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Reviews For Blood is Thicker
Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2015 02:13 AM · On: Silly BiT Outtake


Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Silly BiT Outtake

Haw! Thanks for posting that. I'm reading LJ's current literary frolicking and totally got her commentage. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

I love her writing...she really is the BEST!

Thanks for reading this silly BiT, Screaming Mimi!


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 12:33 AM · On: Silly BiT Outtake

All that and she fixes your commas too?  You need to make her a cake!

Author's Response:

YES!  She's great!  And she makes WORK fun!

Thanks for reading, snowgood!


Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Silly BiT Outtake

Was it very difficult to write while laughing your ass off?  I like LJ's stories too.

Author's Response:

Good morning, Kathy!

She does make me laugh!  Makes it so much FUN!

Thanks for reading this silly BiT!


Reviewer: Poupon (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

Boo hiss!!!

I loved the opening chapter and I thought that it had huge potential to be a great, really well structured story.  Chapter Two was so good too.

This chapter reads as though it's written by a different person and has just been dashed off - almost like being in an exam and only having fifteen minutes to finish. 

Really disappointed: please reconsider, and start a new chapter three which takes the long road with Bella & Edward!

Author's Response:

It's always good to start your morning with a LAUGH, and you have certainly given me one!

Thanks for your time and effort in leaving a review, Poupon!

I can assure you that this chapter was written by me, just as the first two were.  Have you read my stories previously? I'm all about the HEA...

The Canon Tour is now accepting pieces for the NEW MOON could give it your OWN spin!

Again, thanks for reading.


Reviewer: Poupon (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant first chapter, really gripping and clever.  Loved it!

Author's Response:

Have to laugh again...knowing that apparently I didnt' write this fic for you...sorry!

Lots of other good angsty fics out there.

Have you tried LJ Summers' OPEN UP NEXT TO YOU?

Now THAT chick can WRITE!~


Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

In order to write a tale with so few words; you have to eliminate all the obsticles.  So, you thrilled us in the first chapter - as would be or wouldn't he.  Then saddened us in the second chapter as we saw how devastating it would be to Bella's family; and then in the third (with epilogue,) you made sure to include Bella's common sense remained.  

It was one of those "oh shucks" tales; that cater to the "I want to smile" crowd.  :-)

I smiled.  You win.  Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent!  :-) 

Author's Response:

Thank you, JRParz!  YOU have made me smile today!

Sometimes I really need an "oh shucks" tale!  Lots of ANGST to be found elsewhere...and I'm all about the

Thank you so much for your words and those lovely stars!


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

Really, if you had Edward looking at you with pouty lips and puppy dog eyes saying he loves you forever, you'd let him off easy too!

Author's Response:

SNORT!  Yes, yes I would!

Thanks for the laugh, snowgood!

AND for reading!


Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

I don't see it as Edward getting off too easily, for him the emotional pain must have been pretty heavy. Bella is a very sensible girl, who really felt an overwhelming connection to Edward and was aware of her options. If she made a decision, I have no doubts she knew exactly what she wanted. Obviously, that was her soul-mate, forever. I'm sure Bella felt a lot better after Alice's visions told her that Charlie and Renee would be okay without her. The only gripe I can think of is this story is too short!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Kathy! You summed up how I felt!

Sorry it's so short...too many other things waiting in line to be written...

Already have my new bit submitted for the next round!


Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

A true mate bond.  Do you have any idea how happy I was to read those words.  And although I loved LJ's story mate bonds make me happier. :).

This was a joy to read.  Thank You for sharing it with us.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU, mrscope!  HEA makes me pretty happy, too!

And I LOVED LJ's OUNtY, too.  CRIED like a baby, but loved it...LOL

AND when I wrote that bit "a true mate bond"...she laughed at ME!!!! LOLOLOL


Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

As luck would have it the Quileute tribe is unable to track Bella's demise.  And with Sam the only werewolf what chance would they have had?

I felt bad for Edward in that he had to listen to the service and everyone's thoughts.  But Charlie's words were the worst.  To be the cause of so much anguish has to be tough.

Emmett's words of "Don't let her break you in half, bro."  made me think of Rosalie at first.  Then I laughed at myself as I remembered a "newborns" strength.  Hopefully it is because she is happy to see him.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hoh Boy!  As the story started I was all smiling and following the convo thinking how cute.  Biology class with blood typing came and, yes, I expected Mike to take her to the nurse.  But for Edward to offer and then run for the hills my heart began to race and I found the mouse curser moving at such a rapid pace I damn near fell out of my chair from dizziness.

