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Reviewer: Annalori (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Pure Romance party?
Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
SEX TOY PARTY!!!!! That's my guess as to what Bella's mom invited her to through facebook.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Thank you!
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Mama Swan is having a sex toy party lol. This chapter was...(I don't want to say hot cause that word is overused), but dammit there is no better word for it. HOT HOT HOT. LOL okay looking forward to next chapter.
Vicki
ilive2read (ff)
Ilivetoread (fb)
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Has to be a fucker wear party LOL!!!! Great chapter though
Reviewer: tellytubby (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Yay!!! So glad to read an update! I loved how she shot jake in the groin, haha! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Holy fucking shit! They finally did it! That was one of the hottest sexing scenes I've ever read. Who knew paintball could be a form of foreplay? *googling paintball places in Illinois right not* Loved the chapter, obviously.
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
I loved the rest of the chapter. SO glad Edward wasn't being a jerk about her kicking his ass at paintball. Being turned on by it is perfect acceptable though. :)
Absolutely loved their first time, it was perfect, and totally worth the wait. Looking forward to the future lemons!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Go Bella, go girl, you show those men how it's to be done. Winning overall at paintball. Loved it when Bella got caught using Edward's computer for research. Had him going from the start. Watching her during paintball just kept adding to his sexual tension. So much that he couldn't talk/touch her on the way home. Too bad Bella thought he was a poor sport about losing the title of champion of paintball. What Bella didn't know that wasn't the reason and her running upstairs totally confused Edward. He was ready to pick up where they left off in his office. I think he made up for leaving her frustrated before the paintball tournament. Meeting her in her room's shower. Edward must have stopped at the store before picking up Jasper to have condoms in his pocket. Great shower sex between Bella and Edward. sounds like Edward is looking for another round downstairs. Bella is interested in feeding the body to kept up her strength. I think she's going to need it. Both have expressed their feelings for each other. Hot and steamy. Can't wait for future chapters.
Reviewer: dreamtalker (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Yay they finally got it on! & in the shower too - obv a man of many talents (damn where can I find one of those?)
Loved the paintball match - so glad Bella didn't back down & let Edward win. Not sure I would have managed to get out of there without dragging him behind a bush or something though lol
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Finally - Bella and Edward scored in every respect, ha, ha. I was a bit worried Edward might really reveal himself as a sore loser.
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
I forget to mention Bella shooting Jake! How could I have forget THAT! It was the second best part! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Yay! It wasn't medicore or original! I like that you mixed it up a bit with the shower thing.
And I also really liked how you built up the tension with Bella's interesting internet search at the start. That was great! I've never read that before!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, and the paintballing was awesome!
Reviewer: CuLLeN_VaMp1918 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Thank you!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Outstanding!!! Loved it.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Haha! I love that it wasn't sore loser Edward, but seriously turned on Edward! Paint and guns will never be the same for them!
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
love,love,love this story
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
hot, hot hot
Reviewer: Talyareth (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Awseome! Love the crotch shot!
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 9. Overnight Company
EDWARD AND EMMETT! LMAOF!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
Awesome!!
Reviewer: Raven Sterling (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
fucking epic
Reviewer: Topsy Krett Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 18. Bullseye
I. Need. A. Smoke! LOL. Loved it! I loved that you had Bella so confident, even when Edward was a little pissy about her kicking his ass lol. And Jake...well...I actually laughed right out loud!!! Shot to the pills! Take that! Can't wait for the next chapter :) Take care!
Reviewer: ajpras1220 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1. Just My Luck
i love your story!
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