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Reviewer: dark_dork15 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Precious
I've always wondered why Renee had custody of Bella. The books describe her as a flaky, childish person with her daughter being the "adult" in the relationship. Don't get me wrong, I know Renee loves Bella very much, but it surprises me that the courts let her have full custody of a child when she clearly wasn't mature enough to take care of one.
Reviewer: YellowApple (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Precious
The part in the beginning is really sweet I really liked the way Charlie talked to baby Bella and the mental image of him holding her and talking about her future boyfriends is really cute! I thought Renee was just awful though! How could she do that?! It made me kind of mad at her...Anyway I liked reading this so good job!
Reviewer: sarah01 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 01:40 PM · On: Precious
Really good story. Shame it's only a one-shot because your style of writing and the idea you have here is really good. XxX
Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 04:49 AM · On: Precious
awww... poor Charlie.... Bella is so cute, I just want to hug her! Renee's a bitch!!!! You're amazing!
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