Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2013 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: You'll notice, they don't so much fly, as plummet

Yeah! A new chapter! Good, God woman, it was a goodie! Don't make me wait too long for the next chapter! ") I was going to PM you and tell you I didn't take the time to make you a pretty new banner just so you could quit writting this story! LOL How 'bout a banner for your new story? Would you like one? If that's a yes, please to PM me and give me a bit about it so I can get a good grasp on the plot. ")

Author's Response:

Oh! Yes! I'll send you a summary later today! I'd love another banner made by you.

And yes, I'm sorry this took so long. My beta is in the process of retiring from twilighted, so she can't validate ASAP always, and I tend to procrastinate, too.

I'm hoping to have the next chapter posted for validation later today.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: We'd like to see the Dog Kennels Please

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 11 Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberry

OMG......I can't believe that Alice and Jasper Black are Joham!!!  And Yes....I think Arbie should be able to get pregnant ;-)

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 11 Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberry

Nice twist with Johan.  Keep up the good work.  Thanks - Xanath

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I added that since before Edward, Joham was the only other known vampire that had fathered a half-mortal child, why not bring him into the mix, right?

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: I'm a lumberjack and I'm okay

Welcome back!  I'm so glad they are spending time with Charlie!  Who just walked in...Angela?  Will they be visiting Seth again?  I hope Jeb turns into a wolf like his dad.

Dixie

Reviewer: EJ26 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: I'm a lumberjack and I'm okay

Awesome story.... Ive just found it and Im loving it..

 

Is the woman Angela? She seems to be the only one kind enough to not swear.. :P

 

Please update!

Author's Response:

You just might be right ;)

Thank you for reading! I'll update soon.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: I'm a lumberjack and I'm okay

OK Loved how Arbie intimidates Aro!!

I wonder who recognized Edward - Angela, Jessica, Lauren...

I hope hes able to convince hime hes his son

Author's Response:

Something tells me Edward won't have to do much talking in that scene, but we'll see how it pans out.

 

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 9: Oh, let me have just a *little bit* of Peril?

Ok so one vamp mom is Bree Tanner, the other one has to be the one with the Bentley family name. What is the story there?? And how does she manage to be seen apparently often and identified with that name wyhen she won't be able to keep that for long? I assume it's her second time around after disappearing for a while and pretending to be her daughter??

If she scars then the biting can't be overdone right? already two scars, and likely one for every time they , you know... she'll end up like Jasper... not good i'd guess

PS. You said the piano traveled with them though he didn't play it, but in this ch. you say it's been in Forks

Author's Response:

Hwin is the Bentley, along with her brother Shasta. None of them show their faces much. Being major shareholders as opposed to the CEOs makes it easier to not be at meetings and such often. Their names are much more famous than the faces, so they don't have to go into hiding or pretend to be their own offspring often.

You're right about the bite scars, Edward will have to reign in his feistiness so Arbie doesn't end up looking like Jasper.

 

I did say there was a black baby grand piano in the Forks house, but not that it was the one that traveled with Edward everywhere they moved. I'm surprised you caught that though, I meant for it to be subtle and bring it up again later. Good eye :)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: Oh, let me have just a *little bit* of Peril?

Yikes!  I hope Edward, Arbie & Jeb can deal with them.  How did they find out?  Did they have Victoria micrchipped or something?

Author's Response:

Victoria wasn't involved in this alert to the Volturi... not directly anyway. Your question will be answered in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 9: Oh, let me have just a *little bit* of Peril?

looking forward to mroe 

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: It's Alfred Lord Tennyson in the Bathroom!

I really like this story...and I did guess to myself that Victoria was the bad guy thatwould reappear.  Like you I like a little lemon but not so much that the story is just to get to thenext lemon.  Yours has a great story line and I was not sure if Arbie and Jeb were Bella and Jake's kids or not.  You did a good job of keeping me guessing, I liked it.  Thank Yoou,

Xanath

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I've certainly enjoyed writing it! Thank you for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 8: It's Alfred Lord Tennyson in the Bathroom!

I really liked Ali Rose talking to her grandpa.  I hope Jeb gets to see him before he passes.

Author's Response:

I'm planning for him to arrive in Forks in the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be in time to see Charlie at least once!

 

Thanks for the lovely review!