Squeee omg omg omg intense!!!!  Holy hell I want you to post again right now that was amazing!!!  I mean I could feel teh pain and agony in every word and being such a visual reaer I could see them hovering while this was all going on I could see James thrashing in teh back ground until Rose demanded his removal I could see Edward attack carlisle and then take over her care so intense so visual so wow I can't wait for you to post more!!

I'm looking forward to retribution.  I'm glad Bella's blood poisoned him

OOOhhh, I can't wait to read the next chapter! I've been waiting for this story. 

Hurry up Edward, find Bella.  Edward's instinct were right to take him back to that cabin, I hope he gets there in time.  So, from your note, it would seem that the mix of Bella and Edward's blood isn't going to actually kill James, that's such a shame but then it would deny Edward the satisfaction of smashing him to bits and burning all the pieces when he gets there.

Will the Cullen's keep Charlie with them the whole time now or will they get him back into the care centre?  I'm glad he's safe.

I don't think Edward should blame himself for what's happened, I know he does but I think the Volturi still should have contacted him to let him know what was happening so he could be on his guard further.  I can't wait for Edward and the rest of them to catch up with James so he gets what he deserves.  I just hope Edward isn't too weak, he's going to go ballistic when he sees what he's done to Bella and what she's been through.

Jane x

too bad it won't kill him....but it will weaken him....right?

I love the exchanging of verses. This is a great story so far.  The plot is very original.

loved this chapter. i really needed it today. i have a newborn. thank you. my sanity thanks you too. i am so very much looking forward to retribution. bring on the wrath of edward and the cullens.

Author's Response:

Cherie - I have SO been in your shoes.  I'm so glad I was able to help provide that bit of sanity.  Wish I could bring you dinner or something.  Newborn months can be tough.  Hope you get some sleep.  Thanks for the note.

Squeee I am so glad he didn't get further with her....  I mean sniffle it was already so hard to read that he was sealing her loves marks I hopes she thinks to seal her own wounds a little venom on her fingers hsould do teh trick...Post again soon!

Great ch...amazing writing.

Sniffle so if R patz walke dup to day and asked us out right now we would have to say no because techically hes a stranger..sniffle..  A teacher my daughter had once told her class a stranger is a person your parents haven't met yet.  So if you ever see a stranger you don't go anywhere with teh unlesr your mom and dad tell you too..I was liek thats tsill sounds so so so wrong..  I just told my kids if a stranger comes up to you Scream Stranger Danger if its somebody you shouldn't be with you run to some one you are suppose to be with.  I would ratehr my friends laugh at me for having an over protective kid  then think oh a stranger is a future friend.. LOL

Ok I got off subject a bit but I loved this chap I am anxious as all hell for youto update..Bella needs to kill James herself as soon as she finds out her dad is safe she needs to fight or she will still have issues with never feeling free.. Post again soon!!

Author's Response:

The next chapter has already been submitted.  And I have to admit - I would tell my kids to stay away, but if it was RPatz - I would definitely have a hard time saying no. :)  Thanks for the note.

Holy hot sexin!!! WOW!!!

This is the time when you wish Bella had kept on eating her wheaties after she was changed!  Edward is going to go ballistic!

Author's Response:

Yes - and a ballistic Edward somehow turns me on somewhere deep inside :)

Mixed emotions regarding killing Heidi.  On one hand I saw the cold hard logic in it and then I also saw the arguement that she was a victim as well.  I know she was going to kill Charlie and that she was motivated by her libido, but the attraction was supernaturally induced nonetheless.  Yeah... I know Alice said to get rid of her... but how come Alice didn't see James take Bella? 

Still enjoying this thrilling ride and I can't wait until Edward, Jasper and Emmett catch up with James and dispose of him.