Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 4: Escape
Great chapter. How will Bella gain Edward's trust and what does Edward have planned for Bella? They both seem to want to get even but you can just tell it's all going to fail. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baileybonesxxx (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Escape
I have seriously checked each day this week to see if you had posted yet! Love this story! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Escape
Curiouser & curiouser. Please let Bella give Newton a good kick where it hurts should he try anything
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Shades of a boy band I once knew...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Captured
Can't wait to see what's really going on!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Captured
Very interesting. I want to hear more about the puzzle Edward is trying to solve
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Captured
Great read!!!!! this story has been very entertaining so far. I feel Edward and Bella will have a love/hate relationship very quickly . Can' wait for more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Captured
Great chapter. I love how Bella keeps fighting Edward, even when he's saving her from James. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Two things:
1) I've missed your work.
2) I love this fic!
Keep it coming :-)
Reviewer: kcashley123 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
This chapter was so intense! I loved it. Please update soon. :)
Reviewer: BRITANY14 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
please update soon
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Very interesting story. So many questions! If Edward didn't kill Charlie, who did? How did he get the cutlass? Why does Bella think he =killed Charlie? Where does Edward draw the line between rape and a good bit of fun?
Please update soon
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Great job
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Looking forward to this story
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
huzzah! I love this so far, and look forward to many more enjoyable - and perhaps lemon-y - chapters. Thanks.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Great chapter. What will happen to Bella on board the Intrepid. I don't trust James at all. What will Edward do when he finds Bella? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
That was an incredibly visual chapter, down to the oozing blood. Really fascinating and completely different. I guess Edward didn't kill Charlie, and I'm dying to know the whole story!!! Damn Bella is a tough girl! Took out Edward and Jasper...lol! Then swam to the other boat, as we visualize the cutlass shining in the sun! WOW! Not sure what this fun is about, but Edward should think twice before messing with Bella...haha. Love it!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Brillliant and very descriptive beginning. I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! A skinny little boy, nah, it had to be Bella! I'm not sure what is up with the sword that hangs on Edward's wall, but obviously it belonged to Bella's dad. I'm not sure about the Enchanted Lady, but this sounds extremely interesting. Not sure what Edward will be able to do once he finds out he has a woman in board, but to keep her safe, I have a feeling he will need to marry her...hmmmm! Just a thought, lol. Reading on!!
Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Reminiscent of "Treasure Island" and "Captain Blood" with Errol Flynn. Gotta love a swashbuckler! Especially with Edward, despite only one eye and a scar. Yummm. DJ
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Taking the Lady
Well, she was more than lucky! But I want to know the truth! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
I really like this fic so far. Can't wait to see what happens between Captain Edward and Bella. Will he find out her true identity soon?
Reviewer: Marie0912 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
awww...! There is no "next" button :(
I loved it, this is a really good start and a story with a lot of potential! I am hoping for some juicy lemons (cos they prevent scurvey after all;) and some epic revalation and anxty romance and ... yeah :D this should be good!
Well done!!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, so it should be up soon. Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Sounds like fun, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Nice start, I like a Bella with guts, although if she's not careful they might get spilt! Love a ripping yarn so looking forward to more.
Reviewer: kcashley123 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Boy, Smith
Omg soo good! Cant wait for more! Im bookmarking this on my ipod :D
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