loved it! with the adventure and romance, was a fantastic story :))) I can't believe it hasn't gotten more reviews....there's so much going for it!! 10 all the way :)

Wow!! Truly excellent ending!!! I've not commented on every chapter, but this whole story was " a good bit o' fun".  The characters were amazing and I loved how everything flowed so smoothly that you knew just where you left off when picking back up each chapter. I'm a bit ashamed to admit that I passed this story over a few times before finally adding it to my list and reading it all the way through. I'm so very glad that I did!

Great work, and I can't wait to read the Epi and anything else that you venture to write!

I loved this tale. Very well written!  Congratulations!  For an outtake, I would like to see their wedding and then their life as it progresses to a child. And then them settled and normal everyday life or what it was like. Thanks again for writing a great story!

dear tkegl,

i can't imagine the story has ended.. it has been one of my favourites so far!! can't wait for an outtake. or perhaps two. ;) :D 

Great ending to a great story.  So is Elizabeth descended from Edward & Bella or Carlisle & Esme?

:)

Yay! Yay! Yay!

Okay, I think you've had enough of that. Comtinuing on, they've finally admitted that they love each other! Yay! (:D) And Aro is dead! And Alice can be with Jasper! And Edward's cutting his hair... wait, he's not. Damn it! (Sorry, I don't like dreadlocks one little bit) 

Now, we need to know how it ends...

Epilogue, epilogue, epilogue time!

Ugh good ending! Can't wait for the epilogue.

Ahh! Cliffie! Why do I torture myself so? 

...can Newton die...?

Never mind my fleeting thoughts. I can't wait for the next chapter! Is this story winding down? It seems like it to me.

Oh, and I completely understand about the editing. I've already saved a bunch of your stories on PDF! Good luck with the publishing deal!

That was so much fun!  Glad Alice could make the party!

I knew it was Newton! I knew it! No, I didn't think it was Jacob for a second. Maybe once a few chapters ago, but it seemed to simple. Too obvious. And I was right! Though, admittedly, I didn't suspect Newton until early this chapter, but still. I never trusted him, though I thought that was stemming from me thinking he's going to harm Bella. (Please, please, please, don't let him! I'm begging!)

And Bella now knows the connection with the coin (even if I don't!). Yay! I have a feeling everything's going to come to a climax soon! Eeep!

Oh, and I'm actually excited that Edward won't 'take her innocence'. It just makes the lead up to it all that much more exciting. (You're not going to break fanfic rule here and actually not have that in the story are you?) *worried face*

I can't wait for two weeks time!

I knew Newton was blimy scurve teehee!!!  Love love love and I am so gald Bella figured it out and I wa sthinking tehy would have to pass through the locker.. lol I mean I always think of coins on teh eyes to pay the toll come to me a biblical vs as if to cross t teh otehr side through the locker kind of thing... Love love love post again soon!

great part. ahaahaa bella and her jugs ;no punn; lol. someone needs to take aro out, i hope its bella lol.