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Reviewer: Mark Westcott Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Chapter Nine

This lovely story has been in my favourites folder for months now.  I' ve been regularly checking for updates for quite a while.  It would be a real pity for a promising story like this to be abandoned!



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry that we haven't updated in awhile. We each have had some personal issues that we've yet to resolve, but we have not  abandoned this story. It has merely been put on hiatus. Please don't give up on us... just be patient and you will be rewarded, I promise!!!

Reviewer: lesaira (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 07:57 AM · On: Chapter Eight

I love the way the story is progressing and the fact that they aren't just letting things happen the way they did in the books; I know it can cause problems later on if you change events (I watch/read enough science fiction to know that) but I think if I knew what was going to happen and had a chance to keep people from getting hurt I would do the same.

Just wanted to point out though, in the line "I noticed that he began to growl when I called him a leech" near the end of the 8th chapter; she never actually called him a leech.  I don't know if I missed it, or maybe you had it in there but edited it out but I'm one of those people who notice things that aren't really important like that so I thought I'd let you know.

Looking forward to Chapter 9!

Reviewer: twilight_dk (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Chapter Eight

Just read all 8 chapters and I absolutely LOVE your story! The writing is brilliant and I can't wait for your next update :-)

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter Seven

glad you're back, I'm still loving it but would love it even more if the chapters were twice the length! greedy, I know.



Author's Response:

We're still here!!! Twice the length!? Chapter seven was twelve pages long!!!!! lol... greedy greedy!!! Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: lesaira (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter Six

I really wish I had found this story completed...and not stayed up 'till the wee hours of the morning staring at a black screen with tiny white words.  Amber's internal rants are hilarious and I love that she's not letting Eddie get away with anything, and for that matter neither is Whitney.  The stalking really was creepy; what kind of self esteem issues could Bella have had to swoon over it?  And I seem to be sleepily rambling now so I'll stop.

Looking forward to Biology (never thought I'd say that, or type it).

-Lesaira



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading our story. I know we have been behind in getting the chapters posted, but trust me we have been writing. we are currently working on 10 and will hopefully have the previous chapters posted ASAP. I just hope yall have has much fun reading this as we did writing this. <3  

 

Always,

McGeek and Cullenbabe

Reviewer: naniita1103 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 04:17 PM · On: Chapter Six

Oh okay...anyway, I was getting a little curious about what would happen with these two :P will you post a chapter about what's happening with Rosalie and Alice? I'm kinda concerned for them :/

Reviewer: Apok (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2012 01:05 PM · On: Chapter Six

Very interesting, I like the almost omniscient feel that the characters have. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds.

Reviewer: naniita1103 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 06:44 AM · On: Chapter Six

OMG..NO way! T_T Alice and Jasper were my favourite couple! Ok, I'll go with it. It was an amazing chapter! Can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

We're stoked you like the fic and the newest chapter! Thanks for reviewing! As much as we're happy that you're gonna stick around, don't expect Jasper and Alice to reunite... sorry but it's just not going to happen... A lot of things are gonna happen in the coming chapters and we hope that you'll stay tuned! Don't forget to favorite the fic!!!

Cullenbabe + McGeek

Reviewer: PunkieMama (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Chapter One

I have seen the 'sucked into the twilightt universe' theme before but never felt like reading one of those stories. I am really interested to see how your charcters will fit in the twilight universe. This is a very well written story with relatable charcters.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! We're really honored that you decided to read this fic. It has the 'same concept', but it's different in a way that most other fics of this genre aren't. We'd read so many 'in the book' fics and they just didn't seem to have characters or story lines that fit too well despite the fact that they were interesting enough and written well. We both wanted to try our hand at it and we wanted to do it well. Each chapter takes at least a week to two weeks to be 'perfect' in our eyes and we still end up having trouble stating that they're perfect enough to be posted. Of course we're our own worst critics and truly rely on reader reviews to let us know just how horrible it's turning out to be so we really do appreciate each review that we receive.

Stay tuned for some surprising changes and don't forget to favorite the story so you'll know when a new chapter is posted. The story is also located on ff(dot)net under the same author name. Thanks again!!!

Cullenbabe + McGeek

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 10:43 AM · On: Chapter Five

Great Chapter!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Chapter Four

Awesome Chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! McGeek and I are really happy to know you like to fic!!! Stick around and keep an eye out for updates!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Chapter Three

Great Chapter!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter Two

Great Chapter!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Chapter One

Great beginning!

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter Four

There's a Brit TV movie called "Lost in Austen" that has a similar plot, if you can call discovering a magic doorway in your bathroom that opens into Elizabeth's 18th Century house similar. If you haven't seen it, look for it, it's on DVD now.  The 21st century heroine definitely changes life for Mr. Darcy and friends.  Yours is a delightful story, and let's not even try to examine the logic closely, that's no fun.  I'm hoping this version lets Edward fall in love with someone else, as Bella as written by SM is someone I'd never want to hang with. Or maybe Amber can change Bella!  That would be a vast improvement. In which case she'd never bother with Edward. Write faster, please and thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks SO much for reading and definitely for reviewing! Honestlly, that Brit TV movie is where McGeek and I got the idea from. We liked the concept of having original characters enter the Twilight world, but really didn't want to go with the "door" idea. So instead we went into the science fiction realm which is a genre that we BOTH love. To be truthful, we used our own names (mine is Whitney and McGeek's is Amber), but somehow when we were writing their personalities were swapped with our personalities. McGeek is more of the laid back and docile kind where as I'm the loud and outspoken one that doesn't always think about what I say BEFORE I say it. Neither one of us is as smart as Amber and Whitney, but its fiction right?

We do have more chapters written than what's been posted, but we're following a once a week posting schedule at the moment. We want to try and stay at least three chapters ahead of the most recently posted chapter. So sometime next week chapter five will be posted and to be honest it's one of my favorites... well technically chapter six is my ABSOLUTE favorite so far. Aw hell, who am I kidding!? They're all my favorites!!!!

Keep an eye out for the next chapter, rec this fic out, and as always review!!!! Thanks so much!!!

H&K,

Cullenbabe & McGeek

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 01:05 PM · On: Chapter Four

Great chapter!

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 02:10 PM · On: Chapter Three

Interesting idea!

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 07:04 AM · On: Chapter Three

This is a blast to read! Looking forward to many more chapters.  Won't even try to analyze the possible future, talk about wonky... thanks much, write faster.

Reviewer: dudatrouble (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 01:03 PM · On: Chapter One

That's interesting... I liked it!! COntinue, please...

Sil

:-)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Chapter 2 is submitted and with any luck will be up soon!

 

L&K,

Cullenbabe & McGeek

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