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Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am so glad she gets to keep her baby. Now how do you ... splain all of where you been to DADDY? She needs to move out of Charlie's home and be in her own so she can lead her life make her decisions. If Edward is going to be there with her then step up and Provide.
Author's Response: Hehe Well, there's still LOTS for them to figure out. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 11
I started not to review, then I returned. I think Bella is broken in side for all the hurt she has suffered. If she can find a way to put her life back together and keep her baby with her I think she will be okay. She will turn the hurt away and accept life and go on.
Edward is the weak one here. He always was,yes he is strong physically, not mentally. He messes up with her all the time. Just like the wanting her business. He seems to understand how much he hurt her then he does it again and again.
Author's Response: Well, Edward has reasons for stopping them from going further right now. He isn't doing it to be hurtful or anything, and Bella understands that. The problem is...she's a newborn, so she's not thinking clearly at all times. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
I think they can take care of her all of them. Now what do you tell Charlie?
Author's Response: Still LOTS for them to consider. ;)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
well thankfully you did not take 20 chapters to do this.
Author's Response: Hehe Nope, not 20 chapter. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
I think someone Perhaps Jasper needs to KICK his ass. sorry for the word
Author's Response: LOL No worries. ;)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Bella, chased and bitten by vampires. Raped by a human. Abandoned by her vampire boyfriend.
Author's Response: Yes, definitely. :( But she's much stronger now because of it. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
I must be dense, is the baby Edwards? I guess th etime element confused me.
Author's Response: No, the baby isn't Edward's. I stated in the Story Notes that the baby is fully human, not half vampire, which rules out Edward. ;) You'll learn more soon! I hope you enjoy! :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
who is Lizzie's father? Someone recent because two years it is not Cullen.
Author's Response: Hehe You'll learn who in a few chapters. :)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
?
Author's Response: Hehehe You'll see. ;)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 12
gosh i missed emmett! so glad they r back!
Author's Response: Hehe Yeah, I love Emmett. :)
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 16
As painful as it would be - I really would like Charlie to know about Bella's situation. I think the story is progressing just fine. Seems like Bella should hunt more often. She also needs to be interested in something to fill her time.
Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) Yes, Charlie needs to know something soon, doesn't he? :)
Rest assured, Bella is hunting plenty. We don't need to see every time they go, but she is hunting. It's only been a couple of weeks since she was changed, so...between her worry about Lizzie and the future and just being with Edward, she doesn't really have time or the inclination to find anything else to fill her time yet. ;)
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 16
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
I hope S&V travel quickly I want Bella to be with Lizzie soon.
Author's Response: Well, the Romanians aren't coming to Forks... ;) It'll just be a phone call. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 16
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
well, at least we have two of the Cullens coming back!
Author's Response: Hehehe Yup. :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying the story so far. I just read this chapter from my computer so it is a heck of lot easier to review from here.
I really like how you have Seth and Bella being brother/sister. The fact that her and Jacob are still close throughout all of this is super cool.
I am PRO Edward and Bella all the way, but I really like the dynamics you have started between Bella, Jacob and Seth.
Awesome job.
Can't wait for the Cullens. AND OH MY GOSH........I want Bella, Lizzie and Edward to be a happy family. She needs her baby.
Oh and about that...can't wait to hear that story.
Take care!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) I hope you continue to!
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
Loved it! The part with Sue was just perfect. I want to know what the rest of her sentence was though! "Do you think you could..." Tell Charlie, maybe. I hope. That'd be so awesome. As will anything you post! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, babe! :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 16
Still loving this tale. :-) And I'm looking forward to the arrival of the Romanians.
Thanks as usual for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :) I'm glad you're still enjoying!
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 16
More more more more!
Author's Response: Hehehe More on Wednesday! :) Thanks for the review. ;)
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter! It's good that she got to talk to Sue- that she can see Bella as who she is and not just a newborn vampire.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) There will be more Sue/Bella interaction, too. :)
Reviewer: muggler (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 16
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
Hmm. Looking forward to Bella reuniting with the wolf pack. Glad the Volturi are being kept out of the loop
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 16
I'm so happy they are calling the Romanians. They are definitely not part of the Volturri fan club!!! The tenderness that you continue to show between Bella and Edward with the hand holding, and words of encouragement...is amazing!!! Sue at least seems OK about Bella, which is encouraging, and Sue can hopefully tell Charlie at least something to keep him from going crazy. My heart is breaking for poor Bella that she needs to continue to be apart from Lizzie. Had to laugh when Jake asked if the guests are vegetarians...lol. Now, wonder what Seth, Quil and Embry will think of Bella's new look...haha. Love your Emmett by the way. Take Bella for a test drive...lol! Very funny! Lovin it...looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the reivew! :) Remember, Seth has seen Bella already...and the others have seen her in their heads, but... :)
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 15
Solid... great tale!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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