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Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yup! Still here, but somehow I missed the previous update. Sorry about that. I had to go back to learn Bella's story. Very cool ideas. Thank you!
Author's Response: Don't worry, dino - I'm just glad you're still here. :)
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
Of course I'm still with you! This is an amazing story! I LOVE this chapter! Please, please, please update again soon!!!
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
More more more more more!!!! Always more!!! I love this story!!
Thank you!
Reviewer: Azalyn Branegan (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a heart wrenching back story. Poor Bella. And I'm almost afraid to see what Edward has in store. Great story!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
I just discovered this story last night and I can not put it down. I love it. Very creative twist to the mate issue and I love Edward's maturity, patience, and posessiveness. Can not wait for more. Thanks
Author's Response: Welcome, Ma Cherie - hope you enjoy the story! Thanks for the note.
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh man, loved her back story. James.......what a prick. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: mollytx (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 14
This is so absolutely amazing! I love what you have done with this story. This is one of the best I have read in a long time.
Author's Response: Thanks, Molly. That's really sweet of you to say :)
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yes! I can't wait to see that!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
Bella, it's time to pull your head out of your ass! hmph. If she wants to be all emo, that's fine, but to not TRY to be his mate, or I don't know, stop pouting in your room like a brat and get to KNOW the boy, you're gonna kill him too!! hmph! If I were him, I'd head up the coast to AK and suck me some coven!
>:< Does ALice foresee me slapping Bella? hahaha! :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
This tale JUST got a ton more interesting! Not that it wasn't interesting before, otherwise it wouldn't be in my favorites and I wouldn't be in awe of your story, but the fact that James is out there... and your Edward appears (not only) to be incredibly more powerful a fighter than SM's Edward, but also has the Volturi in his corner as well.
Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response: Thanks, JR. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Next chapter should be posted any day.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
yikes. that sounds ominous and rape-y.:(
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
lol..has Bella done the vampire equivalent of the Walk of Shame??? tee! THanks for the blood and the dry hump, dude..I'm gonna bounce! tata!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
woohooooooo!!! :)
No wonder Bella's nervous - to be basically hit with a club on the head and dragged off for monkey sex and blood swapping? not exactly a night at the opera! Jasper must have felt some SERIOUS lust pouring off of Edward!
Run, Bella, indeed!!!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Can't wait for Edward to open that can...
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
Uh,Oh I hope Edward does kick Ass!
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
AMAZING! I make a little scream of excitement each time I see an update... My fiance thinks I'm crazy :-)
Love the story, the romance, possessive Eddie and can't wait for the whoop-ass.
Thanks! x
Author's Response: You're so sweet. Tell your fiance that my husband thinks the same thing when I have my own squeels over updated stories :)
Next chapter up very soon.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
dun dun dun. lol. james i see will be a future problem.
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 14
yeaheaheah@!!!
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 14
So thats what it was all about...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
Squeeee OMG OMG OMG EPIC chap!!! I wonder if Bellas past will affect his future eating ahbits Iwould love to see him go totally veggie hahahaha
Author's Response:
LOL! I had a few readers ask that same question. But I can tell you that this Edward will definitely be staying a carnivore. He doesn't torture his victims. You'll see an example soon :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 14
open it baby! can't wait to see him in action
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 14
go edward
He will need to take James down - I like the twist in this story. The mating rituals are very interesting. I look forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: tiara (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 14
I stumbled on your fantastic story and just gobbled it up! So so so amazing!! I can't wait for more! Thank you for sharing your creativity with us! xoxo
Author's Response: So glad you're here, tiara. Hope you enjoy the crazy ride. If you happen to find a mate for yourself along the way, let me know :)
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 14
So Bella was kidnapped and kept as a kind of blood slave before James and Laurent went too far. I would liken Bella's experience to that of being kidnapped and raped and it's no wonder that when Edward turned up she reacted the way she did, who wouldn't.
I never thought of Bella's shield being the thing to protect her from James being able to track her. Now of course Edward has pointed this out and the realisation that James could still be looking for her putting all of her family in danger is disturbing to say the least. Will Edward and the Cullens try to teach Bella to extend her shield?
There's so much to think about. I can't wait for the next chapter. Lunch would be amazing, could you imagine.....alas it's a little too far to come. *sigh*
Jane x
Author's Response: Yeah - it's kind of like a vampire version of rape. Bella's shield is actually going to play very little in the story. It's just a sideline detail kind of thing. Glad you liked the chapter :) See you soon.
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