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Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Excellent view....
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Marriage proposal and acceptance with plans in the far future. Really sorry this story is nearing its end.
Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Im so happy that Bella started interacting with Masen more, it was so sweet to read! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Yessss to the "yes"! They settled in quite well with little Masen.
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
As always, an amazing chapter. Nice to see everything working out for them. Bella makes a good mother for Masen.
While sad to see another good story finish, I feel this is around the right time to end it. Can't wait for the last chapter(s) to see the finishing touches.
Until next time.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2013 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Love, love, love it!! Such a sweet story!
Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
I can't believe it's almost over. I have really enjoyed this story (and usually I avoid the surprise baby stories). Nicely done.
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
:)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
squeeee omg what an amazing intense chap and I agree they have time to make teh announcemnet plus today was aboutthe babies... Cant wait for more even if its bittersweet!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
she has fit into place perfectly :) love it, can't believe this is the last chap before the epi. great job as always!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Such a damn great story! This chapter was so sweet. So wonderful to see Bella so settled with the baby, and how Edward looked at Bella with such adoration at how she has become the mother to is son that he wanted. She takes over to make sure Edward gets sleep, and it was perfect that he knew to ask her then to marry him. So sweet. She knows Masen the same way she knows Edward, completely. How his feet don't need to be covered, haha. The way all of the family members see Bella, and how she behaves with the baby, I was teary. Adored that Esme, Renee, the Grandmother...all see the same thing, and when Bella says "our son"....awwwww...teary. Can honestly see it happening. Sometimes instincts take over so suddenly, it doesn't matter if it's a baby or a grown child...I've seen it in action. Completely understandable. Bella is so mature and wise for her age too! The shower sounded great. Bella is so careful with "their" son and it is just so sweet. Finally Edward and Bella can have some hot lemony moments since Masen is starting to sleep better. I agree that Masen just wanted Bella...a woman...for whatever reason. She was the key. Now Edward and Bella will start their lives together....with their son....LOVE IT!!!!! Such an amazing story that has had so many twists and turns...but all wonderful. Can't believe we are coming to the end, sniff sniff. I always feel a bit sad when I come to the end of one of your masterpieces. I have a short list of favorite authors...and you're on it! I enjoy many authors...but favorites...yeah...short list!!!! Keep bringing us your beauties!!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Loved it, it was a beautiful chapter.
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
<3 So going to miss these two.....Great story tho, thanks sooo much!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Great chapter!
I'm curious about Bella's logic, though.
"I want to wait until Masen's a little older before we get married," she says out of nowhere. "I want him to be a part of it, and I do want to finish school and get started on my career, so that should give us a few years. Are you okay with that?"
I understand wanting Masen to be old enough to be part of the wedding. But what does getting married have to do with finishing school and starting a career. Those are usually arguments for not having children yet, not for not getting married yet. These days, getting married doesn't even impact taxes and insurance. So why the wait?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Great chapter! I loved it!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
I just hat tht it's so close to bing over i love this story ...but I love all your stories ...so what next
Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
I love this chapter but then again I've loved the whole story from the beginning. I am sad that this is the last chapter we'll get from him but I can't wait to see if they have more kids of their own.
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
Love this story. I am however a bit sad to see it coming to an end. Thank you for sharing this journey with me.
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
I loved the proposal!
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 37. Jumping in Head First
awww i was going a bit nuts waiting for this chapter but soo worth it the shower was perfect i could see them all holding baby masen in my head
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
Oh wow, he proposed and not because he was sleep deprived, lol. I can empathise with Edward and Bella in this chapter. Getting to know your baby is amazing and scary, trying to work out why they're crying when you've done everything you can think of, it's so frustrating. My daughter had difficulty settling to sleep when she was ten months old after her dad left us. It would take me hours every night to get her to sleep, I was dead on my feet, finally I shoved one of her teddies up my shirt against my skin for a whole day, needless to say I stayed in that day, lol, then at bedtime I put the teddy in her cot along with the shirt I'd made sure to wear for a couple of days. I laid her on the shirt with her teddy near by and bingo, no more crying or me soothing her for hours on end, she thought I was still there as my scent was surrounding her. The simplest ideas are the best, just like Bella unwrapping Masen's feet.
Depending on how far in the future the epilogue is I'm thinking that it could be Masen's POV, if not then maybe Charlie's.
Jane x
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2013 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
yessssssssssss!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 35. A Wedding and a Delivery . . . or Two
Bwahahahahaha!! It was bound to happen that Bella and, by association, Edward would walk in to that room and see Renee in all her splendid glory. Awww, Bella's so taken with Claire, just wait until she's older and she's complaining to Bella about walking in on their mum and dad in compromising positions, lol. Rose and Emmett's wedding sounded perfect. So Edward's baby is coming early, will he have the same birthday as Claire? It would be perfect if they did.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 34. Best Laid Plans
I'm so glad that the baby will be a boy. I think it will be easier for Bella to bond with him as he'll probably look more like Edward than Irina. I love the idea of Edward incorporating his birth parents name into his sons name. It ties them all together and shows that Edward harbours no ill feelings towards them for giving him up for adoption. Bella was right about her room, it was the logical choice and anyway, they're living together properly now so she might as well move into and take over Edward's room, bwahahahahaha!!
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 33. Communication is Key
Rose and Esme made some very valid points that have helped Bella a lot. She's managed to get her head around things more and seeing Irina and talking to her has awoken her maternal side. I think it's quite a surprise to Bella to be feeling so much for the baby so soon given everything that she felt at the beginning. Maybe now they can both start looking forward to when the baby will be born and bringing him or her home. Lol, even though it turns out that Irina does have feelings and a heart instead of a brick swinging in her chest, I still don't like her.
Jane x
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