough to keep you all entertained until the cat is let out of the bag!

There is a teaser for chapter 30 on the forums page under Shameless Plugs, but fair warning before you read it--I'm evil.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: amethyst83 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 29

I hope the metaphorical s**t hits the fan soon.  I hope Bella doesn't go too crazy when she knows the truth, I hope she understands why Edward couldn't just tell her...

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

The shit that hits the fan will be external, not Bella's reaction, and I'll give them some happy time together before the trouble starts.  When she finds out the truth, she will run the entire gamut of emotion, but I think we can all guess how she'll feel when it really sinks in that Edward is Edward.  You'll be able to see for yourself in just a couple more chapters.  Until then, Edward and Bella grow closer.  I hope it will be enough to keep you all entertained until the cat is let out of the bag!

 

Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 29

There are no words left to praise you as you should be praised for your magnificent work. These cliffhanger endings are going to kill me one of these days. But then again, every ending is a cliffhanger because the story goes on long after the author has said his or her piece and left. Anyway, I love this story. You know that by now. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Happy Writing,

Iri

 



Author's Response:

I agree. I think that's very true of a good story, after the book is closed, the story goes on in the reader's mind. 

There is a teaser up on the forums page for chapter 30, but fair warning before you read it--I'm evil.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 28

The moment between Bella and Edward at their desk was precious.

I can't understand why she would give away Edward's letters, even to Michael. She could send him copies.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the desk scene!

Bella will send copies of the letters.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

 

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 27

Dang - not the wolves again, maybe on their way to save Bella? I'm glad Charlie stands by Tanya now that he knows. I love his view on judging people and vamps by their actions. It's good to see Bella's attraction to vampy Edward.



Author's Response:

Those damn dogs!  They just don't get it, do they?

I could see a cop taking that view point about judging people by their own actions and not by others'.

Bella's attraction will only grow, and then she'll know the truth in just a few more chapters.  But until then, their relationship will grow.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 9

I onlt just started reading your wonderful story and i know the answer is just an hours reading from now but i just wanted say that they didn't sail on the titanic because it never made it to NYC.

Author's Response:

It really surprised me how many people said they couldn't have been on the Titanic because it never reached NYC.  I just looked it up, there were 306 Americans on board returning home.  212, first class, 51 second class, and 43 third class.  Look at Jack Dawson from the movie.  He was an American returning home.  In real life, some of the most famous Titanic passengers were American - Molly Brown, The Astors, the Strauses.  Granted they were several rungs higher that the Masens, but the Masens absolutely *could* have been on the first sailing.  Molly Brown's first class cabin cost $130.  Edward will be shown later in the fic (already posted, but you might not have gotten to it yet.) spending $10 on a camera.  The reason was that they were booked for June, but they could have been on the maiden voyage returning home.

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

Just started reading and the first six chapters have me hooked

Author's Response:

Oh, it's déjà vu all over again.

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

Just started reading and the first six chapters have me hooked

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 28

Bella still doesn't realize that she feels comfortable around Edward because he is her Edward.  Granted the memories they shared aren't there, but the emotions/love is the same. Learning that Elizabeth died also from the flu because she refused to listen to Carlisle's instructions to stay in bed and take care of herself was difficult.  Edward living just long enough to know his mom died. But to learn he probably didn't even know his mom was ill because of being heavily medicated and high fever and die in her mind alone.  We know Carlisle saved him by changing him into a vampire which Bella's dad, Charlie knows he is. Bella willing to send her letters from Edward to Michael for them to know more of Edward is such a sweet gesture.  Too bad the real Edward won't be able to have access to them to know more about himself from back then and his relationship with Bella before he died human. Bella should send copies of the letters maybe not the originals, since they are her connections to him. Jake needs to be careful how he makes comments regarding the Cullens.  Charlie knows the truth.  Bella doesn't but she has deep feelings for them especially Edward and Alice.  She thinks she is substituting this Edward for her Edward Masen.  It's actually comically since they are the same person.  Just his memories from then were wiped out from the flu/fever and his change.  Looking forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

I do so love long reviews!

There will still be a lot more hard stuff for Bella to go through, but she won't go through it alone this time.

Bella will send copies of the letters.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

Jake doesn't know how deeply Bella cares for Edward, but he knows how Edward feels about Bella from his basically marking his territory at the campsite in August.

Thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 28

I really hope Bella sends copies & hangs on to the originals.  I also hope she re-reads ALL of them before she send s the copies off



Author's Response:

They will be copies.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

Thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: JlT (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 28

Sooo soo good is all I can say.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 28

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: marabenefici23forever (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 28

Over the past 2 days I haven't been able to put this story down. Thank you. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Oh,déjà vu

 

Reviewer: marabenefici23forever (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 28

Over the past 2 days I haven't been able to put this story down. Thank you. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 28

I keep having to guess how it's going to happen. How is Bella going to find out who the Cullens really are and that Edward Cullen is her Edward. How is she going to react? How much pointless arguing will it take to convince him to changer her? So many different possibilities that keep my mind dancing among the could-be's. I look forward to the next chapter. =)

Happy Writing,

Iri

 



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm afraid you'll just have to wait and see, but it's not too too far off, and I think enough will happen between now and then to keep you entertained.

I'm just about to put the next chapter in the validation queue, thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Sweet4RPatz (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 28

Loved it!! Thank you so much for the update, you made my day. I love that Bella called Michael. The whole time she is talking to him I can imagine Edward sitting in the tree outside listening.....sigh! So excited for more, thanks again!



Author's Response:

Edward is on a hunting trip, he didn't hear the phone call.  I'm glad so many people seem to like the 21st century Masens.  We're not done with them yet!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 28

I get so excited when I see that you updated ! I just love your story and I think you are doing such a good job with all the people and the history. No reason to reply. I just wanted you to know how much fun I am having reading. I do love all the dog references.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I get excited when I see reviews!  I like the dog insults too.  I think Edward is too polished in canon, I wanted to show the rough, 17-year-old underneath. 

Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 28

How about photocopy the letters or even digitalise?  That way Bella could happily give the letters without the personal loss. 
So Bella has news on this family for Ed after the big reveal too.



Author's Response:

They will be copies.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

We're not done with the 21st Century Masens yet!

Thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 28

I hope she scans and e-mails PDFs to Mic. In her position I could never give up the originals.



Author's Response:

They will be copies.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

Thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 28

Another great chapter:)  I get so excited when I see that you have updated!!  Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I get excited when I see reviews!

Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 28

Its always such a treat to see that you have updated!  It's hard to be patient but whatever you write is always worth it.  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

I'm not a very patient person, myself. 

Thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 28

Oh, no! She can't mail the letters to Mic without Edward seeing them first!



Author's Response:

They will be copies.  She wouldn't part with the originals for anything.  I should've made that clear, but it will be in the next chapter.

Thanks for revieiwng!

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