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Reviews For Serenity's Prayer
Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Loving this story!  thankps for the update hope to see another soon :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!! I'm working on Ch31 as we speak :)

Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Loving this story!  thankps for the update hope to see another soon :-)

Reviewer: Cergog (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

This story is brilliant! Real life kept me from reading all the chapters in one chunk but it just made me eager to get back to reading it. I love the way you've changed things up. Bella is obviously a very strong character in this. I think you and your beta are doing a fab job :-) can't wait to see what happens to charlie. My money is on victoria



Author's Response:

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I adore "strong Bella" and think it makes for a better dynamic between her and Edward. I cannot wait to share Charlie's saga as it unfolds, and I hope everyone enjoys it!

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Hmmm. Nice cliffhanger. Wonder what happened to Charlie?



Author's Response:

That is the question of the moment, isn't it? We'll learn a little bit more in Ch31, which I'm working on right now :) :)

Reviewer: Wrenegade (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2013 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Oh I hope Charlie's alright! Great Chapter, had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! I've never written suspense before, and I'm glad it's going so well. Ch31 is being worked on right now :)

Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Oh poor Bella... :-( I hope Charlie is okay.



Author's Response:

I know... I feel so bad for Bella right now. And things are only getting started....

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

omg omg omg come on Charlie call Bella anything show up sniffle....post again soon we need to kmow hes ok!!



Author's Response:

I know! I know! I'm working on Ch31 right now :) :)

Reviewer: Sandy (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2013 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

ok didn't get what I thought I would out of that.  Really thought Charlie had run off with Sue or something and you were going to clear that up.  Thought maybe they were having wild times somewhere.  I am so nervous right now about it.  I think.  I think I need Edward's special gifts myself; wish you had shared them with us. Yes.  I must go away and imagine.

Great chapter love



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy! Thank you so much!! I like that I can keep you guessing! And my apologies for not sharing Edward's special gifts with you, LOL. Bella wanted them all to herself ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

very strange.....i'm still wondering about Victoria, but if he has no future at all as of yet then it must be a wolf....right?

Author's Response:

His missing future is the most disturbing part to me. Hopefully we'll get more answers in Ch31, which I'm editing right now :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

Neat chapter!  Interesting timing for this all to happen.  I'm starting to wonder if Victoria didn't hear about the honeymoon and target Charlie while the rest of them weren't looking.  Could he be the newest member of her growing vampire army?

Lots going on!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

The timing is suspicious, isn't it? It's as if someone was waiting for the Cullens to let their guard down. But who? Maybe we'll find out a little more in Ch31... which I'm working on right now... :) :)

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 30: Missing

So I take it Jacob hasn't phased yet.  Don't leave us hanging about Charlie too long.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, has he? Maybe we'll find out in the next chapter...

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Um ... shisit! NOOOO! Cliffees are so mean!  haha

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

omg omg omg omg  You cant end it there sniffle no way... hes gotta be at liek Sues house or something... Post again soon

Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

omg! love cliffies ... more please :-)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

missing??? like "Victoria is behind this" missing????

Author's Response:

Missing like "You'll have to wait and see" missing ;)

Reviewer: Sandthestorm (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2013 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Turnabout

Oh my goodness I can't start another story not while Im in the middle of one already.  How will I manage this.  I just ahv eto put the other on hold.  OMG this is so good.  Bella shure should have called his bluff.  Just long enough to say one world, one and show a different emotion.  Such a great plot idea.

 

Sandy



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy!!! I'm honored that you're adding "Serenity's Prayer" to your reading rotation!! I cannot wait to hear what you think as their story unfolds :) :)

Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Bad husband. He should have woken Bella hours ago if he thought something was wrong with Charlie. Unless...Alice can't see him because he is bumping uglies with Sue???

 

PS. I love the aprons. ;)



Author's Response:

"Bumping uglies"... hehehehe, that's a good one! Edward plans to explain himself in the next chappie, so we'll see what he says.

LOL, thanks! I thought the aprons were fun :)

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

missing??? uh oh... not good.



Author's Response:

Let's hope he's wrong...

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Maybe Charlie will be immortal too.  I like stories where he and Bella can keep their father/daughter relationship.



Author's Response:

There's an idea! We'll just have to see how this plays out... ;)

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 28: Happy New Year

Now that's the way to ring in the new year.



Author's Response:

Better than confetti, eh? ;)

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 27: Breaking Dawn

What a shower.



Author's Response:

Ohhhh YEAH. That was as much fun to write as it was to read, I assure you ;)

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Ultimate Gift

What a cool tattoo.  Great honeymoon night with nice touch of citrus.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mel!! I thought the tattoo idea was pretty cool and that it would make the perfect Christmas gift for Edward.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Uh Oh.  I hope Charlei is found soon



Author's Response:

Uh-oh is right. If Edward doesn't know something, that's NOT a good sign.

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Neat chapter!  Interesting stuff going on.  The suspense is high as I wonder about impending pregnancy, and now with Charlie missing...  I've got to wonder what's coming up!  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, thanks!!! There is a lot going on right now. And I have a feeling things are only going to get more complicated...

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 29: The More Things Change

Victoria!

Author's Response:

You think? Hmmm, we shall see...

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