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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 18 - OUTTAKE: A Holiday to Remember

I'm glad you put it in there, it was worth the read, out of order or not!  

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 18 - OUTTAKE: A Holiday to Remember

Who cares where this chapter comes in the lineup? It's just perfect! Telling the parents about the engagement was great, but Christmas was so sweet! Just loved it, and can't wait for the next one! I can tell, this is a story I'm going to hate see come to an end. I feel like these are people I really know.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 18 - OUTTAKE: A Holiday to Remember

awww swoon wow more kids squeee well the trying will be the funpart hahahaha  Post again soon love love love

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

It takes a special man to handle 4 girls - especially when that includes one set of twins.  I'd know - as I just had baby girl #5, and our oldest are ID twins.  My hubby is a special man and I'm sure your Edward can ahdle it!

Reviewer: strawberrifizz25 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 17

Great story

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 17

That's perfect!  It didn't take too long to embrace the madness!  Those two are going to have to be a team, or they'll never survive!

Reviewer: jatani33 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

Poor edward i know hiw ma husband feels about having four girls in the house...lol waiting for the next chapter =D

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 17

Yes, I suppose they will have their hands more than full with four girls. I just hope all goes well with the pregnancy and delivery, so they can be a big, happy family. I can't believe this story is almost over, but I'm sure you've got a happy ending for us.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 17

Edward & 5 women in the house.  I pity the guy when they are all PMSing at once

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 17

so people make mistake in ultrasounds all thetime ohotgraphingteh same girk twice would be epic so that he finally did get a boy!  Or a back to back pregnancy..  LMAO OR there could be a 3rd small boy hidden behind his sisters!!  Post again soon squeee exciting!!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

Edward is undergoing a serious case of karma! Four daughters will give him a taste of what he dished out when he was a young pup. It's going to be great, like his own personal harem!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 16

There's nothing else to say but aww!  

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

I loved this chap! You made me cry T-T I so Happy for them as a family, the four of them deserve to be happy. It's really sad the Chelsea was rob of so manythings at her short age, thank's God she now is with people that love and treasure her so she can create new and pleasant memories.

Thank goodness and Rose's pumpking pie that Bella convinced Marcus not to talk till after they had a chance to tell their families. Can't wait for the parents to learn about the engagement and celebrate with them...

See you next chap till then I hope that RL smiles at you...

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 16

This chapter was so moving I cried almost the whole part from the time Edwaed came home. You really have a way with words. what a christmas gift to give those two lovely girls a really family one mother one father and two wonderful girls. Thank you so much for sharing.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

I know just how Bella feels, as I can barely see my keyboard! That was such a sweet chapter! The ring sounds beautiful and Christmas is going to be wonderful for the whole family! God, I love a happy outcome! Esme will be over the moon, as well as Carlisle. This story just makes me feel so good, even through the tough parts.

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the sweetest thing Ive read in a long time :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

OMG you made me cry!! That was the sweetest mother daughter moment EVER!!!!  Love love love!! Can't wait to tell the rents teehee! Post again soon!

Reviewer: SheriePattinson (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

Im only reviewing this chapter because i read it on my laptop instead of my phone like usual but i really love this story. I dont know what it is. Maybe its the fact that im a sucker for stories that have kids and make me want to cry. I have also read 'trip' an enjoyed that too. You are a wonderful writer. How often do you update this story? i have only started reading it so am unsure. thanks.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 15

OMG!  That's hilarious writing about Adam Levine...I am so in love with him....my sister, cousin and I! LOL!  My husband just rolls his eyes!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow! that was  a lot for that chapter!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow!  Rosalie is something else....

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

Just wanted to say that this is the first fic i've read that has Angel as a nickname for Bella.  But then again i've read so many so I might be wrong.  Not that there's anything wrong with that....okay so enough rambling...

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 15

At least Edward is stealthy.  There will be plenty of hot, stolen moments.  Even with a house full of kids!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am looking forward to this story.  You are one of my favorite authors and I have enjoyed all of your stories thus far.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

Awww well at least we know what went down wit hEdwards past and don't think we all didn't notice th and kids to come part teehee!! Love love love.

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