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Reviewer: harkie5 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 05:24 AM · On: Invisible
Great story! Thank you
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 09:54 PM · On: Invisible
Lots of great material here. Very well executed. Loved it. Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 05:28 PM · On: Invisible
:')
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Invisible
Wow! Nicely done. Cool shield as well. :-)
Thanks,
Reviewer: RIBBON (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Invisible
I LOVED IT!!! I can't wait to read more of your stories. You truly have an amazing talent with words.
Reviewer: devoted2know (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 01:09 AM · On: Invisible
this was phenomenal. very moving. i love every word of this one-shot and look forward to reading more of your writing.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 01:00 PM · On: Invisible
Wow! I LOVE this! Thank you!
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 10:17 PM · On: Invisible
Loved it so much!!
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 01:22 PM · On: Invisible
Loved it :)*
Reviewer: jenzhere99 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Invisible
I usually don't read one-shots but this one was a really good one. I do wish it would have been longer though :( ...but Great job!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 11:00 AM · On: Invisible
Nice ending...
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 08:29 AM · On: Invisible
I think you should reconsider in not continuing this stor as it is a beautiful piece of writing and i would be delighted if u do decide to go on with it
Xxsiriahcullenxx
Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Invisible
Good one!
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 06:29 AM · On: Invisible
That was a unique exchange between the ladies. I enjoyed looking at that in a different way. And cool power Bella's got, too.
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Invisible
This was incredible and such an unique plot. I know you have alot on your plate but if you ever find yourself revisiting i would love it!
Reviewer: Shemhazai (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 12:31 AM · On: Invisible
That was very beautiful. I was worried that it wouldn't have a happy ending (and maybe it still doesn't) and I would cry, but I loved it. You described her pain so well, and honestly I imagine I would have reacted in a similar fashion if I were ever in Bella's circumstances. Some loose ends (what happened to Victoria, how did the Cullens know to come back, didn't the wolves think it was odd that Bella's body disappeared?), but I think it's better to the let the reader draw their own conclusions. Wonderful.
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