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Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 12:08 AM · On: Un-Birthday Party
Umm... So, apparently this chapter was updated last August... You do realize it is March already, right?! Please tell me the next several chapters are on their way, PLEASE!!!!!
Loved the Un-Birhtday party! Though I do have to point out that it's Edward's birthday that is June 20th, and Jake was born January 14th (check out 'The Twilight Saga: The Official Illustrated Guide', it's a story life-saver, especially if you're keeping to canon).... Other than the timing, this was perfect! And since they're registering for college, they could go for the spring, or even summer, terms.
Congrats on your first lemon!! :D
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!! Please don't leave me hanging!
Author's Response: It was a late birthday for Jake :) and yes, hopefully new chapters will be coming soon! I'm in the process of gaining my muse back. Thanks!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2013 09:36 AM · On: Unexpected
Wow, I just wanted to let you know, I'm loving this story (can't stop hitting the "next" button, hense why I'm finally reviewing 8 chapters in)!
There are a few things I wanted to mention as well, one is kinda confusing...
In capter 2, you mentioned the Sydney is Brady's imprint, yet it's her and Collin spending the most time together, and even now expecting a baby as said in the last chapter... What?? How is Brady okay with this??
And, in this chapter, Huilen is Nahuel's Aunt, not sister, and she's also a full vampire (so she can't grow her hair out). He does have sisters, but because they follow his father, he could care less about them. Renesmee is the only half vamp/human hybrid that's not related to him.
Poor Jake. :( What a shock, and a huge loss, for Bliiy to die. I know it's inevitable, especially after 18 years, for the human's in this saga to pass away if they haven't already. I'm honestly surprised that Old Quil is still alive in this story though, he was the one that was the most fragile Elder in the Twilight books being Quil's grandfather. And now this happens to Jake, and Nessie... though, I have to agree with Jake here and say that Ness had it coming, just really bad timing. She should have listened to her inner voice the first time.
Keep up the great writing! I'm getting toward the end of the updated chapters, and already can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: The Brady/Collin ordeal was a complete typo on my part, so I'm sorry about that! Sidney is Collin's imprint.
as for Huilen and Nahuel, yeah, I wrote that chapter on a Snapple high at 3 am after not reading the books for a while ;P
thanks so much!
Reviewer: Windspirit (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2012 12:23 AM · On: Un-Birthday Party
If you need help with ideas let us know. Would love to see this story keep going. It has been since August and is such a good beginning. Please please write more soon.
Author's Response: Well thank you :]Life's been really busy, so I'm trying to get my muse back. hopefully things will be up soon! <3
--Nikki
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 09:42 AM · On: Un-Birthday Party
Good job keep it up!
Reviewer: cutie_et (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Un-Birthday Party
please write quickly!
Reviewer: lovejacob3008 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Un-Birthday Party
plz plz plz update, that was one of the best lemons i've ever read... good combination of romance and all out sex... u definitely need to write more...
Author's Response: Thanks, love! Things have been very busy and I lost my muse for a few months. Trying to bang down that writer's block and will write ASAP!
--Nikki <3
Reviewer: Windspirit (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 09:48 PM · On: Changes
Is chapter 14 your last chapter? I hope not.
Author's Response: No, not at all. :) I'm still writing, but it's just been a bit slow. RL and stuff. Thanks for your review!
--Nikki
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Lies
Nother good one :)
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 07:31 PM · On: The Morning After
Was a filler but i enjoyed the very human "tell us everything!" aspect :)
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 11:23 PM · On: Advice
Wolf, vampire, hybrid,,,girls are still girls. Haha.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing so much LOL! :) Glad you like it!
--Nikki
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Unexpected
And I'm STILL crying. Thanks. Jeez. *Clicks Next button*
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 10:31 PM · On: Time
Yes, you made me cry *wipes away tear*
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Of Loves Lost
Nother good one!
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 10:05 PM · On: Progression
I think I'm going to have to review on every chapter because I think this story deserves more than it has! Haha.
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 09:43 PM · On: Revelations
Lol I very much liked this one :)
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Discipline
I have a new found respect for my own smothering family...at least I was never grounded that harshly.
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Developments
Not much to say this time except that you've still got my interest :) and I really like your writing, it flows very well and is easy to read, which is very important. Much love.
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Changes
Well I'm new to this one, been looking for a good J/R story for awhile, and I think I may just have found it. I really like your wiriting style :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
--Nikki
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 09:09 AM · On: Lies
This is a really good story. I have read a few post breaking dawn fictions but this one is great! I did wish that it had more to do with everyone's lives but I understand its a Renesmee/ Jacob story. I like it a lot. Great job. I started writing one also, and I had a Nahuel/nessie/jake triangle too, its exactly what I pictured woud happen hahaha Love it...cant wait for more.
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Lies
Hard for her to not hurt his feelings.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 11:11 AM · On: Lies
oh i love this!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
--Nikki <3
Reviewer: ranmikisuudiayuro (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 04:06 AM · On: Seduction of the Supernatural
that was....WOW! lol i never review on anything, but i had to on this. i mean really WOW!!!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 05:34 AM · On: A Night to Remember
Ness did great! This was another awesome chapter, I can't wait for more!
Dixie
Reviewer: asp23 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Progression
Okay. So I am one of "those people" who reads a lot, but never reviews.
Congratulations, because you have broken the cycle. This is so good that I feel like I had no choice but to tell you just how good it is. I swear to G-d, this is the BEST fan fic I have ever read.
And seriously, that story you deleted because it wasn't written the way you wanted it to be written? I would have LOVED to see that, because based on how talented I think you are after reading only a few chapters of this, it can't have been bad at all! :)
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much! That means the world to me! :D
--Nikki <3
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:00 PM · On: A Night to Remember
....damn....*lights up* that was effing hawt!
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