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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
oh no oh no oh no!!!!
Look forward to more so excited post again soon!!!! Love love love You made my ne year so far with this update woo hoo!!!
Reviewer: snowball64 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
For personal reasons I normally loathe fics where one or other of the partners are unfaithful so I anticipated reading one chapter and then being too uncomfortable to read the rest. I was wrong. Edward is particularly seductive in this fic and if a man spoke to me this way I think I too would be hard pushed to resist. I'm champing at the bit for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 10
*THUD* Oh my God, I'm worn out, if I was a smoker I'd need a fag, lol.
I think it's safe to say Bella's found exactly what she didn't know she was looking for. Whilst Edward isn't busy with Bella do you think you could air mail him to me, I'll be gentle with him.....I promise, hahaha!!!
Fantastic chapter and now that I'm all caught up I'll have to wait for you to update, so please update soon I'm not above begging.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 9
That's evil leaving off there, thank God I don't have to wait for the update. I had to laugh after all Bella's thoughts about carrying on with her dull and boring life and seeing where this led her she tosses back the remainder of her wine 'No one ever had called her a coward.' Classic line.
How did I find your story? I was looking for something else, can't remember what now but it's not on here, anyway it was the banner and the tag line that sucked me in and boy am I glad it did, this story is fantastic. I do love a good BDSM story *grins*.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ok, so who was leaning against the wall? Is it someone from Houston? Is Emmett having Bella followed to see if she's being unfaithful? Lol, I'm always asking questions in this story.
Bella and Emmett are really going to need to talk and sort something out because even kids as small as Adam can tell when things are not right.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
It seems to me that a religious upbringing is never any good, there never seems to be any kind of balance struck. I feel sorry for Emmett that he feels that way and can't speak out properly about what he wants....or is it just with Bella? Does she intimidate him? I mean she's very in control of everything, almost seeming to take a very male roll in their relationship.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my God, I really wasn't expecting that, I'm shocked. There has to be some explanation, surely Edward wouldn't murder anyone let alone his sub.
Alice said previously that Edward had been active on the scene until about a year ago....when was his dead sub found? Was it a year ago or fairly recent? Who found her, was it Edward? How did she die? *Whispers* What's Bella going to do?
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 5
Is this going to be a real struggle for Bella to give in to these wants and desires, relinquish her control over what she perceives to be right and proper? She's already battling but then again, this is her first time. I think she'll be hooked and quite shocked at herself that she is. How will she reconcile this with her marriage to Emmett?
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh Bella, what are you letting yourself in for, lol, as if she didn't know. She loves that he dominates her even though it conflicts with that independent I'm in charge woman part of her. Wouldn't it be true to say that we all like a little domination at some point, to relinquish control and just go with it and enjoy? It doesn't mean that you're less of a woman, less of a person.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 3
So is it just work with Emmett and Rose or is there more to it? Bella's bound to be more suspicious now that she's seen the photo of her, I know I would be.
It seems that Bella is really starting to think about discovering herself does she realise what she asked or was it really her subconscious taking over?
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hmm, well, I never thought that Emmett would be having an affair, or is there a twist to that? I'm just going off the frown on his face, he could have been frowning though because she's not supposed to text him. I could drive myself mad, lol.
Bella's getting braver and more curious, she's right though, Edward is entirely too dangerous, but I can't wait for them to go discovering together, haha!
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooh I like this. Hmm what will Bella do? Her meeting Edward and finding out that he's into BDSM has certainly piqued her interest to say the least. Would she leave Emmett to pursue this or cheat on him? Would he be an 'understanding' husband that let his wife explore this area without him or would he want to join her? This throws up so many questions, I'm dying to find out where this goes.
Jane x
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm totally into this story.
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh my, what is going on here? She and Em cheating on one another?
Reviewer: batonrougesweetie (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ah, no need to wrestle I will gladly give you a review! :) I was surprised that Bella gave such a fight. I'm use to authors making Bella hopless pushover, what a very very pleasant surprise! I'm still sitting on the edge of my seat with the Bella and Emmett drama. I do hope that Adam won't be too hurt in the process. But everyone knows that divorce can be hard on the child. So hopefully its not too hard. Now no more wrestling more writing, Doll! :D
Reviewer: beammeup_00 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hawt. I've reread the last half of this several times. The atmospherics are excellent. Spellbinding.
Reviewer: sophdrea (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow, this chapter was amazing, and so HOT!!! Edward just wasn't going to let her say no again, was he? I think he realized he was going to have to force her, or she would never let herself give in to her needs. This story is just so good. Your writing is excellent. Thanks for the great fun!!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
totally loving this story looking forward to more
Reviewer: 11mousy (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
This story is great! I will wrestle for more updates !
Reviewer: 11mousy (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow -great end to a chapter!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, she's hooked. she has yet to be punished for the evading stunt...right?
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
Damn that was hot. Edward is extremely hot when he is in control. Loved it. Their little struggle time, wrestling before sex....mmmm...mmmm...mmmmm. Very interesting. I see fun times ahead. Yes sir!!! fun times! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
I don`t think you need to wrestle us for reviews...that was a great chapter :)*
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
Why'd she put up a fight? To ease her guilt & shame? Or was it just to be defiant?
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