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Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2012 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 18
Love it. I wish I could leave a review more often. RL sucks. Going to the next chapter. Love it!
Reviewer: LivingwithEdward (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 22
Bravo! You did such a wonderful job continuing this story. I'm so glad that you were the author to do it, too. Your writing is perfect for it. This was perfect. I enjoyed every minute of reading it.
Reviewer: jag101265 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 22
The best I have read! This could be a fifth book in the Twilight series. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: SilkyFlower (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 22
Dear Content1,
I love your stories (Harvest Moon is still one of my top 10; please do finish FMR) and I was not disappointed by DS.
Thanks for sharing your stories with us. In addition to being moving, they are so nicely written.
I wish I had more knowledge to give you a review worthy of your efforts, a review to help you improve your writing, to make a difference, but all I have got to offer is my encouragement and hope that you will keep up bringing more stories to us.
SilkyFlower
Reviewer: Britmom (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 22
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I've thoroughly enjoyed all its twists and turns and you've made the characters so real that parts of their suffering was very difficult, though absolutely gripping, to read.
I've loved the way that you've given Marcus and Tanya a happy ending together. You've managed to make their personalities sympathetic (which, as far as Tanya is concerned, I never thought achievable) and that, combined with the amazing storyline and other very believable characters, has made this one of my all-time favourite stories. Any awards are very well deserved. Congratulations and thank you again!
Reviewer: deacongirl01 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 22
I have enjoyed this story immensely. I cried when Beth died and I cried again when her family read the letter Edward brought them. You filled out the characters who were secondary in the saga and gave us such well-rounded new characters. I loved the way it ended. I really liked how Edward and Jacob made ammends and became real friends and it was so good to see Edward and Carlisle let their inner "monster" out for a good cause. My one teeny-tiny criticism would be the over-use of the word feral. However, overall, your dialogue was very strong and in-character. The plot flowed well and Edward's inner monologues were very believeable and poignant. I love the saga so much and you really did it justice. Thank you.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
L O V E D it.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 22
sniffle omg omg omg I am so glad he did it but omg sniffle!!!!!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
Thanks awesome chapter awesome story
Reviewer: kausterschmidt (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 22
Fabulous story and I'm glad you worked in Beth's family.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 22
This is so good! I've enjoyed every moment of this!
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 22
wow. beautiful ending to a great story
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 22
wow. beautiful ending to a great story
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 22
wow. beautiful ending to a great story
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 22
thank you so very much. I loved this story from the very start, it's been a privilege to read. Great characterizations, more depth than I've seen before. The story had everything. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 22
Ok. I'm at work and in tears. I have really enjoyed this amazing story. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 22
I think you have a real gift for writing. I have enjoyed all of them. I'm still
reading Full Moon Rising and can't wait for the next update. Thanks.
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
A very powerful (emotionally and otherwise) story. Your writing prowess blows me away, and I thank you a billion times over for taking up this tale and finishing it with such perfection.
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 22
This was a perfect ending to a great story! I really enjoyed taking this journey. Thank you for seeing it through to completion, you never let your readers down!! Now on to Full Moon Rising!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 22
What a great story. I'm glad Edward was able to see Beth's family.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 21
This was an amazing story, the horrors placed upon Edward and his family, and even on members of the volturi who could do no better, but he endured and they got thought it to be better vamps, the gaining of the trust and respect of the wolves,tthe love, friendship, compassion, love and fight for good to overcome evil, made it so. I like the way it progressed and i really appreciate this ending. Good work.
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
Thank you for such a wonderful story!!!!!
Reviewer: Nicjazz (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 21
Ohh forgot to say: loved the Marcus-irina outcome. please, please write more on it in the next chapters. I have to know more!! It's so romantic
Reviewer: Nicjazz (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 21
You are one of my favorite authors! I just love your writing style and how you come up with these great story lines. I prefer the Vamp stories than those that are all humans, but i'm seriously considering your story Sins of Past to be my first read on an all human. Can't wait for you to finish this story and continue on the other one. I'm totally hooked on both!!! Congrats on what u have accomplished so far, and i really hope you continue to write many more stories. I'll always gladly devour them. Haven't seen the movie yet :( Keep on and best wishes :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2012 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
Sniffle this was just wow!!! I am so glad that Tanya has her happily ever after but I will say never in a million years would I have seen that coming!!! Such an amazing story I hope its not done yet!!
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