I am really loving this story! I tried to review the second chapter, but it just jumped to the third chapter. I like your writing style.

SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!

LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! I'm so excited for their date, I can't wait to see what they do and how the night ends!!! xoS

Fabulous! I love it when he feels the need to make a point :D

I think you may be trying to kill us. Omg that was so hot, especially considering they didn't even Fuck. You have to update so soon

YAYYYYY!!! So jake is trying to make trouble, but Edward kelps her oiut again!! XO S

Whew, fans self indeed. Your Edward is blissfully hot! Keep me, I mean 'em coming. ;-)

If my sons presented me with a phone-bill that high I'd probably keel over backwards and not stand up for a long time.

Jacob is one persistent f**er and though Edward and Bella both tried to make him see there is no chance I don't expect him to leave Bella alone in the near future. Being Bella's chauffeur comes in handy, he's always around to ward off the competition.

Oh no! Jake is worrying me!

Lovely!  Thank you!

damn!!!!

Well...hot hot hot damn! Yes...it's definitely a three "hot" kind of situation, and they haven't even "done it" (wink...yes...sometimes I act like I'm 12 lol) and wow! So much intensity there, and I have to agree, "the one" will do that to you! Now...so perfect that Edward was sleeping in the next morning, because if I was to guess, I would have to say that either, !) He couldn't sleep most of the night because she was across the hall, and finally fell asleep at some point or 2) He could finally rest knowing that Bella felt the same way he did, and that she wasn't with Emmett, or he wasn't listening to see if she was calling Emmett in the middle of the night, lol. Now....damn..breakfast with these two gets hotter every friggin day...helll yes! I knew he had to be watching her, watch him...or something like that...haha. He knew it! He could probably sense she was near! I'm surprised the heat in the damn kitchen wasn't setting off the fire alarms...hahahah. That would have been GREAATT if the fire department called in because the fire alarm was wired into the central control center, and they couldn't understand why it kept going off, either from their burning their breakfast again, or the heat from these two...haha. Loved how he finds her clothes so fascinating and it always puts him on edge, and then however he is dressed, swim trunks, jeans or a suit...humada humada humada....can't even speak...hehe. He is such a sweet guy, and of course has her coffee waiting, but luck have it, her truck has issues and he of course volunteers to drive her, blocking the taxi cab number from view....whoa, so sweet. OK...Got to say...Hands Down...One of the best school drop offs ever ever written....damn! Edward pulling her back....kissing her with everything he has.....and then finally when Bella seems confused, albeit happy, Edward clues her in....and Jake looks ticked....hahahah. I knew that Jake would bring up the whole MIke thing...and although Bella took the high road...damn, I was wondering if her knees could have said it better. She is a better person than me. Such a jerk...and I think a restraining order might be necessary, or maybe Edward will be the restraining order, holding Jake to the wall, while Bella repeatedly beats him within an inch of his life. Yeah...a Cullen Restrainig Order would be fine! When Edward gets to the school, and looks all scrumptious...GAH!! I swear my heart was skipping all over the place. Alice seems more than pleased, and when Edward tells Alice thank you for taking care of Bella while he was away, I found my awwww moment. Even then he though of Bella as his, and needing to be safe and happy. Yeah, I doubt Alice knows anything about the "real" Edward, well, except that he's nice and he's hot...haha. Bella is hot for Edward in that suit. I love it! When Bella gets to work, yeah, her coworker Kate notices the hot landlord already. Loved it! Edward of course had to pick up Bella in that suit...he knew she was hot for it. What guy wouldn't want his girl to be hot and bothered for him, and besides it was probably payback for the shorts the other day, and the sweater this morning, not to mention her underwear in the laundry room..hehe. Yeah...payback a little and trying to get her worked up! It was so hot to see Jealousward take that phone from Bella and tell Jake that she is "spoken" for made me swoon., just like Bella did when Edward bit her cookie...hmmm! Yummy! When these two get going...damn...damn...damn. Can heat up a room again, and that little action at the door...yeah...wow...ok...just a taste of what is to come (no pun intended) I"m sure. LOVED IT! When Bella finally let go...Edward was sure of it! She finally experienced the big "O" at his hands, literally!!! They have to postpone??? Hmmm? Wondering what yummy things are to come, and also...are they finally going to sleep in the same bed? I don't know that I could sleep outside my guys bed after a night like that...hehe. You made my morning. I still feel yucky, but it made me smile times than I could count! By the way, the two fics you recommended...two of my favorites. Never miss reviewing one of these two wonderful author's stories. I ...ahem...sometimes read and review here, or on another site...lol. You're daughter's phone bill.....yikes. Been there one time, not fun! I see lots of dishes and chores coming her way....and hey...that could work to my advantage...leaving you lots of free time to type away! Only kidding! Love your story to death, and your facebook site is the bomb! Love the teasers! Xoxoxoxoxo