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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
please let him come back and be ok.....what if he finds James and he smells Bella on him!!!??? oh no......
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 15
Oh my, my, my..... I know how Bella feels, left hot and wanting MORE......I can't wait for these two to finally DO IT !!!! All that comes to mind is that moment from the movie Cocoon when those two finally "share themselves" and you see that huge fiery ball of energy bouncing off the walls until it finally makes its way into Jack.... that's how I picture these two it'll be explosive when you write it.... keep them coming please, that was a nice Easter gift. Happy Easter to you, Happy Spring, please don't let Edward get hurt, or delay his coming back to her while he is out there fighting his whatever it is you will have him fighting. Hopeless romantic here.
Author's Response: Wow - I've never seen Cocoon - now I need to rent it. Sounds great! Hope the explosive moment does your vision justice. You'll have to let me know. Thanks for the note.
Reviewer: mrslilycullen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 15
Loved it! :)
Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 15
Still with you, still love it. :-)
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oh Hell yes!!! Swwwweeeeettttt Mercy!!!! That was wonderful...not wonderful that Edward is being accused of something bad and having to leave his sweet Mate, who has finally come to the passionate understanding that she wants, and needs him.... I love the utterly unique twist that you put on this tale, while leaving those who are versed in the SM versions of Twilight, still somewhat in the know and loop of who the characters are in this story.... anxiously await the next update... Happy Easter!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Khans - so appreciate your note. That's exactly the take away I wanted for Bella in this chapter. See you soon. Next chapter is already submitted.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
Squeee oMG HOT HOT FUCK HAWT!!!! hahahahaha OMG that was just wow and Cais is an ass hat I mean come on.... can't wait for more post again soon gotta have more need more crave more OMG WOW!!!!
SQUEEEEEEEEEE
Author's Response: Ha!! LOL. Love this. Thanks, Silly Sad.
Reviewer: shelley39 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! Keep them coming...
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 15
Perfect.
Happy Easter/Passover/Spring whichever you celebrate.
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 15
Still with you 100 percent and now quite turned on.. *fans self*
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yup! Still here, but somehow I missed the previous update. Sorry about that. I had to go back to learn Bella's story. Very cool ideas. Thank you!
Author's Response: Don't worry, dino - I'm just glad you're still here. :)
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
Of course I'm still with you! This is an amazing story! I LOVE this chapter! Please, please, please update again soon!!!
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
More more more more more!!!! Always more!!! I love this story!!
Thank you!
Reviewer: Azalyn Branegan (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a heart wrenching back story. Poor Bella. And I'm almost afraid to see what Edward has in store. Great story!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
I just discovered this story last night and I can not put it down. I love it. Very creative twist to the mate issue and I love Edward's maturity, patience, and posessiveness. Can not wait for more. Thanks
Author's Response: Welcome, Ma Cherie - hope you enjoy the story! Thanks for the note.
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh man, loved her back story. James.......what a prick. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: mollytx (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 14
This is so absolutely amazing! I love what you have done with this story. This is one of the best I have read in a long time.
Author's Response: Thanks, Molly. That's really sweet of you to say :)
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yes! I can't wait to see that!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
Bella, it's time to pull your head out of your ass! hmph. If she wants to be all emo, that's fine, but to not TRY to be his mate, or I don't know, stop pouting in your room like a brat and get to KNOW the boy, you're gonna kill him too!! hmph! If I were him, I'd head up the coast to AK and suck me some coven!
>:< Does ALice foresee me slapping Bella? hahaha! :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
This tale JUST got a ton more interesting! Not that it wasn't interesting before, otherwise it wouldn't be in my favorites and I wouldn't be in awe of your story, but the fact that James is out there... and your Edward appears (not only) to be incredibly more powerful a fighter than SM's Edward, but also has the Volturi in his corner as well.
Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response: Thanks, JR. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Next chapter should be posted any day.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
yikes. that sounds ominous and rape-y.:(
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
lol..has Bella done the vampire equivalent of the Walk of Shame??? tee! THanks for the blood and the dry hump, dude..I'm gonna bounce! tata!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
woohooooooo!!! :)
No wonder Bella's nervous - to be basically hit with a club on the head and dragged off for monkey sex and blood swapping? not exactly a night at the opera! Jasper must have felt some SERIOUS lust pouring off of Edward!
Run, Bella, indeed!!!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Can't wait for Edward to open that can...
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
Uh,Oh I hope Edward does kick Ass!
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
AMAZING! I make a little scream of excitement each time I see an update... My fiance thinks I'm crazy :-)
Love the story, the romance, possessive Eddie and can't wait for the whoop-ass.
Thanks! x
Author's Response: You're so sweet. Tell your fiance that my husband thinks the same thing when I have my own squeels over updated stories :)
Next chapter up very soon.
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