For updating fanfiction site!!!!  I think that Link is the hybread I sent you, and did you use the name Alex because of me;).  If so thanks so much.  I really like how the chapters are going and look forward to reading more about how the kids grow up and see if they pair off for mates the same as they have for friends.  Will you ever have Eliza and Mason get along? 

Author's Response:

I don't remember who sent which hybrid names, but yeah, they were all sent to me by one reader or another.

And yes, in the last chapter or two of Masen's story, Eliza and Masen tolerate each other. They're never gonna be super close and they do like bickering with each other, but it won't be this bad forever.

So far no one has come out against updating of fanfiction and as long as I don't hear an uproar against it, I'll post the next chapter to fanfiction next week :)

When does Jasper go home to Alice? You're very creative but all of this time travel mixed with what's happening in the future is very confusing.

Author's Response:

Sorry, but Jasper won't be going home to Alice until the end of the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

We have not heard about any of the shape shifter halflings yet???  I think that you are doing a great job of letting us know what it wourl be like to be a vampire kid.  So much talant in such a small group.  How are the other vampire kids from other covens doing?  Maybe Carlisle can get some letters from them telling how things are going and asking questions about what to do on various subjects since theirs are the first born kids.

Thanks Xanath

Author's Response:

None of the other covens has gotten passed the parasitism stage (basically, until Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett upchuck their eggs, none of the older eggs will hatch), but when they do, I'll try to think of some things to include...that would have to fall under the next story in this saga though, so I have awhile.

As for the halflings- I really like that name. Can I barrow it? There was some halfling drama already in Carlisle's story and there will be some more halfling drama coming up at the end of Masen's story. That's where Edward and gang will be after the kids leave school, but before Jasper's story begins. I'm sure the halflings have really grand adventures going on over in La Push all the time, but I really don't get many idea for them, so they just don't ever get a big role. If I do write a third story, the drama would contain some more squabbles with the different shape-shifter tribes over the hybrids...

Thanks for reviewing! It was good hearing from you :)

Loved it - Thanks Xanath

I'm always amazed at how you keep up the details of this story. It's like you are describing an entirely new DNA and all of its ramifications.

Author's Response:

Hmmm...I think I've thought of everything exact for the exact genome sequence :)

Mahalo for reviewing!

Hi! :D Okay, I'm not sure if missed something ('cos reading one book at a time (starting with Masen)), but why did Masen reveal that he read Robbie's mind.:s

Author's Response:

Masen didn't reveal that he read Robbie's mind- he blamed the mentoring idea on Edward. Thanks for the review and happy Holidays!

So now will you go back to Carlile and the boys?   I loved this chapter and how Jasper showed the girls his past and gave him mother some closure, instead of leaving her wondering what happened.

Hugs - Xanath

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Jasper's closure as much as I did writing it.

Carlisle is next. He has a trip to Brazil to make and we'll get to see his leadership skills in action :)

 

So Mason is the go between for all of the test taking!!! To funny.  Ans sometime in the future Jasper is still in the wormhole...

Thanks and Hugs - Xanath

Author's Response:

Well Masen can't do everything, but he helps.

Jasper will be out of the wormhole before he pukes up those eggs:) Actually, it's only another couple of chapters before he gets rescued.

Thanks for taking the time to review- your thoughts in particular always get me thinking about what to write next. The only problem is this story is getting quite long and the twins haven't even been disgorged, let alone hatched yet! I think I'm gonna have to split it into two stories...

There are no Esme and Emmett-looking childrem!:))

Author's Response:

Yes and there's a reason for that: Esme only has boys and Emmett only has girls. Plus Carl, the child who looked the most like Esme, is dead. And the child who will look just like Emmett hasn't been born yet, although all of the girls are meant to look more like him, but it's hard making one person look a bit like another in photoshop.

 

Thank for the review! It was good hearing from you again :)

I like Masen chapters the best.

 

I don't know what is mor depressing - That schools are sponsored by corporations or that Pizza Hut will be around for millenia

Author's Response:

Pizza Hut outlived the United States in this story :) Any idea what that will mean for history class?

Thanks for the review! I like masen's chapters too- they add some much needed lite humor.

zi had guessed five of the twelve.  Mason, Ashley, Allison, Eliza and Scryan.  I thought Aidan and Adrial were two of the boys but was not sure which was which.  Kair and kare violet and Lily threw me. Of course they all make sence when they are labeled.  I also think that Mason, Scryan, Ashley, Kare and Kair are beautiful...especially Mason.

My daughtertelles me that Mason is now one of top boy names.  I like it as a name.

My grandson is taking ASL as his language in high school this year and really likes it.

thank you very much - Xanath

Author's Response:

All of the names from Twilight are rising in popularity. I'm really liking the names Jasper and Emmett, but before Twilight, they were grandpa names. Giving Masen his nickname was kind of a last minute thing, when I realized it was awkward having two Edwards around and I didn't like Anythony or Tony for him. Then I remembered that the other last name was Masen and it just fit.

I agree, Scryan, Ashley, Kare, and Kair are the four best looking kids in that picture and Masen and Eliza came out well too. Those 4 gave me the least amount of trouble in photoshop. Masen actually gave me a lot of trouble, because the coloration of the original photo was way off and the skin was very blotchy, but I got it looking pretty good in the end. The rest of the kids were challenging, especially because the actors are getting old and Jasper doesn't look good as a girl...I saw a trick recently on how to get wrinkles out, so I keep thinking I should go back and try it.

This was a great chapter.  My grandp Walker showaed me pictures of his dad and grandpa from the cival war. His dad was a durmmer boy about 10 years old and his grandpa was a soldier.  The pictures showed them in their uniforms for the north.  They were burried at a little cemitary where most of the people were from the cival war.  He told me that we were suppost to be seventh cousins to Jefferson Davis, but out branch of the family did not believe in slavery.  They moved to Illinois before the war.  He drove us past a big old house that looked like a southern mantion and told us tha had been the house his grandpa had built.  I sure widh that I had gotten a copy of those pictures before he died.

Author's Response:

That is really cool that you have seen records from that far back, even if you didn't get a copy. My grandma has some pictures from her family from the early 1900s and we have a geneology on my grandpa's side that goes back a few centuries, but no pictures.

Thanks for the review!