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Reviewer: Gwenna (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Cool
Reviewer: Masen1010 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
You should either continue with Bella's POV or her explaining to Edward what happened
btw because of you I can't stop singing this song
can you imagine someone going up and down ypur street singing well really screeching a country song in a ghetto neighborhood?
but hey good story I like it if you didn't know yet
Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL Very cute story! Love that song!
Reviewer: sperrin17 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
cute
Reviewer: jajed44 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great,job.Let me just say its one of my favorite storys right now!
I hope you continue I alredy have diffrent sinerios going on in my head I would love to see be playout.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh I had one of those nights, it's kinda scary. Good job I loved it.
Reviewer: Just Peachy (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
You MUST be from Georgia, with all those GA references! (And I think Georgia Girls love Luke Bryan the most!)
Loved the story - and I agree that continuing ot would be stellar!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
THE PO PO! MWAAAHAAA!!! OMG, you have to continue this pls... I spit pop all over my keyboard!
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmm, yes, I definately liked this. I was almost questioning who his cheating bitch girlfriend was up until I read that thing about the brown eyed girl. I think my favorite part was when Edward went crowd surfing and Emmett and Jasper panicked... epic. I'm not sure if you have it in mind to continue this but it might make for an interesting follow-up to see their conversation over coffee.
Reviewer: EdwardsLady (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG The Po Po i lost it and sprayed soday all over my monitor lol
you have to continue this i see some damn funny times ahead
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
That's a nice make up for last night thing
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hahaha what a fun ride!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hahaha what a fun ride!
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow!really great =D
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was such a sweet little chapter. Hot in every way! I kept thinking of Katy Perrys song "Last Friday Night " and was thinking these two were going to have pink flamimgosn the front yard!! Loved it! I can see a great beginning here, and it is possible to probably keep it going??? Hmmmmm.
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