What to do, what to do now that he has her so far away.  At this point he can kill her or turn her.  Bella tells him she wants this but she has no time to process.  This is a whole new ball game as we witness the bite.  I ponder and hope like hell that Rose is not going to kill him.  And for the record I am going to go with dead-ish.

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

I too love HEAs and I love your stories....but I do not feel that this let Edward off too easy.  Bella was drawn to him completely in the book and, by her own admission, valued her time with him above her own life.  It may be a little "neat" regarding her parents, but she was always practical.  I loved this story!!!!

Author's Response:

Oh! Thank you, wantmoretwilightnow!

So lovely to read your reviews...and the STARS are fabulous!

I had one reviewer say he should have been left in that COFFIN for just a WHILE longer...LOL...

I think he beat HIMSELF up pretty badly...!!!

Yes, a bit "neat" but there are other ANGST filled stories that can be found that make him SUFFER...and she did make him WAIT for three months...LOL

Thanks for reading, sweetie!


Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

Oh yes, he did get off too easily, but that is ok. He beat himself up quite a bit!

Author's Response:

Good Morning, jillapet!

He DID beat himself up quite a bit...and then she made him

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

I think that was very fitting, even of he's really not that sorry after all! And I love that jasper gets bragging rights!

Author's Response:

Good evening, snowgood!

I think he was sorry...some, anyway!

Jasper, such a smug guy right now!!!

More tomorrow!


Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

That would be difficult to bear, even for a vampire. Listening to all the thoughts and spoken words. Knowing it's all your fault. It wouldn't bother someone with no conscience, but that's certainly not Edward. He's no doubt in a hurry to get back home to see his mate, who he was somehow able to turn and not kill. He had to have wanted her enough to keep her forever!

Author's Response:

Good evening, Kathy!

I think that was QUITE the punishment for poor Edward.  He HAD been a bad boy, but this was tough...

NICE guesses!!!

Answers coming TUESDAY!


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

looking forward to more

Author's Response:

MORE...answers...coming Tuesday!

Thanks for reading, hc4metal...and for those lovely stars!


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good job

Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

Can't wait

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Hayesmom!


Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 2

oooo he has a pissed off newborn at home who is gonna totally kick his sparkly volvo driving ass... and then show him the meaning of newborn lust... I HOPE!

Author's Response:

That's a nice guess, jullapet!

You made me laugh!

Hope to see you Tuesday when the next bit posts...


Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 2

Only one chapter dedicated to Bella being a vampire...?  Ahhh... that's only a tease!  :-)

Thanks for sharing your talent and YES, nicely done.

Author's Response:

Good morning, JRParz!  Thanks for reading and those lovely STARS!

Ah, it's almost 3K words in the next bit...and explains a few things...!!!

Hope to see you Tuesday!


Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ah, you DID update! :P Well that was very well done, lol. I look forward to it :) Though I had the feeling she was alive the entire chapter, so it wasn't as subtle as you'd think ;) Two things... 1. If they were to never find Bella's body, why are there ashes? and 2. He's supposed to be playing dead xD aka not breathing. He can't smell salty tears if he's not breathing ! :P that was fun lol. /stayingtuned!

Author's Response:

Hi, Nali! Yep, updated...AND the final chapter and a short epilogue will post on Tuesday.

Good guess

Okay, your two things:

1...they did find a small piece of Bella's flesh...from her thigh.  They cremated that bit and put it in the urn.

2...Hmmm...he *probably* took a small breath, small enough that the humans couldn't just check his surroundings.

That works, right?

Thanks for reading, and hope to see you Tuesday!


Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

She'd have to be Dead-ish.  Bella is screaming as Edward drinks her, so he didn't kill her instantly.  And He could hear his siblings coming to stop him, so as soon as they arrived, they'd throw him off her and she'd turn.  I think he knew that.  He wanted to keep her forever and only fought biting her long enough to get to the point where his brothers and sisters could stop him.  that's why he says at the end, "I Hope," because he doesn't want her completely dead. 

Author's Response:

I love your thoughts on this, sevanderslice!

I've got the new chapter in the line, hopefully you'll see it soon!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Do you even have to ask? Bella gives the answer when she admits that she is his. If she wakes up a vampire, she'll still be Edward's. Bella may be ticked that he didn't ask, but she is fated to be Edward's for all time. I look forward to the epilogue.

Author's Response:

Hi Kathy! I I've been sidetracked by EAC...there will be one more bit here...!!!


Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Damn. That's a tough choice. That would be an awesome one-shot, but it also has the potential for so much more... I guess the question boils down to: do we really want to see what happens next? Considering how this story has gone... I would have to say.... no. It would be a great story, but I just feel like it should end there. Damn, it was good.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Nali!

I do think she's deadISH...and there will be one more bit to this...I was sidetracked by EAC...!!!


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