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Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 03:55 AM · On: Outtake #2
Great story. :)
Reviewer: pinistersis (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 11:56 PM · On: Outtake #2
"I have fantasies of us reading together on my leather couch in there".....Thank you for letting med read. Just love it. P.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2013 08:56 PM · On: Outtake #2
soooooooo happy you're writing a sequel!! *squeals!!*
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 02:56 PM · On: Outtake #2
sequel...oh my !!!!!!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 02:42 PM · On: Outtake #2
Poor Bella, to feel such grief and not be able to show it as she would like to or be able to attend Charlie's funeral, I think caused her just as much pain as the actual loss of her father. I can understand why you had to write this, Bella's pain at her loss pours off the page.
This is an amazing story and I've loved it from start to finish. I'm so happy that there's going to be a sequel, I can't wait......but I will, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: JlT (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 09:50 PM · On: Outtake #2
Such a great story! I love reading!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 05:13 PM · On: Outtake #2
I was worried there for a bit! Bella has a tendency to be a little too maudlin, but I guess Edward knows how to drag her out of her funk! Even if it's making her feel guilty about his own neglect!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 05:43 AM · On: Outtake #2
i'm so glad Edward never backs down :)
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 03:44 AM · On: Outtake #2
I think this chapter was superb. Of course the sex was hot, but I have found that most stories seem to have Bella getting over losing her parents far too easily. Really well done.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 03:09 AM · On: Outtake #2
Perfect quote at the end. Thanks for the outtake. I wondered how Bella was affected by Charlies death.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Outtake #2
love this story and so happy about a sequel!!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Outtake #2
Loved the outtake..her grief was palpable. Great job!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 04:07 PM · On: Outtake #2
loved this!!! Sequel??? OMG YES!!!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Outtake #2
OMG. That was amazing!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Outtake #2
Thank you!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 05:44 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Although these are completely uncanon vampires and an OOC Edward, I really loved this story. Oh and talk about some hot vamp sex! Loved their literary game and best Marcus ever. Kinds missed Edwards interactions with the Cullens but this was a very original awesome story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I'm writing a sequel and there will be quite a bit more Cullen interaction in that one with Edward. Hopefully see you for that one.
Reviewer: Twilighter521 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Oh my! Really great story. This was a unique idea & was done well! I loved the story :)
Reviewer: marabenefici23forever (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh! Lady Hawk is one of my all time favorite movies!.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:01 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Oh my, that was so sexy and the voyeurism aspect was really hot. Bella's certainly coming in to her own.
I can't believe Eric he needs to be taken down a peg or two. Regardless of what Edward was like in the past and how they were together he should respect Edward and Bella's mating.
I'm looking forward to the next outtake even though it will mean the end of the story.
Jane x
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Paris is really a unique and romantic city! I can see how they would get carried away!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 30
A perfect ending! Now he just needs to continue dazzling her for eternity!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Both the ending and outtake we're great.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:01 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
Thank you!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 07:32 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
loved this chapter, That guy is lucky Edward didn't rip him to shreds for asking to share Bella.....what gall!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Outtake #1 - Paris
I love the Paris outtake. It also gives more insight into Edward's character.
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