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Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

I am so glad that I found this story.  It has my heart aching for them both.  Please keep writing because I can't wait to see how this story plays out.  AMAZING!!!!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 05:57 PM · On: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

 found this story and I am all caught up!  AT FIRST I WAS LIKE SO ORIGINAL I HOPE THIS ISN'T A JAMES AND BELLA STORY!  Now I readand Iwas so afraid to read at first and now I truly love it...I want to know more need to know moreand ma very excited to see this allplay off...  They lost a year togetherbecause of something Edward did how much more time will be wasted?   Post again soon Truly breath taking story you had me scared out of my mind and now I am so excited for the party  tellme Carmen is a cousin or smething who has been very supportive and caring and that would explain why they can say they love each other...I tell my cous all the time I love them and when I was sick havingthem around was always better.....   Hurry update I am bouncing around waiting for more

Reviewer: arkallie26 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

oh man i saw your story on the recent list and it peeked my interest, what a great story you have going on i was so disappointed when i got done with this chapter and there was no next hope you update soon

Author's Response:

I update weekly on Saturdays at Fanfiction.  I'm hoping to keep the same schedule here.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

I just read all 8 chaptes in one sitting and I am in love with your story... It's so heartbreaking I hope they both can get there act together and just really talk n have it out with each other.... keep up the wonderful work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and kind words.  I update weekly.  So we'll see if E&B can get their act together.  ;)

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 02:45 PM · On: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

Just started reading today, and I think this story is really interesting! I'm excited to read more ! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  I update weekly.  See you then!

Reviewer: Banriona (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter Five: Maybe

Intrigued by this, will be interested to see where it goes! x

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  Glad you're intrigued.  Hope to keep you that way.

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Chapter One: Breathe

Hah, ignore me - I just didn't notice the 'next button' was a dozy twonk. 


Author's Response:

lol, I have no idea what dozy twonk means!!  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Prologue: Chains

Nicely started but haven't I seen this before?  Have you re-written it or something?

Anyway, would like to see what happens next and why he is being such an arse!  Thanks.


Author's Response:

I post this story on  It shouldn't be listed anywhere else.  If you find it somewhere, please let me know.  :)


Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Prologue: Chains

What a way to start a story. Wow.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've added new chapters.  Plus, I also post on  I update on Saturdays over there.  I hope I can keep up the same schedule here. :)

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